| #1 JFeTT[51700] |
| ro04-204-210-189-182.ce.mediaone.net |
| First.. |
| #2 BW-sux[51701] |
| spider-to074.proxy.aol.com |
| GRRRRR.... |
| #3 BW-sux[51702] |
| spider-to074.proxy.aol.com |
| What did you do? |
| #4 Blade|IcE|[51705] |
| c790560-a.smateo1.sfba.home.com |
| yay i got 4th = P |
| #5 Blade|IcE|[51712] |
| c790560-a.smateo1.sfba.home.com |
i wanted to see a massive nuke fest =/ nukes are ownage in ffa's cuz it throws off everybody, not just the one being nuked. however, what yoda should have done was morph more devourors and upgrade lings. and use, not broodlings, but ensnare on the sairs. slows em down a bitch load.
just my 2 cents,
Blade |
#6  [51713] |
| rliv113.infocom.com |
Even with the formatting screwups (I still can't understand how you guys manage to do that). I can tell that you put a lot of hard work into this report. There are some great pictures in here and I like your color scheme. My main problem with the report was probably the writing. It was a little weak and left me guessing at times. Still, very nice job. Let me know if you're going to repost this or not. If not, I'll go ahead and rate this one...
Cheers,
Dref |
| #7 Wisest~Yoda[51716] |
| pm3-1-134.boscobel.mwt.net |
kek i shudve killed blue
i wouldve had him if i had upgraded damn crack attack but i didnt know i was gonna use them until too late :(. And i missed exactly ONE templar with broodling and 2 storms took out most my air because of bad micro =
anyhow good report and stuff
bye
yoda |
| #8 Kane-[51723] |
| ftmadisonagent.lisco.net |
First, lemme say I do NOT, I repeat NOT, have gosu scv micro, I just attack moved the little midgets. And second, 1 vult 2 rines w/o repairing depots<protoss. Period. :( If only I would have started at a different spot, like switched with yoda, and it would have been an entirely different game :) Or if I woulda been left alone on my plateau, I was almost back in :/
Anyways, good job. I didn't even see half of the stuff you said cause I was goofin off in the wee corners of the map :/ Great job, but the dire ffa woulda been funnier :) |
| #9 CynicalMagician[51735] |
| px1cl.gv.wave.shaw.ca |
It gets better every time SCV...
Writing: Very good for the most part. I didn't find any real grammar/punc. errors, and there were some nice descriptions. However, I would have to agree with dref, that sometimes it was a little hard to follow. Not anything unreadable, but sometimes a bit iffy, ya know? Some funny stuff in there though, I laughed out loud when you said: "And, he celebrates! Like a slave that made it up north!" As offensive as anyone else may find it, I thought it was hilarious.
Images: Pretty good, although I would say that you used the same font too much.. No biggy though. Bitchin' collages, but the last big one: Bigblood.jpg was a little weird.. You needed to have some borders between the pics. All in all though, definitely above average.
Appearance: As dref said there's the formatting problem, and I must ask the same question he did, how the hell do you guys do that? Anyway, I'm not much for that light blue text, but it's not like it was ugly or anything. I'm just not a big fan of it. I also would have wrapped text around the images a little more, or used some [center] tags rather than [left]. Nice though.
Overall: I like it, a lot. The sig pic was cool, as was the assassin of the week. Keep making more, but you may want to take on a couple 2v2's before you jump right into 4 FFA's. FFA's are a bitch to follow sometimes, as I'm sure you learned >). Can't wait for your next.
-CynicalMagician |
| #10 The Asylum[51736] |
| ce-stjh-01-01-e0.cbl.nf.net |
| Great job Hostile. It's really good, although it's a bit wide for my screen, but that's no big deal. The writing and pics were good, and it was very easy to follow, which is the biggest problem most FFA reports have. In the final picture though, you should have all the blood piles in circles around the SCV to make it look like they all surounded him and he killed 'em. That'd be cooler than these little piles of blood arranged in parallel rows. |
| #11 The Asylum[51738] |
| ce-stjh-01-01-e0.cbl.nf.net |
| Whoa, nobody else thinks it was easy to follow. I'll read it again just to make sure I think it is. |
| #12 CynicalMagician[51750] |
| px1cl.gv.wave.shaw.ca |
Oh yeah, regarding that last sig pic. I wanna see him take on an air unit. He would own carriers hardcore...
-CynicalMagician |
| #13 AzureHeart[51755] |
| spider-te073.proxy.aol.com |
Nice report hostile, wow i forgot how tough it is to catch all the action in a ffa(he said as if he ever did know), i was looking for some of the other stuff i saw, but i never even noticed the huge battles between yoda and LMW. ALso in LMW's defense, he did have obs, just that i targeted the obs and forge first then shot down all his observers =). ALso on the big battle with Yoda, he did quite a job broodling' my templar(god queens are such whores), but 2 storms from a wussy templar hiding in a shuttle took out 36 mutas(really bunched up), that turned the tide of the battle for me. imbalance > all =). Great report and great game ppl. Laterz,
The Blue...errrr, AzureHeart
(The Blue Wonder is a bit too spandex-y for my tastes ;) |
| #14 Hostile~SCV[51757] |
| spider-tf073.proxy.aol.com |
I don't know how I'm pushing that stuff to the side. I'm obviously using some sort of bizarre HTML tag I don't know shiznit about. Dref and the rest of the raters, don't wait. I spent about 6 hours writing/making the pics for this and i want it rated ASAP. Maybe I'll get something higher than an 8.
The Hoss Bot |
| #15 [51763] |
| rliv113.infocom.com |
hehe, nope
you get an 8... :P
Good job though... maybe I'll look at your code and see what you screwed up... :P
Cheers,
Dref |
| #16 [51765] |
| rliv113.infocom.com |
Okay, here's your problem. the <td> tag isn't good enough. You need to also have a <table> tag.
So it should be <table><td> at the beginning of your report.
Don't forget the </td></table> at the end or Netscape users won't be able to read the report.
Cheers,
Dref |
| #17 Hostile~SCV[51768] |
| spider-tf064.proxy.aol.com |
alright. Thanks, dref.
The Hoss Bot |
| #18 King-Lewis[51769] |
| modemcable098.144-200-24.mtl.mc.videotron.net |
| I so like the end pictures of ur BRS :P |
| #19 Agitated Hostile~SCV[51784] |
| spider-tf041.proxy.aol.com |
Damn. I just remembered... I forgot minimaps throughout the entire BR. I kept telling myself to make those before I posted it....
I bet that costs me a really high rating. |
| #20 CynicalMagician[51817] |
| px3cl.gv.wave.shaw.ca |
| I'm relatively confused about how this got an 8 and TX-0's new one got a 9, but ok... |
| #21 Incredibly Agitated Hostile~SCV[51823] |
| spider-wn034.proxy.aol.com |
<trying not to sound conceited>
So am I.
</trying not to sound conceited> |
| #22 Wynr[51839] |
| neptune.cohr.com |
| Looks like a great report but it is too wide for my screen. Please repost in a narrower format. thanks. |
| #23 Neal64[51841] |
| spider-wb052.proxy.aol.com |
| Make the SCV killing a Goliath, with like animated pics. Nice report, 8.5 i say. |
| #24 LMW[51843] |
| spider-wk071.proxy.aol.com |
| Dude, do a battle report with me vs alluvem, and let me win it. Um.. also... whatever the rest said. |
| #25 Shepherd[51851] |
| cm-24-161-49-222.nycap.rr.com |
I think I will NOT comment, seeing as Hostile~SCV is getting ready to kill us all.
Did you guys see his kills number, and how he killed all lings in one shot?
And I see he's getting to be incredibly Agitated. . .
Well. . .anyway, I really enjoyed the BR. I would give it a 9.
I loved the humor among ppl at intervals. I loved how red floated his starport around in middle of a battle. :) |
| #26 [51884] |
| 154.5.157.79 |
| the author pic didn't work for me. =( |
| #27 Bellin[52267] |
| 196.30.126.157 |
I thought this was easy enough to follow and above all a good read.
I enjoyed it and thought higher ratings were in order.
nice.
Bellin |
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