| #1 Barage (160.10.203.112)[11842] |
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*Grumble* Every time I Copy and Paste anything I end up with the report/story getting too many line breaks. It seems even reformatting to remove them doesn't catch all of them. Apologies.
Oh well, other then the semi-poor job I did, the story is great. Humans trying to mimic the protoss (and it seems she might succeed), templar, and a Bengalaas too boot (I can already see the color of the creature as well ;) ). Great job and keep it up.
Sf. "Never checks his e-mail oftain enough for decency" Barage |
| #2 DFA (12.8.134.194)[11845] |
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That was GREAT!! You've done it now, popular demand, demands more! Keep up the great writing. That really pulled me into the story=]
DFA |
| #3 Mark4 (strangers.bragg.army.mil)[11850] |
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| Bengalaas! Any story with bengalaas kick's ass =] |
| #4 Annie47 (spider-tn084.proxy.aol.com)[11854] |
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As all ways thank you barage, Any comments or Q's plz post them :D
Love ya |
| #5 Annie47 (spider-tn084.proxy.aol.com)[11855] |
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OMH! i noticed a part wasn't included, in the beging and the end this line should be there
<Castallas...Come to us...Save us...>
that is what woke Cast up in the beging. Sorry for the confusion |
| #6 Annie47 (spider-tn084.proxy.aol.com)[11856] |
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for some reason the part wasn't included there two...
the line is "Castallas...Come to us...Save us..." |
| #7 .Praetor (fjwilson.reshall.ucsd.edu)[11857] |
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Khala.
And I love it! |
| #8 TheRubberDucky (dfiatx100-044.dsl.gtei.net)[11864] |
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| Copy cat!!! By Unpopular Demand.... |
| #9 Annie47 (spider-wd021.proxy.aol.com)[11867] |
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| i never picked the name :P |
| #10 MasterOfMordor (cacheengine2.mosquitonet.com)[11869] |
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| Annie, don't forget about posting it at infoceptor. They accept all SC stories... so you've got nothing to lose! :D |
| #11 Barage (160.10.203.112)[11889] |
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Blame me for the title. I couldn't think of another title to give it (sorry if I breached copyright, never did it on purpose).
As I said, I ended up doing a semi-poor job. I'm hoping it doesn't end up penalizing the story. If anything, drop a number from the next BR I do (once I can find a good story to write *GRUMBLE*) |
| #12 T.T.Boy (ncache1.ford.com)[11917] |
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| Another good installment. Annie47 for the Noble Prize for Literature. Oh wait, that German guy who wrote Tin Drum just won it, darn. Maybe next year Annie. |
| #13 CHINKenstein (spider-wg031.proxy.aol.com)[11978] |
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great writing, Annie
YOU ROCK! |
| #14 Mr. Merf (dial-up212.twistedpair.net)[11980] |
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Mmmm, good story. Send us some more.;-) S'more, get it? HEHEHE ha ha hahhh, cackle, wheeze, choke, strangled and airless cackle, giggle. Ahem.
Good story! |
| #15 Jedi_Girl (std118.dorms1.macalester.edu)[11995] |
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| Nice story! Keep it up! |
| #16 Someone you all know =) (209-30-240-234.flash.net)[12019] |
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Yeah, they're good. I was thinking about writing my own story, and then this came up! wah.... I really liek them and all, but it would be better if they were longer...if I was to write a story it would be a lot different, but I can't say it would be better...
peace
Me...
Yeah, you know me.......
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| #17 brian bundrick (spider-wd054.proxy.aol.com)[12684] |
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i win you lose cuz you suck and i dont
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| #18 brian bundrick (spider-wd054.proxy.aol.com)[12685] |
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do you know how i know you, <whispering>cuz im stalking you. hehe he ehehehe haha ahahahahah HAHAHAHAHAHAHH. im coming for you...........
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| #19 Anonymous (spider-wc053.proxy.aol.com)[12824] |
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| Brian is disturbed,but that was a good story,whens part 3? |
| #20 MikeyG. (linux.stillwater.k12.mn.us)[13056] |
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| Good job sweetie ;) |