| #1 {DD}Fatboy[24697] |
| 1Cust117.tnt3.sfo1.da.uu.net |
| Damn. Well, whatever, I guess this is ok. |
| #2 Sp|nE[24699] |
| dialup1925-pri.voicenet.com |
| Try pushing enter next time. Paragraphs are a good thing. |
| #3 [z]RubberDucky[24704] |
| dfiatx100-044.dsl.gtei.net |
| Try next time. It's a good thing. |
| #4 {DD}Fatboy[24705] |
| 1Cust126.tnt1.sfo2.da.uu.net |
I know, sorry. I forgot to turn off disable BR tags.
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| #5 ~Talon~[24712] |
| cx110054-a.pwy1.sdca.home.com |
Just a few things:
1. You never mentioned the map (I'm assuming it was on dire)
2. Paragraphs
3. "Two scourges crashede into it"
4. Pictures (optional) |
| #6 Celedor[24753] |
| 203.172.6.111 |
| What the guy above me said. He sez it all. He rocks. |
| #7 Celedor[24756] |
| 203.172.6.111 |
| What the guy above me said. He sez it all. He rocks. |
| #8 Celedor[24758] |
| 203.172.6.111 |
| Hmm.. What an interesting result. I didn't intend the second post, but.. hey, it fits! :P |
| #9 AnderKryst[24921] |
| edjproxy2.edwardjones.com |
Bleck...
Hit return on accident and made a blank post (so much for refresh), and then find someone is spamming the comments...(got my refresh!)
No, someone isn't going to get banned now...
Anyways, to the author: paragraphs help. Anything the looks like a mess will discourage readers, and most likely provoke nasty responses. |
| #10 Krebster[24928] |
| spider-wm071.proxy.aol.com |
| that crazy spamming bastard wins the "most comments in a row award" his prize, being banned(at least one would think) |
| #11 AnderKryst[24931] |
| edjproxy1.edwardjones.com |
What's worse is he's probably 10.
If he is any older than that, then he should be shot in order to prevent any 'contribution' (re: harm) to the gene pool. |
| #12 AxeGrinder01[25348] |
| GDFKB105-45.splitrock.net |
Good first report. Do the paragraph thing. Maybe more in game info. You sort of dropped out at the end. Keep trying though.
Peace
Axe |