| #1 JustSayNo[39265] |
| inehou-pxy02.compaq.com |
My #$^& is longer then this report. =[
And that is SMALL :[
Fox^1 |
| #2 Fox^1[39266] |
| inehou-pxy02.compaq.com |
Nothing is more sad, then putting in a smurf, and singing it with the other name =[[
Fox^1
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| #3 Psycho[39270] |
| spider-tf022.proxy.aol.com |
| WHAT?!? I had pictures!! What happened with that? geesh... I had 5 pics and they don't show up? wtf? |
| #4 [39287] |
| sdn-ar-013mokcitP254.dialsprint.net |
| I think he only reported this game so he could write mr. @$$ a bunch of times |
| #5 -[39305] |
| spider-tn073.proxy.aol.com |
listen, you made the same 2 mistakes again:
#1 NO PICS
#2 Its All run together, remember PARAGRAPHS ( i can't stress this enough )
This report was TOO short, too |
#6  [39322] |
| as530065.infocom.com |
Psycho, even if you did have pictures, you didn't have enough text to support them. Describe the battles in detail and use the pics to support your text. Don't count on pics to tell the story for you. That is the lazy man's way.
Also, use paragraphs and space things out. It makes the report easier to read and helps the reader to distinguish the different parts of the game.
3
Dref |
| #7 Psycho[39353] |
| spider-wd082.proxy.aol.com |
| Oh well, Dref, do you know what happened with the pics anyway? After I submitted the pics it said, "Cannot find 'www.battlereports.com/reports/2534/pics' at Port 118." or something very close to that, I had 5 pics that woulda helped out |
| #8 [39363] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
Psycho, I'm sorry, I don't know... post it in the forum asking JV. He wrote all the code for this site. I always embed HTML into my report. I don't use the image attacher.
Dref |
| #9 Strom[39409] |
| ext195.mosx.com |
Dref is cool, so I agree with him. :) More paragraphs!
The flow of the mid-game wasn't very clear. Suddenly both players are running out of minerals and yet it's unclear that either have really made any units to speak of.
The beginning build orders aren't very useful : 9-10 probes, scout, then build pylons doesn't work.
Do they only have two gates each at the end? How large are their armies? Do they have upgrades?
A better game would have been useful, although not too many protoss ones last all that long.
Rating 4
Strom |
| #10 Neal64[51457] |
| spider-tp083.proxy.aol.com |
| i didnt read it yet but it looked kinda kewl cuz it had HTML. 4 I SAY, 4! |
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