| #1 Naveed[39039] |
| pcp017747pcs.tc.tufts.edu |
1st!
I hope it isn't too terrible. =( |
| #2 Gantris[39047] |
| proxy2.fmhe1.ab.wave.home.com |
Well I liked the shiny warp thingy. The visuals of the report were not to bad (ok images, easy to read, and was not too wide) But the actual report I have to say wasn't all the great =(
4 or 5 or 6
Gantris
/<ill or be /<illed |
| #3 Gantris[39048] |
| proxy2.fmhe1.ab.wave.home.com |
Well I liked the shiny warp thingy. The visuals of the report were not to bad (ok images, easy to read, and was not too wide) But the actual report I have to say wasn't all the great =(
4 or 5 or 6
Gantris
/<ill or be /<illed |
| #4 Gantris[39049] |
| proxy2.fmhe1.ab.wave.home.com |
Well I liked the shiny warp thingy. The visuals of the report were not to bad (ok images, easy to read, and was not too wide) But the actual report I have to say wasn't all the great =(
4 or 5 or 6
Gantris
/<ill or be /<illed |
| #5 Gantris[39050] |
| proxy2.fmhe1.ab.wave.home.com |
| sorry my comp keeps refreshing... |
| #6 Jamellan[39052] |
| aden2-143.resnet.Colorado.EDU |
| sorry my comp keeps refreshing.....DOH!!! |
| #7 (=--o--=)[39079] |
| 1Cust116.tnt46.chi5.da.uu.net |
NO NO NO!!!!!!!!! THE LIGHT, THE BLINDING LIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
GOOD BR ANYWAYS O WELLS I AM 7NTH. |
| #8 Naveed[39080] |
| pcp017747pcs.tc.tufts.edu |
Argh, I can't tell time! =P Yellow warped in at the 9:00 position not 3:00. My bad
~Naveed |
| #9 Taco[39104] |
| spider-wm011.proxy.aol.com |
| I thought it was very funny. Especially the part about the "fabled depot push". If I could rate I'd give it a 7 or 8. The only reason for no 9 was that it didn't have the bells and whistles that a good report has. Also the game sucked. |
| #10 ~total~[39134] |
| sy-ce-02.free.net.au |
an 7 or an 8
come on.. i think 6.
But anywayz i liked the touch of humour with the mighty depot push aswell. practice makes perfect.
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| #11 BW-sux[39169] |
| bess-proxy.ba.k12.ok.us |
| I give it a 7 for the aforementioned reasons. |
| #12 Naveed[39181] |
| pcp017747pcs.tc.tufts.edu |
Thanks for the comments everyone. =) This report wasn't intended to be Pulitzer prize winning writing...I know it wasn't the best. I'm going to work on the writing style on my next report. Hopefully I'll be able to find a decent game so I can get more into it ya know? I also apologize for the yellow on white...it looks horrible, but I didn't know how to change the background color. Also, if someone could recommend an animator I'd be very grateful. =) Again, thanks for the comments!
~Naveed |
| #13 SqueakyMonkey[39192] |
| osh1-7e4.twcny.rr.com |
| Naveed was Our Lady Peace's best album. The best song was Supersatellite. I have to go read this now. |
| #14 Naveed[39193] |
| pcp017747pcs.tc.tufts.edu |
Hell yeah it was SqueakyMonkey. That whole album just rocks. =)
~Naveed |
| #15 SqueakyMonkey[39194] |
| osh1-7e4.twcny.rr.com |
<i>"Unfortunately the fabled 'Depot Push' never made it past the first depot and we will never know the glory that could possibly have been achieved."
-Naveed</i><br>
There's a quote for ya Factal.
As for animators, look around for the Alchemy Works Gif Construction Set, it works pretty well, and it's free.<br>
- - Squeaky |
| #16 Strom[39221] |
| ext99.mosx.com |
Reasonable report, but a very weak game. Also it wasn't clear whether the races were chosen or random, which is a good thing to know.
I had a couple of technical quibbles with the report:
Yellow text on a white background is very difficult to read.
The text wrapping around a couple of the pictures looked a bit odd - for example when just the first word of a sentence is wrapped around the picture.
Rating 5 (the report deserved better but the game was just so weak... The terran dude did nothing offensive whatever.)
Strom
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| #17 Ghetto{BC}BC[39222] |
| pc001a-27.cis.uoguelph.ca |
- heh, report lacked something...let's call it heart.
- no hussle either, skip
- that's right, strawberry
Kinda one-sided. I remember doing reports like that. Not very entertaining. I realize there's a big hype to get a good BR in, especially seeing Mark4's mad dope $#%T. I mean, you see that, and say "I can do that!", but then when you get to it, you have to realize you are telling a story. Memories get fuzzy, people make up details. I suggest taking MANY MANY MANY screen shots, and review them after the game. Writing notes while the battle occurs helps. This isn't a live broadcasting. We need more detail
BLAH BLAH BLAH, you can leave now |
#18 [39225] |
| rliv235.infocom.com |
I have no mercy on 1st time reporters... :P
This was definitely not a game worth. I understand that you were trying out your html and such, but really, you waste a lot of people's time when you post such a boring, pointless game. Try to pick a better one next time.
However, you did a good job with the graphics and the fabled depot push quote made it mildly humorous. I think I'll go with a 5 on this one.
Cheers,
Dref |