| #1 Annie47 (spider-tn022.proxy.aol.com)[19275] |
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I did this myself! Many thanks to .Preator. The verson under this is really messed and doesn't have act 7 so please don't comment on it and let the great people who run the site deal with it. Thanks for reading everyone.
Annie47 |
| #2 Limp_Bizkit666 (28-pool3.ras10.calan.agisdial.net)[19278] |
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hehe, hello
anyways, did you read my rebuttal to your comment?
anyways, i copy-pasted your post into microsoft word and thinking about printing it....hehe
i have not yet read part two, but so far, it looks good..
keep on going......
p/s-praetor, pleease read my comments...hehe
byeya and keep it WAY UP! |
| #3 Annie47 (spider-tn022.proxy.aol.com)[19280] |
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i have seen BRs (mainly recently) shorter then your rebuttal!
I get where your coming from Limp.
Annie47 |
| #4 ko[B]ull (sdn-ar-001inindiP070.dialsprint.net)[19281] |
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| very nice, but a little confusing, did the commander die? who got killed by the "shady figure" when he said no more sufering and it showed in his eyes? those are what got me.. and who is Bob? other than that good i give it a 7 =D |
| #5 ~Talon~ (cx110054-a.pwy1.sdca.home.com)[19282] |
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| Are you writing a story? Play? Or is this a new way to compose BR's? It was very good by the way, I just would like to know what the purpose is. |
| #6 Limp_Bizkit666 (122-pool2.ras10.calan.agisdial.net)[19288] |
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well, its for entertainment.....
to give pleeasure around to ones who need them....
anyways, i'm sorry to annie for doing this, but i am going to ad...
if you loved Annie's story, as you people prolly are, please read MY STORY TOO.....they are cool i think.....
please read and comment...i already have people helping me out, but 50 heads are greeater than 10...
anyways, annie, Keep it up. |
| #7 Annie47 (spider-wc021.proxy.aol.com)[19306] |
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Talon search my names and it will make more sense to you and ko[b]ull, think about it.
No more suffering his eyes pleaded...hmm
Phade ignighted his warpblade...hmm what are those thingys used for? I try not to spell everything out for you guys!
Annie47 |
| #8 Jedi Girl (std137.dorms1.macalester.edu)[19354] |
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| Nice story:) Keep up the good work! |
| #9 AnderKryst (edjproxy1.edwardjones.com)[19487] |
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Kewll...'nother gud enstalmint. :)
Keep it up :) |
#10  (relay.atinc.com)[20103] |
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He should have EMP nuked... or maybe teamed up with a defiler and plague EMP nuked, with 12 yamato support...
Stupid flame guy! I hope they kill him soon! He's a meanie. |
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