| #1 CynicalMagician[48807] |
| px1cl.gv.wave.shaw.ca |
Not bad. I liked the images, but it was too short. What was blue doing while purple was amassing that force? Some more detail on the final battle would have been nice. Also, yellow sucks on white background. Make it orange or something, or at LEAST gold and bold. 7.5
-CynicalMagician |
| #2 2nd non author[48808] |
| adsl-63-204-72-149.dsl.scrm01.pacbell.net |
| Goddam Refrshing mother FU CKERS |
| #3 Vegita of Pooh[48811] |
| host69-163.iwbc.net |
| Yeh, it was too short, Yellow fell really fast, and Blue didn't last that long against Purple's heavy metal tactic. |
| #4 <font color="red"> Executor </font>[48862] |
| p294-tnt4.akl.ihug.co.nz |
hehe lurkz own terran
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| #5 SlingsNArrows[48884] |
| bgm-24-95-150-230.stny.rr.com |
More tech tree description could have gone on.
I feel like starting a formula so I can prove that I've got what it takes next time they need writers.
2 vs 1 + 4
Decent Pics + 2
Gaps in information - 4
Smurphing player revealed + 3
Lack of humor - 1
What was written was understandable + 3.2
I believe that adds up to... 7.2, correct?
btw, The Colesseum Comes.
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| #6 ~PL~CloudStrife[48899] |
| ci991207-b.edgewd1.ky.home.com |
YEEAAHHH!!! Another gold! We are in biz!
7! |
| #7 :+:NoonE:+:[48918] |
| c408591-a.plstn1.sfba.home.com |
| <marquee>YES!!!!!!! 8th COMMENT!!Z#@Z!@</marquee> |
#8  [48921] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
Nice report, but a little pic heavy for the amount of text. Also the battles lacked a lot of detail. I wasn't really sure what kind of tech zerg was going for. I also didn't know what kind of troops were involved in the final batttle or if anyone ever expanded.
7
Cheers,
Dref |
#9  [48927] |
| a1-1c041.neo.rr.com |
Hmm, I'm probably going to have to just say "ditto" to what Dref wrote.
On the bright side, I see *lots* of potential here for you. Your graphics are nice, and if you're just a little more descriptive with the text with respect to expansions/etc, you'll be hauling down 9's in no time.
7. |
| #10 Nick_Bruiser[48938] |
| sdn-ar-002nyrochP088.dialsprint.net |
| Terran suck. I play them and they are 10x harder than any other race. |
| #11 Kaz[48941] |
| hera.lweb.net |
| Rofl. Gotta love Heavy metal vs Zerg :P |
| #12 Wisest~Yoda[48966] |
| pm3-1-158.boscobel.mwt.net |
hrrm 2v1 on forsaken valley is hella fun.. i win like at least 3/4 of the time vs pubbies but I do it a lil bit different than he did.... usually i go hatch, pool, hatch, gas and then get two sunkens and then den and evo chamber for better spines... make 12 lings before u start hydras and run them to a out of the way spot so that you can run up behind the attackers and whack the ranged units. After that, pump hydras until the double rush comes (almost alweys will) and you will be able to defeat it almost alweys unless they do something gay like go 4 gate zeals both and hit you with 09890173927 at 3 minutes.... anyhow usually u will be able to stop it and then u immediatly counter one of them and whack on him with hydras till his base falls... sometimes you can finish the other with pure hydras but you can alweys power all over the map and run him over with 123908 mutas too. anyhow this is the basic way to win 1v2 and i didnt go into extreme detail but it works just about as well as any other 1v2 thing so whatever
o yeah and i have won exactly 6 games with this and lost 2...
anyhow
bye now
wisestyoda |
| #13 Viper$[48984] |
| spider-tf082.proxy.aol.com |
The writing was ok but the yellow on white sucked, you should have used another color for either the name or the background.
SIEGE TANKS OWN!!!! |
| #14 Spuzz[49033] |
| jfsn-02-59.dialup.netins.net |
Ack, my pitiful performance recorded for everyone to see...err, I mean, Ren01 sucks a big one. He should get at least one thumb out of his ass so he can play the damn game. What a loser. (Dammit I told you I just wanted to observe!!)
Nice work with the BattleReport, you have a good writing style that makes it fun to read. As mentioned earlier the details were brief, and you did miss a few minor things, but you got the meat of the game and it was summed up very well with some rather nice graphics. All this in your first BattleReport? I look forward to more from you!!
If you ever want to do a report about loser newbies who only embarass themselves, look me up; I'll be happy to perform again :P
Spuzz
(Ren01) |
| #15 C_Time[49062] |
| ares.tdsb.on.ca |
| Omgay report, T_Mac sux |
| #16 Vegita of Pooh[49063] |
| cerberus.everett.wednet.edu |
| Thanks for all the comments guys, I'll be sure to take them all into consideration when I make my next battlereport. I'll make sure to add more detail next time too. |
| #17 MingDu[49105] |
| 24.65.93.33.on.wave.home.com |
| Yeah.......I'd rather have pics than writing anyday but would have loved to know why he built the 4 rax if he was just gonna go tanks??? |
| #18 Vegita of Pooh[49322] |
| host86-36.iwbc.net |
| I don't have a clue why he built 4 rax =) I was confused. Maybe infantry are better against zerg |
| #19 Dr Amar Chiter[111731] |
| ernst.central.susx.ac.uk |
CHITER is my family name and I object to it being used for the purpose of swearing or describing a dishonest player/person as a chiter. The correct word in English is cheater and not Chiter. The former is an entry in the Oxford Dictionnary and the latter is not- because it is my surname.
I only wish people use the correct spelling of words, and that the site managers try and correct misspellings.
Regards |
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