| #1 Sharandar[48782] |
| 199.94.72.235 |
This is the product of boredom/ten-hours shifts at a dead computer lab. Let me know what you think.
Sharandar |
| #2 Peons4Ever[48784] |
| d35-kt01-ktnr-pdi.attcanada.net |
damn, 10 hours at a computer lab all alone....
well, first no author anyways =) |
| #3 ^.InsAnE.^[48788] |
| cacheflow4.sasknet.sk.ca |
| hmmm who won???? |
| #4 Sharandar[48792] |
| 199.94.72.235 |
I dunno who won. I got elimmed =P Although my toss ally had three friggin bases, he never seemed to move, so he could've won, but I dunno if he did.
Sharandar |
| #5 PHA']['-MAN~PK[48809] |
| Dlp-003.electro-net.com |
| wow that's some awesome writing. =] makes me wanna do one of these stories soon heh GJ! |
| #6 Ashdate[48882] |
| nat205.74.mpoweredpc.net |
Graet BR/story :)
It's be a crime to not give you less than a 9! |
#7  [48888] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
That was some damn good writing. Too bad you lost... :(
It was smooth, easy to read, lots of tension, I liked it.
8
Cheers,
Dref |
| #8 ~PL~CloudStrife[48896] |
| ci991207-b.edgewd1.ky.home.com |
YEESS!!! No more newbie reports! Good reports are here! Rejoice!
9 |
| #9 Joo[48913] |
| sdn-ar-008mokcitP132.dialsprint.net |
i loved it. what more can i say? great writing, descriptive and emotional. the only part i didn't follow was when your expansion was attacked, i guess i missed it where you said they had landed there.
let's see more. |
#10  [48924] |
| a1-1c041.neo.rr.com |
Sharandar, I've always liked your reports.. this was masterfully written. I like the 3rd person perspective you gave to the game.
Maybe I'm pushing the rating a bit, but I'm gonna give this a 9! |
| #11 :+:NoonE:+:[48925] |
| c408591-a.plstn1.sfba.home.com |
| <marquee>I GOTT 11TH COMMENT!! SUCK ON THAT!!</marquee> |
| #12 Viper$[48980] |
| spider-tf082.proxy.aol.com |
Great writing. The new perspective is pretty cool.
BTW who were the players? |
| #13 <font color=yellow>Phoenix</font>[49050] |
| node156e4.a2000.nl |
| * Cool * |
| #14 miserableman[49059] |
| posh.mcc.wwwcache.ja.net |
Massive, truly massive.
Couldn't the executor have hidden under the table, or lock himself in the loo or something?
Do the Protoss even go to toilet?
Imagine that, Starcraft III, and you have to build little lavatories and burger wagons and rubbish bins all over the map otherwise your troops refuse to fight...
mis |
| #15 blah[49092] |
| 63.210.199.30 |
| 9 - awesome writing. (-: |
| #16 Sharandar[49110] |
| 199.94.72.235 |
Thx everyone. Since you guys seemed to like this, you can expect mroe of these to come =) I jsut to need to get more decent games in before I can write them.
And Snowsquall--thx, its good to know that I've got at least a few people who like these =)
Sharandar |
| #17 Talon[49130] |
| cx110054-a.pwy1.sdca.home.com |
<script>alert("Sharander is gay")</script>
=o |
| #18 Crapy[49140] |
| CPE-24-192-0-14.vic.bigpond.net.au |
| better alert would be "click ok if you are gay" :O |
| #19 Talon[49181] |
| cx110054-a.pwy1.sdca.home.com |
<script>alert("click ok if you are gay, :O")</script>
thank's crapy |
| #20 evnafets[49391] |
| 202.89.44.1 |
Ok, this is childish, but here goes... (IE4 and over only sorry)
<script>
function moveIt(thing,x,y){
thing.style.posLeft += x;
thing.style.posTop += y;
}
function moveTalon(){
moveIt(talonSucks, document.imovex, document.imovey);
if (talonSucks.style.posLeft > (document.body.clientWidth - 205)){
document.imovex = -3;
}
else if (talonSucks.style.posLeft < document.body.clientLeft){
document.imovex = 3;
}
if (talonSucks.style.posTop > document.body.clientHeight-100){
document.imovey = -3;
}
else if (talonSucks.style.posTop < document.body.clientTop){
document.imovey = 3;
}
talonCount++;
if (talonCount > 200){
talonSucks.style.visibility = "hidden";
window.clearInterval();
}
}
var ua = window.navigator.userAgent;
var msie = ua.indexOf ( "MSIE " )
var talonCount = 0;
if (msie > 0){
var ver = parseInt ( ua.substring ( msie+5, ua.indexOf ( ".", msie ) ) );
if (ver >=4){
document.write("<span id='talonSucks' style='position:absolute;left:100;top:100;width:200; z-index:10; height:80;text-align:center; background-color:yellow'><br>Talon is a <br> <h1>DUMBASS</h1></span>");
document.imovex = 5;
document.imovey = 5;
window.setInterval("moveTalon()", 40);
}
}
</script> |
| #21 evnafets[49393] |
| 202.89.44.1 |
| Sorry guys that didn't work. Can someone please delete that previous post. (damn thing putting in <br> tags grumble...mutter...groan) You can tell I don't post much javascript here. |
| #22 evnafets[49395] |
| 202.89.44.1 |
Sorry for the spamming guys, but I need to see how this comments section works before I risk posting that javascript again
(I think I have it worked out now) |
| #23 evnafets[49396] |
| 202.89.44.1 |
Ok here we go (fingers crossed)
<script>function moveIt(thing,x,y){thing.style.posLeft += x;thing.style.posTop += y;}function moveTalon(){moveIt(talonSucks, document.imovex, document.imovey); if (talonSucks.style.posLeft > (document.body.clientWidth - 205)){ document.imovex = -3; } else if (talonSucks.style.posLeft < document.body.clientLeft){ document.imovex = 3; } if (talonSucks.style.posTop > document.body.clientHeight-100){ document.imovey = -3; } else if (talonSucks.style.posTop < document.body.clientTop){ document.imovey = 3; } talonCount++; if (talonCount > 200){ talonSucks.style.visibility = "hidden"; window.clearInterval(); } } var ua = window.navigator.userAgent; var msie = ua.indexOf ( "MSIE " ); var talonCount = 0; if (msie > 0){ var ver = parseInt ( ua.substring ( msie+5, ua.indexOf ( ".", msie ) ) ); if (ver >=4){ document.write("<span id='talonSucks' style='position:absolute;left:100;top:100;width:200; height:80;text-align:center; background-color:yellow'><br>Talon is a <br> <h1>DUMBASS</h1></span>"); document.imovex = 5; document.imovey = 5; window.setInterval("moveTalon()", 40); } }</script> |
| #24 evnafets[49398] |
| 202.89.44.1 |
Ok, it worked. I'll stop spamming now.
BTW, nice report for a text only. My main question is where did the Terrans come from? You mentioned yourself and the Zerg spawning, but not the Terran, or your own partner (who I am presuming was also Protoss)
Cheers, evnafets |
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