| #1 Hey[49746] |
| adsl-63-204-75-182.dsl.scrm01.pacbell.net |
I got 1st
heres a tip
ppl dont like Fanfic in PARTS
:)
people want snazzy cool fanfic with a badass graphic and layout then you nmignt attract ppl to read
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| #2 Cracky_The_Peon[49748] |
| 216.230.139.24 |
Damn...If only I could do pictures...;-) Thanx for the tip...But I wasn't gonna go to the trouble to write the other 2 parts unless people actually want to know what happens...did you even read this?
Cracky
P.s - What do you do all day? Just sit in BR.com madly clicking the refresh button until a new report comes up? Just curious...;-) |
| #3 Dark[49749] |
| ts018d18.oak-ca.concentric.net |
| Cool story you got there, now... what happens next? =) |
| #4 probe[49750] |
| 242849hfc131.tampabay.rr.com |
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huk |
| #5 probe[49751] |
| 242849hfc131.tampabay.rr.com |
i rule!
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| #6 Cracky_The_Peon[49752] |
| 216.230.139.24 |
| Dark - thanks for the support...and probe...wtf? |
| #7 Cracky_The_Peon[49753] |
| 216.230.139.24 |
| Dark - thanks for the support...and probe...wtf? |
| #8 Cracky_The_Peon[49754] |
| 216.230.139.24 |
| Dark - thanks for the support...and probe...wtf? |
| #9 Drunken Templar[49757] |
| 1Cust179.tnt1.sfo1.da.uu.net |
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Woohoo! Number 9!!! |
| #10 <font color="blue">Blue~Devil</font>[49759] |
| dialups-38.palmer.mtaonline.net |
heh i rule i got tenth! WOOOO HOO
ohh and i didnt read the story yet |
| #11 probe[49774] |
| 242849hfc131.tampabay.rr.com |
| hey mista im not the one that spammed your report with comments =p |
| #12 Haplo.wm[49783] |
| 219.arlington-41-42rs.va.dial-access.att.net |
Well, you left it as a cliffhanger, so I'm a little curious now about what you have plotted for this marine. You should probably read through what you write a few times b4 posting, cause I caught a few obvious grammar and spelling mistakes. One that was not so obvious was "plutonic." I'm sure you meant "platonic."
:-)
Haplo.wm |
| #13 Peons4Ever[49804] |
| d2-kt02-ktnr-pdi.attcanada.net |
| it was pretty good dude, i never thoguht of marine boot camp before |
| #14 probe[49806] |
| 242849hfc212.tampabay.rr.com |
by the way, i like your writing, smooth concise, etc.... there was a few grammatical and spelling errors, so just run a spell checker or re-read it..
looking forward to more.
most entertaining fan-fic i've read since the days of praetor :) |
| #15 shockwave[49812] |
| exchange1.sensable.com |
<I>Plu·ton·ic (-tnk). adj.
Of or relating to the god Pluto or the underworld; infernal.
</I>
I'd hate to get into a plutonic friendship, especially with a girl... ;-). |
| #16 Viper$[49846] |
| spider-tq064.proxy.aol.com |
This is a very good story. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
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| #17 Viper$[49847] |
| spider-tq064.proxy.aol.com |
| Color is gosu |
| #18 Belt[49852] |
| p111.netwood.net |
| this was much better than any of mine. I appreciate the effort you put in this story. I'll probably give you a 7.75. |
| #19 hi[49939] |
| spider-wi041.proxy.aol.com |
<font size=20>HI
probe is kool |
| #20 [50044] |
| spider-tf034.proxy.aol.com |
| <script>alert("probe is cool~")</script> |
#21  [50073] |
| as530047.infocom.com |
You need to put more effort into your work before releasing it. Its good writing but there's just not enough there to wet my whistle.
4
Dref |
| #22 Cracky_The_Peon[50567] |
| thor.gua.net |
Drefsab is a bastard, first of all...(not really - all raters are sexy)...I guess I will put some more time and energy into my next one...I just didn't know if anyone would be interested enough for me to actually work at it! Expect 2 and 3 to be longer and spell checked...;-)
Cracky |
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