| #1 Peon_Harraser[33867] |
| spider-ti053.proxy.aol.com |
| Not to bad a report. If you had thought of it pics would have been good. Also some more detail would be good. Good luck with future reports. |
| #2 Sp|nE[33873] |
| dialup0339-pri.voicenet.com |
| you're almost there |
| #3 Barage[33877] |
| dialup-63.210.76.142.Atlanta1.Level3.net |
Not bad. I liked the work on the table at the start. It had a casual "this happened, then this and this and that and oww, that hurt" feel to it, which would appeal to some. Myself, I'm more into storybook style; the more you can explain the better. "send out an attack that failed" could instead be "sent 2 control groups of marines that fell to psi storm". For the epic battles, talk of what micro was used ("as the enemy came in, the player ran up the ramp to defend while the psi storms starting falling" and some such). Knowing exact numbers are nice, though not needed; just make sure we get the impression of the army sizes "It's bigger then your dad after thanksgiving!!" (umm. perhaps not that way :P)
In other words; just work on the details and you'll rock. |
| #4 Master-Binjured[33895] |
| 1Cust45.tnt2.sylvania.oh.da.uu.net |
| All: Thanks |
| #5 dr_scribble[33896] |
| proxy1.atl.prodigy.net |
| damn u reports are hard to please. for his last report u give him a 7 for having too many pics and bad margins. This time hechanges all of it taking ojut the pics and making it readable, and u guys give him a 7! mark4 writes his reports just like this one and he gets all 9's and 10's. seriously, i thought that it was very good. keep it up binjured |
| #6 dr_scribble[33897] |
| proxy1.atl.prodigy.net |
| i mean u give him a 5. that was a typo |
| #7 Drefsab[33899] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
It seemed like the green and orange team pretty much had the upper hand the entire game. I agree with pretty much everything that has been mentioned so far. Like Barage said, "more details."
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