| #1 Limp_Bizkit666 (156-pool4.ras10.calan.agisdial.net)[18023] |
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whoops, well, whatcha think?
i will try to incorporate as much SC info as possible, but remember that any similar events or names are coincidental...this is only a fiction and was not intended to offend anyone...
hehe
anyways, hope ya like it..and may this become as famous as the uh......other one. hehe
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| #2 Knecht (dialup-209.244.121.233.Boston1.Level3.net)[18030] |
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| Damn I never get to have real first comment. but this is the closest I've EVER GOTTEN!!!! Woo hoo! 2nd comment and 1st non-author comment! |
| #3 [MrFurious] (bha3-s37.mtl.colba.net)[18041] |
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To paraphrase a line often heard on B.Net:
Go! Go! Go!
Cheers,
MrFurious |
#4  (fjwilson.reshall.uc[18072] |
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Everyone's got to start somewhere Laean! I will admit I have a few broken and forgotten projects laying around. One story about Privateer comes to mind....
In any case, Limp, the prolouge was definitly good enough for you to get into the meat of the story. Just two things: I liked the astrology, but how would the main character know how big a rhino is? |
| #5 Limp_Bizkit666 (150-pool2.ras10.calan.agisdial.net)[18088] |
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ah, thanks for the comments...
well, i do have a basic back bone of the story as well as specific events the character will go true. my ambitions say i want to write three 'novels' with one of each race, but i don't think i will have the energy..maybe.
well, i am 19 and a student....
about the main character,...his dad was a scientist also, an astrophysicts like me..hehe, and the son had many encounters with science itself. the discovery channel really does the job also, but i think the realistic holographic images played a huge role...
p.s. --it is ASTRONOMY not astrology. i know alot of people confuse the two, but IMHO, astrology is not even science, and nothing more than a bogus crap to make money...
thanks, and hope you guys keep on reading... |
| #6 Superman (206.117.125.116)[18162] |
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i rate this as 100.
so cool and og. i don't think you are at a level .Praetor is at though. he even got a 10 on his first chronicle, and you are not even yet rated.
The story line seem interesting but keep up the good work. |
| #7 Limp_Bizkit666 (63-pool1.ras10.calan.agisdial.net)[18188] |
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<html>
<body>
<font size=14>YEAH!!!!</font size=14>
just to inform you guys that i learned HTML...hehe
i will try to make the story more interesting and easier to read...thanks BR.com for making me realize how easy HTML is...
just to celebrate, my exposive debut of PICTURE..
<center><img c:windowsdesktopscreen~1test.bmp></center>
hehe,
byeya
</body>
</html> |
| #8 Limp_Bizkit666 (63-pool1.ras10.calan.agisdial.net)[18189] |
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damn, nevermind....i have more work to do.
i read a lot of stuff on html, but do you really need a picture to be already uploaded o n internet?
i tried to load it straight from my hard drive, but i guess it don't work....
arggggg
im tryiing, please help |
| #9 CrudSucker (loneranger.airswitch.com)[18794] |
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| Hi Limp! I wrote a sucky br about us losing, but it was my first one. They'll get better, right? Just say yes. Nice prologue, I'm one of those people who tried writing something but didn't have the stamina to finish. I have 4 books 3 chapters or so in, and I forgot where they were all heading. Ah well, sweet prologe, and your html is hurting, but it will get better = ). Have fun <font size=6 color=teal> <b> ADIOS </b> </font> |
| #10 Limp_Bizkit666[49850] |
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wheee!
11th comment!
hehe
this was my "breakthrough" fiction..
but i still haven't finished it... omg, i'm soo lazy.
anyways, i have the story in mind, but i just keep procrastinating.. blah blah..
byeya
p.s-yes, i'm a commenting rampage on all my previous reports.. |
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