| #1 undead{hero}[51268] |
| tsmia4-107.gate.net |
| sorry this is a lil late guys. It took a long time. =) Enjoy. |
| #2 <font color=yellow>Protophobic</font>[51269] |
| cm-24-161-2-135.nycap.rr.com |
| <font color=yellow>1st non auth. Gawd I own. Its a little wide, too |
| #3 CraZy[51272] |
| 24.65.122.105.sk.wave.home.com |
| Cool idea w/ the 2 games |
| #4 CynicalMagician[51277] |
| px1cl.gv.wave.shaw.ca |
Cool idea. On with my comment whoring.
Writing: Not bad, a bit of a lack of interesting descriptive words, and a few grammarical errors (use a spell check please), but not bad. I'm not sure if I like the rather juvenile idea of the temple farting to kill everything, but what do I know. Flowed well, easy to follow, but there wasn't really anything in the writing itself about anything other than: then he attacked, then he moved there, etc. No funny quotes in other words. No big deal, but I find a good 1 liner in a BR really lighten things up.
Images: Generally good. The text in images with filenames: 2goons, vultureharassment, 2bullrun and to a lesser degree 1bullrun was kinda hard to read though, I would recommend picking different colours/making the smaller text larger. Plenty of action though, especially in game 2.
Appearance: Good formatting, use of HTML (always a plus), easy to read fonts. GW.
Overall: Kickin' idea, although I wonder if it's really necessary, since neither of the games are related in any big way. I did like the 1 white 1 black thing, and the concept is cool. Try and find something that perhaps deserves it a little more (I have no idea what that would be). Nice though. Hope this helps,
-CynicalMagician |
| #5 Casper...[51282] |
| 207.35.182.34 |
| This is really hard to read. |
| #6 undead{hero}[51285] |
| tsmia2-293.gate.net |
| Does casper hate me or something? |
| #7 RAGE{hero}[51286] |
| 1Cust150.tnt4.springfield2.ma.da.uu.net |
| THIS BR OWNS GIVE IT A 10 PLZ =) |
| #8 <font color=yellow>Protophobic</font>[51293] |
| cm-24-161-2-135.nycap.rr.com |
| <font color=yellow>This requires horizontal scrolling even on 1024x768. Just a note, Nuthing kills a webpage more than horizontal scrolling. |
| #9 [WaK]Farmer[51296] |
| nic-160-c201-135.mw.mediaone.net |
WAAYYYY TO HARD TO READ
REPOST W/ NO HORIZONTAL SCROLLING OR I WILL....WELL I WILL DO SOMETHING AND U WILL REGRET IT
MUHAHAHA |
| #10 undead{hero}[51308] |
| tsmia4-268.gate.net |
| Yo, to all the idiots out there. U read 1 BR in 1 frame and then horizontal scroll over to the 2nd. and read that one. read each separately.. DUH! |
| #11 Sonneillon[51316] |
| tsdlsk01d01010142.sk.sympatico.ca |
Very original concept.
Hah ha, to all you poor bastards who can't stand the horizontal scroll-
I have a mouse-wheel! Muhahha! (I really wanted to rub that in).
Once again, Cynical covered most of what I wanted to say, other than...
Great report. Next time though, I really recommend you put the "bonus" report beneath the first. You can only take innovation so far, even for us people that have 19' monitors with 1024 * 768 resolutions.
-Sonn |
| #12 Dre@m{Hero}[51319] |
| tyrcache.tyler.net |
| Undead do u have icq? Me and Immortal came up with an idea for the clan. |
| #13 Dre@m{Hero}[51320] |
| tyrcache.tyler.net |
| Or better yet, do you have the new page? I need to add everyone. |
| #14 ][MMORTAL{Hero}[51321] |
| ppp2-37.phnx.dialup.futureone.com |
Hehe nice job undead.. its cool that u did the horizontal thing.. hey u idiots who are either lazy or dumb and dont wanna scroll down, go play a game of hind and go fuck urself :þ but n e way great battle reports... and dream what plans do u and i have? **gulp**
Leader Of Hero |
| #15 Casper...[51323] |
| on-tor-blr-a58-02-47.look.ca |
It's not a question of readers being lazy. I run a 800x600 res and having all that extra shit in my peripheral vision annoys me. I think a WilliamWC3 type approach i.e. '1 report right after the other' would have worked better. So if you disagree go fuck yourself because you all know that I'm right. This was hard to read.
Games keep the mind sharp but absolutely suck as insults. |
| #16 Lil-Lost{hero}[51324] |
| 205.138.22.49 |
| Not to shabby kido. I like BR's and ur's are decent. U got ur own little style going and it's working for you. Keep them up cause I'll comment on all o them. The ad lib is decent and full of sarcasm which is good. Now all u need to do is get me in one and learn how to play :-) Keep it up man. |
| #17 Sil3nT[51325] |
| 203-96-105-208.dialup.xtra.co.nz |
hehe Casp Rulz..Hard-Out Lesbian.
The scrolling is hard..but i wouldnt make it out to be as big a dilemma as you all are.. |
| #18 Lamer[51326] |
| PPPa57-ResaleNewYorkMetro1-1R7184.saturn.bbn.com |
| Wow wasting 2 secs of my life to scroll to the right of my screen. What a pain! |
| #19 <font color=yellow>Protophobic</font>[51332] |
| cm-24-161-2-135.nycap.rr.com |
| <font color=yellow>Casper and I never said horizontal scrolling was difficulkt to do you deaf d*ckwad, it's just F*CKING UGLY. |
| #20 undead{hero}[51338] |
| tsmia2-56.gate.net |
| Dre@m, uh..ICQ interferes with one of the programs my dad runs for some weird reason. So I don't have ICQ. Better yet, just e-mail me. david_lou@hotmail.com |
| #21 KoolManBloke[51346] |
| webcache-16.p.ps.ifl.net |
Nice stories. but how dair you insolt lost tempel i meen its notly eveyone playes it or enything. no wait thay do.
Daim it! y? y? ow well such is life. I blame the welsh. |
| #22 Dapp[51347] |
| users2.xorchicago.com |
KoolMan, wtf?
English please. Comprehendible english always helps. |
#23  [51352] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
For me it wasn't a matter of scrolling, it was just the fact that I could see part of the other BR on my screen as I scrolled down. That was pretty distracting. I suppose I could have lined it up perfectly, but I like to have the battle report in the middle of the screen when I read it, not right or left justified.
Anyway, both reports were still of good quality. I would just suggest putting one after the other instead of next to each other... :-)
7
Cheers
Dref
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| #24 TerenWreth[51358] |
| dt031n5e.tampabay.rr.com |
HEY NEWBIMAN
heoaheoaheaieahieheiaheoaheaioheaoheaiheahoeaoi yuo cnt even make a batel repot gud u dum newbiman
uyo r also afrad to face me in arena of 1v1 becuas my batel warrors wil tryumf over u heaoheaoehaoehaoiheoaieahoieahoeahiehaiheoaheaihieajeah yuo dum dicknose
mabe oen day yuo can mak a gud br but not nwo no one wil raed this scrol thing haeahoheoaheaoeoaheaoheaoheaoiheaiheao
yuo suk!
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| #25 Sandman_[666][51362] |
| proxy4-external.rdc1.on.home.com |
TERENWRETH IS JUST A GAY FUCKHEAD...BAN HIM AS SOON AS U SEE HIM.
TERENWRETH IS SO GAY THAT WHEN HE REJOINED MY GAME AFTER I BANNED HIM HE CALLED ME A "PEAKER HEAD" AND LEFT.
O YA THE WHOLE HORIZONTAL FORMAT SUX, BUT BR WAS DECENT.
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| #26 <FONT COLOR="#00ffff"><BR><MARQUEE>Hostile~SCV</MARQUEE></FONT>[51365] |
| spider-wl014.proxy.aol.com |
Nice reports.....
Sandman, you're a crazy pile of shiznit. |
| #27 TerenWreth[51366] |
| dt031n5e.tampabay.rr.com |
hey wft other newbiman
i nver called yuo a PEAKER HAED, i clled yo a dicknose, dicknose.
aslo thso wernt yuor games yuor newbi freind undaed mad teh gaems and baned me cus he is afrad of my batel warrors
asdn if yuo keep usign casp no oen wil be abel to raed yuor posts heaohoeahoeahoeahoeahoehaoheaoheaoheoehaoeaho |
| #28 RAGE{hero}[51375] |
| 1Cust100.tnt4.springfield2.ma.da.uu.net |
| omg nohunters is so gay now, plz stop w/ gay comments? |
| #29 TerenWreth[51404] |
| dt031n5e.tampabay.rr.com |
heoaheoahoaeheoaheaoheaoheaoheohaeoehaoawe
ist teh NEWBIMEN CALN
ebhanoeahoehaoeheohaeoehaoeahoeaheaoehao |
| #30 GerBeR{heRo}[51416] |
| 216.197.54.4 |
| man. hmmm...i could give u all my comments now but it would take too long and i'd rather tell u in private than embarrass u in public (YIKES). i'd just like to agree w/ killer. yes. terran does suck. vs toss and zerg. they just blow. |
| #31 probe[51453] |
| 242849hfc20.tampabay.rr.com |
Terenwreth is trying to copy terengoleth, who used to type like that. however, there are many significant errors to the way he's copying, so it isn't him.
basically, go fuck yourself you little 8 year old.
btw, casper, you haven't had your penis in your anus lately, huh? lil pissed off are we? |
| #32 KodiaK{HeRo}[51826] |
| 24.65.211.15.ab.wave.home.com |
| very good br, i thought. i didnt think that having the two beside eachother was distracting at all. i liked it. just show us the minimap a little more. |
| #33 the mysterious dowrod[51949] |
| dyn051-nas01.nelsonville.frognet.net |
| undead hero is a queero ha ha |
| #34 undead{hero}[52051] |
| tsmia4-296.gate.net |
| ok, obviously it has to be that immature little 7th grader named Hung-Hsin that typed that. GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR. wait till i get my hands on ur throat... |
| #35 ][MMORTAL{HeRo}[53057] |
| ppp2-11.phnx.dialup.futureone.com |
| FUCK U mysterious dowrod!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I FUCKING HOPE UR JOKING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg whata faggot.. but.. good job undead nice br.... hey undead.. send out an e-mail to all members again saying come post shit in this commecnt section and i m sure i will get some more... Cant wait to see ur next one :) |
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