| #1 Inssider[49188] |
| d71-132.mlfdct.optonline.net |
| asdf@#%@#$%@#$@#$ I posted right after Bane =[ |
| #2 Inssider[49190] |
| d71-132.mlfdct.optonline.net |
| BTW, even though the pics don't work, Bane still ownz =] |
| #3 CynicalMagician[49196] |
| px1cl.gv.wave.shaw.ca |
No formatting, and thats a minus in my book. Use paragraphs and grab some screens next time, and you'll have a 7 or 8 on your hands. Not bad writing, but with the 1 big paragraph format I'd have to say 6. Hard on the eyes.
-CynicalMagician |
| #4 Inssider[49197] |
| d71-132.mlfdct.optonline.net |
| Yes sir, I'll keep that in mind, sir. |
| #5 Inssider[49198] |
| d71-132.mlfdct.optonline.net |
| And that's a good point =] |
| #6 [49202] |
| van-bc12-49.netcom.ca |
| gosu br man, luved the story |
#7  [49203] |
| fjwilson.reshall.ucsd.edu |
| Heh. I finally come back from like a 3-week hiatus of not rating battlereports (for the very obvious reason) and a Strifeshadow fan is at the top of the list. Coincidence, I swear! The biggest thing this report needs is paragraphs! |
| #8 ovinder[49205] |
| erbium-asy-71.rutgers.edu |
Excellent attention to detail that allows the reader to follow the battles, something which is typically hard to do with 2v2s. Well done, fun to read.
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| #9 ::nobody::[49208] |
| dt0f4n84.san.rr.com |
Man im glad u reported this even tho Bane and i lost...it was quite a game!! :D
SO many ways this game could gone so Bane and i won, but you and Micro kept holding on :D A great game and a nice report! the only suggestion is paragraphs like the others have mentioned! :D
Ciao!
Nobo
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| #10 Inssider[49214] |
| d71-132.mlfdct.optonline.net |
| Hehe, thanks. ::Nobody:: ownz BTW, and I'll stick in paragraphs next time. Praetor, congrats on your joining of Ethermoon. |
| #11 Bane[49223] |
| 205.152.18.11 |
Hehe, exactly what ::nobody:: said =]
Nice report man, pretty good you got most of the details w/o taking notes or screenshots or anything. |
| #12 lkjhuj[49226] |
| odo.computerstudies.ca |
| If your zealots can't hold on the ramp, go up it and regroup there. Coming down vs a double = stupid. |
| #13 miserableman[49230] |
| curtius.mcc.wwwcache.ja.net |
I liked this game. How come everyone who's ever been on this site is much, much better than me? Inssider, if you think you're crap, try me for size.
One day I'm going to go to Nohunters, just to see what it's like.
Nice BR of a good game.
mis
PS how the hell can u play without sound??? Perhaps I should look at the minimap more. |
| #14 IC_OrcA[13]^^[49237] |
| proxyr.cyberia.net.lb |
...GBR/good battle report/u have a very meane psychological prob. man...Its called "lack O'confidance"...
...We call this one SURVIVAL OF THE FITTEST>>>>
....BY the way did i mention this was a GREAT REPPORT?/
i dont know about BR writting criterias/but i think u deserve a 9/or somthing!!!!! |
| #15 BW-sux[49245] |
| spider-wm024.proxy.aol.com |
What ::nobody:: said.
6
BW-sux |
| #16 ~PL~CloudStrife[49259] |
| ci991207-b.edgewd1.ky.home.com |
What ::nobody:: bane and bw-sux said. ^^
7 |
| #17 Fractal_Wave[49270] |
| 142.31.178.5 |
Sounds like a truely epic game there. A good report too.
As everyone & their dog has said: use paragraphs & other formatting stuff.
Also, try & find a voice to write in. It reads like you're just chatting casually with us. Praetor writes like an English Major(he is, isn;t he?), Heartcutter writes like a badass, William writes like he's on drugs (good one though)
Anywho, good job
All the best,
Fractal_Wave |
| #18 D-HawK[49272] |
| 209.128.34.1 |
Is MicroMan considered " Good " by NHers?
The channel gets worse by the day. |
| #19 Asty[49275] |
| 198.209.27.48 |
Yeah...that was a nice report... The non-paragraphs didn't bother me though.... and all that w/ out screenshots...that was nice.. It had a good amount of detail...and it was funny.... I've read quite a few reports..and I like this 1 a lot... I suppose u could add screenshots..but that wasn't ur fault if u other peeps would read...he said at first he wasn't gonna br it... I wish ur canal idea woulda worked...its funny when it does cause peeps get real mad...hehe..well gj!
8
aka BuckShotLaFunk |
| #20 Shepherd[49278] |
| cm-24-161-49-168.nycap.rr.com |
Hey miserableman,
I never play with sound. I'm deaf. Totally deaf. But I play starcraft a lot nonetheless. I just learned how to KNOW my game.
Nice report, but no paragraphs to seperate sets of actions. Nice writing, but I find it hard to follow the report due to the lack of paragraphs.
By the way. . .I have a challenge for you guys: try to play without sound ;P |
| #21 Goldenscale[49281] |
| citgo-bh.citgo.com |
I think some were a little hard on this report. The game rocked, and the detail was excellent. Of course formatting could be nicer, but I'll not take away score from this one due to lack of pics. The detail was such that pics weren't neccessary.
Good BR.
8
Goldie
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| #22 ||MadSkillZ||[49283] |
| 207-172-81-131.s131.tnt1.ptr.va.dialup.rcn.com |
| LOL, I love ::nobodys:: use of ":D" It's fucking cute as hell :) |
| #23 ||MadSkillZ||[49284] |
| 207-172-81-131.s131.tnt1.ptr.va.dialup.rcn.com |
| LOL, I love ::nobodys:: use of ":D" It's fucking cute as hell :) |
| #24 PeonSanders[49296] |
| cm-24-25-142-118.nycap.rr.com |
| who uses the word cute... you must be a girl |
| #25 Inssider[49309] |
| d71-132.mlfdct.optonline.net |
| Thanks for the comments. It seems my biggest problem was the lack of paragraphs/formatting, then I should of course have taken screenshots (I feel justified on this count however), and also I need to find my writing style. And it's not a psychological disorder, it's the truth. I blow =] Miserableman, you could probably beat me. BTW, since you guys (and girl if PeonSanders is right :) commented, you all own. |
| #26 miserableman[49368] |
| mustard.mcc.wwwcache.ja.net |
Inssider if u stat me on Bnet I come up as something like 60/50/8. That makes me semi-newbie/intermediate as far as I'm aware.
As for playing without sound...eek!! I rely on sounds such as a unit telling you it's been built and the girl telling you 15 guardians have entered the rear of your base and are making their presence felt...
Like you said Shepherd, knowing the game (i.e. what to think about and when) is very important and is something you acquire with time. For instance I almost have an inbuilt 'clock' now that tells me when I need to go back and build more peons or whatever - this is something you develop as you become better.
mis |
| #27 Iceman_IX[49381] |
| 142.orlando-11-12rs.fl.dial-access.att.net |
| I am wondering how Nobody had psi storm when you only had vultures and lings?! |
| #28 Inssider[49388] |
| d71-132.mlfdct.optonline.net |
| Iceman, you want the answer? For the 354234324 time: <I>I SUCK</I>!!! Cool. Anyway, miserableman, I come up short of that =] With this alias that is. Though most of the time now, people play on UMS obs maps that don't count on the record. |
| #29 Kami_Bum[49402] |
| spider-wg013.proxy.aol.com |
That has got to be one of the longest games i've even seen! Sounds like maybe 3+ hours? That's exactly the kind of game that SC was made for: A grueling battle to conserve resources.
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| #30 ||MadskillZ||[49421] |
| 207-172-164-29.s283.tnt1.ptr.va.dialup.rcn.com |
| PeonSanders: :) |
| #31 Viper$[49510] |
| spider-wc063.proxy.aol.com |
| This report owns. The writing was good, I didn't even realize the whole no paragraphs until everyone started pointing it out. This was a totally gosu game to BR. Next time you have such a good game make screenshots. The best part is terran won(sort of). |
| #32 Inssider[49582] |
| d71-132.mlfdct.optonline.net |
| Heh. If you look at my first BR (which happens to be my previous one), in the comments section someone commented that the BR was ALL screenshots and total crap. =] |
| #33 Microman[49645] |
| 203.59.210.1 |
Cool report. I didn't expect anyone to BR it, but the game was cool.
I seemed to get paragraphs...... Well, it was broken into sections, anyway.
And Darkhalk, grow up.
Microman |
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