| #1 Joo[46650] |
| sdn-ar-005mokcitP297.dialsprint.net |
First mistake: try reporting a game you aren't playing, it will be much easier and of a much higher quality.
Second mistake: one HUGE paragraph, try breaking it up into at least 3 paragraphs, early game, mid game, and end game.
Third mistake: report on a longer game, no one likes to read short reports on short games.
Let's see more |
| #2 Kralgon[46651] |
| wk111o.bum.bvsd.k12.co.us |
| uhh.. sorry for being stupid, but what's deep six? |
| #3 .oviedroppings.[46655] |
| spider-wc041.proxy.aol.com |
| HaHa! Third Comment! |
| #4 T|ME(@)~O[46657] |
| proxy2-external.ftwyn1.in.home.com |
LIke I said Joo, its my first br you crackhead.
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| #5 5TH[46658] |
| dialup-209.245.118.237.Weehawken1.Level3.net |
| 5th comment = own =[ |
| #6 Dialtone_[46660] |
| athe530-a067.otenet.gr |
Read the reporting guides ,the link is on the left of your screen.There's a picture uploading tutorial there.Reading the rest of the tuts wont do you bad either &-).It pays of to learn some html too,to make your text more visibly pleasant (like using <font color="white">c</font><font color="blue">o</font><font color="teal">l</font><font color="green">o</font><font color="yellow">r</font>s &-).Oh,and reporting games you play is not so bad btw.I find it easyer to write a report of a game i was part of instead of just watching.
Chon-Chon!
Ps:5th comment you suck! |
#7  [46664] |
| as530074.infocom.com |
hmmm...
Like others have said, the one big long paragraph makes the report tough to read. You might also want to consider reporting on a better game.
Other than that, details, details, details... Troop counts, expansions, battles. Everything in this report seemed rushed.
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Dref |
| #8 Fox^1[46665] |
| csdi2-proxy.support.compaq.com |
Errr when you can fit the entire body of the Battle Report on your screen and it is not a flash, you know there is a problem. Try using paragraphs. By the 10th line you were alread nuking. Um what happened in between? There was at least 10-15 minutes of a game. You did play in the game so it was probably hard remembering what other people did. But still that isn't an excuse for a below average BR
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Fox^1 |
| #9 BW-sux[46668] |
| spider-ti084.proxy.aol.com |
Many problems.
1) You didn't specify what map at the beginning of the report, although I'd bet this game was played on temple.
2) You rushed through some spots of the game.
3) There are Bring guides at the left. I encourage all that try BRing to use them.
3
BW-sux
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| #10 Ashdate[46670] |
| nat208.65.mpoweredpc.net |
Paragraphs do help, but the fact that this is a very short BR (and it sounds like it was a long game) diminishes the quality more in my eyes.
About "Deep six"... I believe I've read it (2 Barracks, 2 Factories, 2 Starports right? Or is that 2 Barracks, 1 Factory, and 3 Starports?), but since it's not a widely know term (as a 6 pool or Turbo-Newbie'in is) you probably should have explained it. Never assume that a person knows an equal amount about the game as you do!
I'd give this a 4. |
| #11 ::nobody::[46671] |
| dt0f4n84.san.rr.com |
Hmm...pretty much what the others have said. Didnt know the map and no paragraphs are tough on the eyes. It was rushed and not very detailed...yada yada...you've heard it already. I actually think this shouldnt get a copper tho...It had lessons learned and i could get the basic gist of the game. You seemed enthusiastic about it, and I want to encourge you to practice some more and come back with another, improved, report :D
Thats why i give you a...
<b> 5</b>
ratings are supposed to help, not hurt. There was some effort in this BR, so i give it a little more credit.
Ciao!
Nobo |
| #12 DancingMidget[46672] |
| 98AB0510.ipt.aol.com |
| Funny how people think that it being their first report means that everyone has to be nice and not offer constructive criticism... |
| #13 [46673] |
| as530074.infocom.com |
hehehe, one thing I forgot...
Deep Six - Six stands for the number of barracks you should have. I believe you only have 1 factory and maybe 2 starports...
The strat is supposed to focus on mass infantry, not nukes.
Dref |
| #14 Limp_Bizkit666[46693] |
| 207.151.116.246 |
just wondering, why are people still rating????
dudes. oh well, it sucked.
byeya
p.s-as others have said, it was like reading one sentence worth a page. very tough. "3" =] |
| #15 Annonymous[46700] |
| AC8E684E.ipt.aol.com |
| Why the hell are Newbies writing these spamming reports these days |
| #16 Justin Credible[46703] |
| nas-23-27.la.navipath.net |
| Fine Battle report that is only missing 2 things; 1 a battle worth writing about; 2 a report worth writing. Like I said its a find report only lacking those 2 qualities |
| #17 Joo[46721] |
| sdn-ar-008mokcitP178.dialsprint.net |
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sorry if this is spam, but that "=" in the last comment was supposed to be a "=" |
| #18 Joo[46722] |
| sdn-ar-008mokcitP178.dialsprint.net |
AGH! you can't put backslashes in the comments???
again, sorry for the spam, i guess i'll have to modify my "unhappy" face =| |
| #19 Homy_F8[46775] |
| user-33qtgoc.dialup.mindspring.com |
BEINGPISSEDOFFISBETTERTHANBEINGPISSEDON.
Dude....<makes his voice intelligence> Indicated by my sources, I believe that we are in fact denying the true essence of the Deep Six. It is actually originated from the idea of a penis of a male entering the vagina of a female as deeply as six inches. This would cause pain and rupturing for the female and is thus called the Deep Six.. Sorry for the adult content....<makes his voice more "homyish" again>....Dude.... |
| #20 ExecutorKronos[46840] |
| ci991207-b.edgewd1.ky.home.com |
Hmmm, try harder and you'll get more than a 2 from me. Paragraphs, HTML and pretty much everything everybody else mentioned already. =)
-2 |
| #21 Jinmaster[46883] |
| 209.185.104.6 |
| After you guys doubled me I floated my buildings why Ox Owned you guys for like 40 minutes until you finally beat him. I watched the whole thing and was giving hi recon on your expansion attempts. You guys didn't secure an expansion for half an hour! Should have asked me to do the BR, at least it would have been more truthful. |
| #22 <font color=yellow>Phoenix</font>[47019] |
| node156e4.a2000.nl |
I <i>might</i> be mistaken, but AFAIK Deep Six is the following.
As Dref said, Six is the number of rax you have in total and indeed relies (sp?) on producing <i>huge</i> amounts of infantry. The Deep part referres to the deep tech you develop.
So, nuking <i>is</i> involved here.
The idea is to make lots of rax and tech all the way up to nukes as fast as possible.
Especially vs. protoss and terran the reason this strat is pretty good, is b/c of ghosts. Lockdown is your friend when fighting vs. BC's and Carriers, the latter of which makes its appearance too often. :(
And besides, nuking is fun.
Don't blame me if I'm wrong. I only read this sometime...
Phoenix |
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