| #1 Sp|nE[45110] |
| dialup0147-pri.voicenet.com |
me>jesus
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| #2 Talon[45111] |
| cx110054-a.pwy1.sdca.home.com |
omfgay
when i clicked on report 1 second ago it said no comments
LAMER!
SPINE IS A LAMER!
suck |
| #3 Starookie[45112] |
| edtn009740.hs.telusplanet.net |
| bleh....this report needs work, but nice use of those flashy words.....stoic for instance...(whatever the hell that means) |
| #4 Sp|nE[45113] |
| dialup0147-pri.voicenet.com |
nice text only
a pity noone will read it |
| #5 Starookie[45116] |
| edtn009740.hs.telusplanet.net |
| Spine's mean |
| #6 Phuckin-Retard[45125] |
| lldslppp117.phnx.uswest.net |
This report blows, I merely read the first paragraph and startest to dose off looking at the ceiling.
Whoever made this wasted 15+ minutes writing it. |
| #7 me[45162] |
| cr331728-a.wlfdle1.on.wave.home.com |
| what the hell ppl..this is his first battlereport..cut him some slack. It takes practice to be a good BR'er. And i'm assuming Sp|ne is joking. Plz. |
| #8 Limp_BIzkit666[45190] |
| 206.117.45.185 |
hehehehehhe sp|ne = dope... hhahahahahahha
it is partially true, especially because someone rated it already AHEAD OF 8 OTHER NOT YET RATED BRs....
a 6 isn't going to advertise "this is a good br from a totally new writer... therefore, read this damnit!"..
so, i feel sorry for him..
oh well.
byeya
p.s-READ MINE INSTEAD! HAHAHHAHA |
| #9 Aquamarine[45196] |
| 204.164.199.59 |
| hey i thought it was pretty good.....nice vocab, and you described it well....no errors like the guy after you. with pics, i give it a 7. w/o i give it a 6 |
| #10 Sp|nE[45245] |
| dialup12x42-pri.voicenet.com |
| i was serious. this guy is a pretty good writer. |
| #11 Sonneillon[45256] |
| prnask01d02010176.sk.sympatico.ca |
Ah ah ah Sp|ne. I actually did start reading this, and did enjoy it. Somehow this reminded of Dev's excellent text only reports back in the old days. Not too shabby, and a 6 is a respecable rating for it.
The Insane Goatee
Sonneillon |
| #12 Goldenscale[45528] |
| citgo-bh.citgo.com |
I thought this was a good attempt for a first BR, especially one that's text only. A couple pointers:
1. If you can in the future, include pics. This is often difficult when playing in the game you are BR'ing (thus, save BR'ing for observed games)
2. Try to be even MORE descriptive of the battles. It's nice to know what units were used, but say how they were used. For instance, you said the zergie came at you with queens....what did he do with them? Descriptions of some of the spellcasting, as well as of the fighting in general, will add to your score.
3. You mentioned once what your upgrades were, but it's good to try to include what they are at different points in the game, like prior to or during attacks (again, I know all of this is difficult to do in a game you are playing, thus see #1)
4. Ignore the people that are jerk-offs that often post here (you know who you are), and give BR'ing another shot in a game you are not playing in. You write well, use correct grammar and spelling, and use some interestingly flowery language :) Keep up the good work.
The 6 received was about right....just keep workin on it :)
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| #13 Gob_DaBong[45543] |
| ns.wsd1.org |
| .......THIS REPORT SUCKS HAHHAHAHAHAHAAHAH |
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