| #1 Jabba_TDA[47312] |
| 194.213.197.14 |
Feel free to flame...
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| #2 loserboye[47313] |
| 24.66.200.212.ab.wave.home.com |
| first non auther comment! :P~ |
| #3 HazarD[47314] |
| netcachesyd3.ozemail.com.au |
| 2nd non-author=own |
| #4 The Asylum[47315] |
| ce-stjh-01-02-e0.cbl.nf.net |
First meaningful comment
The report was pretty good and I can see it getting a gold rating. The HTML was good and it's always nice to have pics. Your writing was pretty good, but I think you might have lost your train of thought when you wrote about Bull's Muta raid(the initial one) because the sentence wasn't coherent at all. In one place, your pic covered up the words so they were unreadable, but it was only a few sentences and I don't think it missed much. Also, a little more detail would have been welcome. You didn't really tell us whenever a person expanded. Near the end, I though red only had the bottom right, and when I looked at the bottom left I saw he had that too. Also, I had no idea that the toss had 5 expansions.
-Little lack of detail
-one misplaced pic
+decent writing
+Good HTML
+Good pics
<u>+Team game not on Temple</u>
A solid rating somewhere between 6 and 8, leaning towards the high side of 7 IMO. |
| #5 DivvyO[47319] |
| kpcrdc.kp.org |
| It took me awhile to figure out that it was a 2v2, maybe you didn't mention it, maybe I was tired, but I was reading the thing thinking "damn these are a lot of gay teamups for what's supposed to be a FFA." Other than that, this report puts mine to shame, so i'd be suprised if it got < = 6. |
| #6 Jabba_TDA[47322] |
| 194.213.197.14 |
Lack of details... Yeah. I intended to write that BR just after the game but I was challenged for 1v1 and kinf of forget about it after. So I was making it after a week or so and I havent recalled all.
About that text under picture: I use 1024x768 resolution and it is ok for me. When the res is 800x600 there is really text missing. I'll check it next time :)
Thnx for comment, Asylum.
For Divvy:
I suppose you were little bit tired, there is a sentence or two about alliances in the 1st paragraph :) Thnx 4 comment anyway |
#7  [47326] |
| 01-034.039.popsite.net |
Nice report! The pace was fast. If you could next time slow it down by commenting on buildings or which units he was teching for. You did in some parts, but if you did more it would have made the BR longer.
I found it hard to follow at times. But everything else looked nice. Your pics and your html helped the report. Escpecially in a 2on2 game. THose are always the hardest to BR next to large FFA. Just the amount of players involved makes there so much to follow. Once again for a 1st BR please keep these coming, you can only improve.
Just next time try not to make a game so hard to follow because of the fast pace. Tone it down for us slow people and you'll do quite well.
7
Fox^1 |
| #8 BW-sux[47327] |
| spider-tm043.proxy.aol.com |
It was really good. Pics are always nice, although the editing wasn't that good.
7
BW-sux |
| #9 <font color=yellow>Phoenix</font>[47332] |
| node156e4.a2000.nl |
Hmmm
Nice BR, here's my 2 cents
<ul>
<li>As said before, the pic was over the text, bit if you higlight it you still can read it (it were only a few wordt anyway
<li>It lacks detail. When I read it, I had the idea you had to catch a train or something. I guess the game lasted about 25 minutes, but it seems more like 5
<li>The pics were nice, but you might want to consider adding borders. They also don't look very neat. Like they're right from the screeshot, into the BR.
<li>The game wasn't <i>that</i> exciting, try getting a closer game. The winning team hasn't basically been in trouble during the entire game.
But anyway, good job and I'm waiting for your next one.
I'll give you a
<font color=blue size=5>7</font>
Phoenix |
| #10 Wisest~Yoda[47400] |
| pm3-1-144.boscobel.mwt.net |
Ok, decent BR but I've got few pointers for you.
Slow down, you need to make it clearer on what people are building, where they are expanding, what techs they are getting, etc. Also go into more detail for battles. The report shouldve probably been about twice as long.
Pics were edited in paint. Although they werent horrible and you did an ok job with them, you should really consider buying (or d/ling warez version if ur like that) a decent photo editing program.
Try to get a better game next time, this one seemed to be a bit one sided.
Also, at the beginning of the report, make it clear about the players, their races, the map, game type, teams if there are, etc.
Other than that, decent report, I'll give it a 7.
Wisest~Yoda
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| #11 DivvyO[47405] |
| kpcrdc.kp.org |
| I knew it! Damn my heavy eyelids! |
| #12 SilverMe[TDA][47410] |
| HTIP-A-002-pool-67.tmns.net.au |
| finally.... |
| #13 TheCabbit[47551] |
| bgm-24-94-57-110.stny.rr.com |
First report? Damn, not bad. Yeah, I'll have to say it was fast. Watch the HTML too ;) Other than that and a few spelling/grammar errors (dude, I don't think I've seen a report that had zero errors heh) it was pretty good.
7 |
| #14 JediMan84[47626] |
| dialin-12-75.montreal.primus.ca |
| Hello. Not bad for a first report, better than the 5 I got, which made me give up writting battle reports :(. Anyway, it's 1am, so I have to admit I did skip through the report, but I think I got the just of it, mind you all I read was the start (looked at the teams) and the end (to see who won) and a few parts in the middle to read some action stuff. Anyway, good job for a first report. |
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