| #1 BW-sux[51440] |
| spider-to084.proxy.aol.com |
| Gee... another first. |
#2  [51441] |
| inehou-pxy04.compaq.com |
#*($ I rated one of them 9! Leave me alone, and Bw-sux your trying to take me on for the 1st spot on Dref's report huh? Well your probably going to beat me =[
Fox^1 |
| #3 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[51442] |
| static-37.itcanada.com |
I should get a medal for preposting.
I am so proud. |
| #4 BW-sux[51443] |
| spider-to084.proxy.aol.com |
Alt-text again.
This now gets an 8 for many reposts.
BW-sux |
| #5 The Asylum[51444] |
| ce-stjh-01-01-e0.cbl.nf.net |
I'll just copy and paste from the comments section of the <b><i>first</b></i> Part 2.
<i>[Right here, I talked about the screwed up pics which Dag fixed in this one, so I'll delete it]</i> I figured the Zerg would have an easy time finishing off the other two, yet somehow Korang lost despite having all the time in the world to build up. Hehe, maybe we should call him a mofo. Great job though. I'm leaning between a 9 and a 10. Excellent return to BRing. |
| #6 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[51445] |
| static-37.itcanada.com |
Hey, BW, what's up?
}-(
grrr |
| #7 The Asylum[51446] |
| ce-stjh-01-01-e0.cbl.nf.net |
| Correction to previous post- I believe Dagomar should get a 1 and be banned for a week for excessive preposting, and for making some people post comments on three different reports(hint hint). I think it's kind of funny how Fox rated the wrong report though. |
| #8 <font color=yellow>Protophobic</font>[51447] |
| cm-24-161-2-135.nycap.rr.com |
<font color=yellow>I like Dagomar's writing. Cobined with excellent graphical work, this was a good set of reports.
Little things could have made it a 10, for example a mini-map gif (which i always do teehee).
Good players too (well not some dumb chobos anyway). This deserves a 9 from Prtot. |
| #9 [51448] |
| inehou-pxy04.compaq.com |
Doesn't matter to me if rated the wrong one, a 9 is a 9! =P
Fox^1
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| #10 <font color=yelllow> |]agomar[51449] |
| static-37.itcanada.com |
Aargh, I dont know how to make animations!!!
;)
thanx Fox! =D |
| #11 ovinder[51451] |
| erbium-asy-9.rutgers.edu |
| Good read. Well done BR. |
| #12 GOSUisOVERRATED[51452] |
| chi-tgn-gux-vty27.as.wcom.net |
| good br. it makes me look alright =P |
| #13 CynicalMagician[51454] |
| px3cl.gv.wave.shaw.ca |
Wow, you repost nearly as much as I do >). Hence, I'll repost my comment, since that other one will probably be del'd.
Booya Dagomar, Booya. Kicked friggin' ass. On with my constructive criticism (well, my constructive telling you you kick ass).
Writing: Two words: Absolutely fabulous. The right mix of entertainment and seriousness, and good descriptions. Easy to follow even though I'd never heard of the map, and it flowed well. A couple minor puncuation/grammarical errors, but in a report this size it's definitely not a big deal since 99.5% of it was perfect. Very clear writing style.
Images: Hurrah for collages! Nice action, I loved the font. The text on the images was simple yet effective. Very well done for minimaps, ie having one in each collage. I only have two nitpicky things that didn't bother me at all, but I figure I'll mention them for completeness sake. 1) The image filename: fast2 didn't have anything seperating the three bases. 2) Some of the black lines seperating the images in collages were bigger and smaller than others. Obviously who cares, but I figured I might as well say it. Can't have you thinkin' you're god ya know >). Oh yeah, why no zerg kickin' ass picture? I would've liked to see what that many units looks like... Oh well. Bitchin title image too by the way.
Appearance: Easy to read, HTML present, very nice. What's not to like?
Overall: Kickin' game, even better BR. It's too bad the zerg player didn't do more than just win the game >). Way to go Dag. Nice return to fame.
-CynicalMagician |
| #14 Punck[51468] |
| spider-wi073.proxy.aol.com |
| Where is Drefsab? |
| #15 King_[LSRS-13][51481] |
| c1081558-a.clmba1.mo.home.com |
You know, I think I'm beginning to understand why they hate you......Get the pic? Or should I say pics? Or maybe posts? Nah, just kidding, Good job on them.
Later
King |
| #16 Sonneillon[51491] |
| tsdlsk01d0101014.sk.sympatico.ca |
Ok-
How did Korang (the zerg) lose this match? I saw a HUGE string of zergy troops on the minimap going in to the protoss's base. How did they die? I must have missed a big part of this or something...erk.
Flame me hard for being stupid, but I want to know how Korang lost this. |
| #17 ovinder[51503] |
| erbium-asy-53.rutgers.edu |
Korang lost because of poor micro, poor decisions about upgrades and troops, and inadequate efforts to eliminate toss observers that kept spotting his expansion efforts. Toss had almost double resources to the zerg, which spoke volumes about Korang's ineffectiveness at establishing and guarding expansions.
Mass lurkers vs a toss with lots of observers all over the map doesn't make any sense. Defilers would have been a far better choice. He needed cracklings and more hydras, plus full 3/3/3 land upgrades, plus more expansions.
His multi-lurker drop was disastrous because of poor planning. Even a single defiler with dark swarm, plus a single OV with mixed hydras and lings, could have turned that drop into a roaring success instead of a crashing failure.
Lurkers are awesome units, but its very important to support them with other troops (hydras, lings, etc) that will absorb fire long enough for lurkers to burrow and begin doing damage. Korang's failure to keep other troops with his lurkers also hurt him when he lost 5 lurkers for practically nothing earlier in the game.
random thoughts. |
| #18 ovinder[51518] |
| erbium-asy-33.rutgers.edu |
| Also, further to above post, it sounds like Korang wasted a *lot* of time doing micro with queens when he could have been expansion whoring. Not to mention all that cash poured into his queens. He could have spent the money better on some scourge to eliminate observers, upgrades for his troops, and defilers. |
| #19 SlingsNArrows[51521] |
| bgm-24-95-150-230.stny.rr.com |
| hmmhmm... poor zergy. |
| #20 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[51530] |
| static-17.itcanada.com |
I love you people ;)
THANK YOU Cynical for the criticism!! I love criticism!!! Now I can fix my mistakes and do better next time ;)
Also . . . oh what the heck I'm going off to play starcraft =D |
| #21 probe[51534] |
| 242849hfc20.tampabay.rr.com |
hi
would you like some tea and crumpets? |
| #22 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[51540] |
| static-33.itcanada.com |
lol yes if it pleasy thee, pretty me
Hey, um, Fox, why did you only rate the one I preposted?? :P |
#23  [51569] |
| a1-1d121.neo.rr.com |
| Yes, this was quite good. I'll rate it later when the duplicate gets removed.. |
| #24 Limp_Bizkit666[51573] |
| PPPa43-ResaleLosAngelesMetro4-4R7088.saturn.bbn.com |
hmm, dag.. you are one of the better WRITERS in this site..
yet, i think WW4 may have been a task not yet to be reckoned with..
although your writing style owns mine and although your pics are as great as ever, WW4, even only with 3 contestants had too many actions...
it seems like you have missed out on A LOT of the action sequence and you didn't even show pic of how the mass hydra/lings died, and also the last-efforted lurkers....
hmmm, no offense to the players but i can't stop to compare the players featured in WW3 and WW4...mark4, heartcutter and [fls] vs. korang, praetor and gosuisoverrated...
i don't know the true identities of the people that played, but still it seems like the players were either drunk or not giving a damn that it was being BRed....
oh well... i still can't figure out how the zerg died.. bleh, it's like reading Friday the 13th books and not knowing what happens at the end..
it bites..
oh well..due to the fact that parts were very amissing ESPECIALLY at the end where it matters the most, i doubt i can give more than an 8...
byeya
p.s-how DO you fit 6 lurkers into 2 ovies?? 2 lurkers and 4 hydras and morphed it later??? i'm confused.. |
| #25 Korang[51574] |
| spc-isp-wpg-uas-04-40.sprint.ca |
waaaah
the reason why I lost was because i sux *_*
I was stupid and didn't tech to defilers. And the queen bit, well, that was just to piss the hell outta Galen. *_*
And Dag, no i don't hack... I was playing with my mind in the clouds and I let my cash stockpile instead of producing more units. It was a long game :P
I also blame my loss on the fact that galen was an observer whore.. the blasted things were everywhere and I couldn't even expand past my first without leaving my base undefended or whatever, blah blah.
The game was fun, it's nice that a sub-900 player can hold out that long against somewhat-esteemed company.
ovinder - I played like what i am, a sorry-ass newbie. that's why i lost. :P
Another big reason - dark templar. normally against a zerg this wouldn't be a problem.. but this isn't any ordinary zerg, this is superchobozerg.
I probably could have swung the game into my favor if the map wasn't so darned big (I don't play well on big maps because i'm notoriously sucky at scouting). Also if I would have known the map i would have been able to keep track of expansion attempts better.
I lost to a better player. simple as that. :)
Asylum - BAD MAMMA JAMMA. fux.
|]ag - PREPOSTING OWNS!!?!?!?!???!??!?!?!?!?!!!!?!!!!!
This br sucked, i rate it a <font size = 5>3</font> find better losers to BR, not that zerg chobo whoever he was. fux he sucked. grr. i'm hungry.
-K.
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| #26 ovinder[51579] |
| erbium-asy-87.rutgers.edu |
no offence meant, Korang. We *all* start as newbies and I have played much, much worse than you did in this game.
My first 3-way FFA I played the other two players battled it out alone for about 20 minutes, completely and totally ignoring me. With all that time alone I got 3 expansions up and running and built a *big* upgraded "turtled terran" army. But, right after one player had lost the other remaining (zerg) player destroyed my army, two expansions, and my main in easily under 5 minutes. I was *that* ineffective (and my opponent was that good).
As long as you learn from a game, you'll do better and probably have more fun next time.
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| #27 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[51612] |
| static-20.itcanada.com |
Thanx for your criticisms . . .
However, i covered everything . . . did you see all the pics?? Click on show pic to view em ;)
Stay tuned to next Round. Personally I think this report was my best, but hey, you are, of course, entitled to your own opinions ;)
However, regardless of what u think of this one, I do believe I am getting better. Translation: the next br will own.
=D |
| #28 Kor[51630] |
| spc-isp-wpg-uas-11-37.sprint.ca |
| Dag - plzplzplpzl[pzlplzplzplzpzplz give me a chance to repent for my loss =( (translation: Lemme lose again horribly and make up excuses to cover my ass.) |
| #29 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[51671] |
| gateway.ncdsb.com |
LOL Mofo, you played OK
You're not a sorry ass newbie, that's why your record is 903/120, is it???
<i> <font color=navy><h6> Dag laughs sinisterly at having furthered his cause with a simply lie |
| #30 Tullius![51816] |
| proxy3-external.rdc1.on.home.com |
<font color="red" size=+3>Dag<b>()</b>mar<p></font>
You kick ass. What is taking all these asshole raters so long to give this report a ten. |
| #31 Muerte[52042] |
| spider-wg031.proxy.aol.com |
For those of you that missed what happened to the zerg army, it's all in the alt text of the title pic (and to this, I really just have to ask WHY?). Also, in the 2nd post, Fox called you Dref, so I'm not the only one :P
Good BR, a bit boring though, the large chunks of text followed by large chunks of pictures might have worked better if less formulaic (in other words, insert smaller chunks of both here and there to give it an overall balanced feel). That's all, gj, more gosu BRs!!! |
| #32 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[52057] |
| static-26.itcanada.com |
Drat me stoop.
Better next time. |
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