| #1 AdmiralPlinko[35063] |
| clarc-dhcp-148.cc.rochester.edu |
| First! |
| #2 <marquee>Limp_Bizkit666</marquee>[35065] |
| cerebus.smc.edu |
shit, i thought i was gonna be first...
DAMN YOU ADMIRAL!!! NO ONE EVEN KNOWS YOU!!!!
therefore, i'm the REAL first commentor, that is relevant to the report....
I LOVED your report, man..next time, write one of when you guys play in 7 in the morning...hehehehe
p.s-<font color="red" size="1">hehe, didn't read it.....yet....hehhe</font color="red" size="1">
byeya |
| #3 <font color=blue>AdmiralPlinko</font>[35071] |
| clarc-dhcp-148.cc.rochester.edu |
You have very good pictures, and I like the different shapes of the borders, but you need to develop your writing style a little more. I know you said you were Swedish, so I can understand if you make a few spelling and grammer errors, but even without them the report was a little hard to follow. It's still a good first report though, and if you keep trying you will get much better at it. Take a look at some of the other writers' first reports. You can really see how they improved over time, so don't be discouraged if you get a lot of criticism. Another tip is try to report games that were either very humorous or exciting. It's very hard to make a good report from a boring game, but a great game almost writes itself.
And again I say FIRST! |
| #4 Tariq[35073] |
| 198.168.49.221 |
hummm
short and sweet
strong |
| #5 probe[35075] |
| 242849hfc132.tampabay.rr.com |
ya
don't pick hunters tho, the raters will kill yer rating :(
PS- this is not "Mepheus" from nwtr
=p |
| #6 BW-sux[35079] |
| spider-wm067.proxy.aol.com |
The raters hate hunters. Report gameson non-hunters or non-mucho-money maps (preferrably Ladder maps)
<font-color=6> BW-sux |
| #7 BW-sux[35080] |
| spider-wm067.proxy.aol.com |
The raters hate hunters. Report games on non-hunters or non-mucho-money maps (preferrably Ladder maps.
<font-color=6> BW-sux |
| #8 BW-sux[35081] |
| spider-wm067.proxy.aol.com |
| I HATE SPAMMING!!!!! |
| #9 Sp|nE[35083] |
| dialup1732-pri.voicenet.com |
| shut up and read/comment on my br |
| #10 Meph[35086] |
| t2o955p76.telia.com |
| The map was Hunters and I cant do much about and yes it was quite a boring game but I made my best.. so for now I´ll be back (T2) |
| #11 probe[35087] |
| 242849hfc132.tampabay.rr.com |
the graphics / html were awesome tho, so all u gotta do is
get better games to br, better maps
and u got
9's and 10's
yay:)
btw spine, mark4 is gay. |
| #12 Syndrome Zed[35089] |
| wmb6217-daley.neuro.emory.edu |
A very good first try!
With the understanding that you're in ESL (English as a Second Language) territory, the report was pretty well written. The graphics were not overdone, and not just slapped in randomly either. The only thing missing was a little more detail, and a less lopsided game to report (I know, it wasn't your fault the game was weak). And in your lessons, don't refer to something in game that you don't report - that would be the Maphacking accusations. I like your showing the mini-map "evidence", but you should mention his shouting Maphacker in the report too. If nothing else, it's always good for a laugh from the rest of us :).
All in all, pretty nice report! Keep it up! |
| #13 Meph[35092] |
| t2o955p76.telia.com |
THX for the good (and bad) feedback
Keep it up |
| #14 tokenresistance[35096] |
| erbium-asy-36.rutgers.edu |
| very good first effort. good storytelling, pics well chosen and well placed. :) |
| #15 Talon[35103] |
| cx110054-a.pwy1.sdca.home.com |
| Gosu pictures huk huk ^^ |
| #16 Fox^1[35139] |
| csdi2-proxy.support.compaq.com |
Comment #17 Your a retard and I hope you get raped by your own dog.
Fox^1 |
| #17 Fox^1[35140] |
| csdi2-proxy.support.compaq.com |
(@#*$&(@#*$&#($ !!!!!!
;)
Spam is cool
Fox^1 |
| #18 {WarTroll}[35149] |
| c738099-a.aurora1.co.home.com |
| I think that report is kewl, and fox is just mad because he has affairs with men daily. |
| #19 Fox^1[35150] |
| csdi2-proxy.support.compaq.com |
If I had affairs with men daily then i think that I would be happy. It would have probably would have been better to say that I was mad because I was raped by men. People usually are happy not mad when they have affairs.
I understand that your probably angry because the man you were having an affair with dumped you for someone more chobo than you are. Of course this comment is just for fun I really don't mean that. Your probably a sexy guy with a sexy women...... Will you have an affair with me?
Fox^1 |
| #20 BBoy[35168] |
| gw1.finspong.se |
I liked this report!
I'ts much better than mine are used to be =P
We won this game even if i played like my granny but....
I look forward to your next battlereport(s)
Cya! |
| #21 [Chaos]Calvin[35175] |
| 195.249.56.3 |
| Nice report. Good to see the Scandinaviens are posting on br.com too. Hejsan-hejsan fra en Dansker ;) |
| #22 <font color=blue>Admiral</font><font color=green>Plinko</font>[35183] |
| clarc-dhcp-126.cc.rochester.edu |
| I think Fox^1 is still traumatized by comment #58 on Sp|ne's report. I'm sure the insanity is only temporary. |
| #23 Fox^1[35235] |
| csdi2-proxy.support.compaq.com |
Admiral you have no idea how much comment 58 has fucked me up!
Fox^1 |
#24  [35355] |
| 98CACE49.ipt.aol.com |
I thought the writing was pretty good and the graphics were good too. Some nice screenshots in there. My only problem is with the game. The game didn't provide much of anything exciting to read about. One double rush and the game was basically over.
A very good first attempt. I would strongly suggest looking for a better game to report on next time... :-)
7
Dref |
| #25 ebola[35361] |
| 195.198.187.103 |
hmm yeah it was a boring game, but since they are from Sweden it upps the rating quite a lot, hmm (I'm from Sweden 2) Mkt fin rapport, fast rapporter blir mkt roligare om det är en roligare match, PS aldrig sett er online (ni online för sent mina vänner :) )
Yeye I'd give it a 6 maybe 7 but i hate double rush.. |
| #26 D$^Gob_X[35409] |
| ns.wsd1.org |
Bad game, good report man!
You an better use Enlgish grammer! |
| #27 MORBID ANGEL RULZ![35410] |
| ns.wsd1.org |
| DOMINATION! Man they are cool, go to deathmetal.com if your into heavy music! |
| #28 Shreddling[118553] |
| s30-24.anoka.k12.mn.us |
| Man this site sux i will own all you motafuckers |
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