| #1 Wraithfighter[51745] |
| mail.mx.brainstorm.net |
| first |
| #2 <font color="669999">person</font>[51747] |
| 1Cust164.tnt2.lax1.da.uu.net |
<font color="669999"><i>i liked the report. gj but it was kinda short.
second =], and read it too
person</i></font> |
| #3 CynicalMagician[51749] |
| px1cl.gv.wave.shaw.ca |
Onward to victory!
Writing: Not too bad... Easy to follow, but it wasn't a real complex game. Fairly sparse for details though, try and add some real descriptions and stuff. Also, some grammar issues. Proofread.
Images: Ok, there are some things that you need to realize about photoshop. It's amazing for high end effects, but I find that it's simple stuff like borders, cropping and moving stuff, and collaging fairly clunky and annoying to use. I like PSP 6.0 for that stuff. And that is what your images needed. You weren't trying to do a lot of the amazing stuff, you were doing collages etc. And with collages you need borders, because otherwise it all blends together. Read the image editing guide in the reporting guides section. It helps. There was enough action in the shots though, even if it was mostly dweb.
Appearance: Ok, you HAVE to lose the colouring of the different unit names and all that, it's incredibly odd looking. Colour the names of the player, and if you write it well, people wont have trouble following who's units are who's. Aside from that, not bad, certainly passable. Nothing fancy though.
Overall: Short game, and a lack of description hurt this BR. Keep trying though.
-CynicalMagician |
| #4 Wraithfighter[51751] |
| mail.mx.brainstorm.net |
| Sorry magician, but not everyone in BR land thinks that grammer is of the utmost importance. Please look at it through the eyes of a regular reader. |
| #5 Wraithfighter[51752] |
| mail.mx.brainstorm.net |
| Sorry magician, but not everyone in BR land thinks that grammer is of the utmost importance. Please look at it through the eyes of a regular reader. |
| #6 <font color=yellow>Protophobic</font>[51753] |
| cm-24-161-2-135.nycap.rr.com |
| <font color=yellow>I happen to think grammar is incredibly important. |
| #7 Nyx[51766] |
| c5520-002.v-wave.com |
gramarr cin mak oor brake eh bee-are
(and a comment too ;)
(P.S. I'm not making fun of the author's spelling! I'm simply agreeing with CynicalMagician) |
| #8 Sonneillon[51767] |
| tsdlsk01d01010124.sk.sympatico.ca |
Agh.
I felt like shit after reading this. Really, I did. Wraithfighter, I have not once seen a report that depressed me. I know that sounds pathetic, but seeing those tanks getting hammered was so sad. Seeing 7+ tanks coated in D-web with Goons pounding on them, it just made me cry.
I didn't see any good blood anywhere either. Agh. By the way, I don't mean the report was sad, (I think it was quite good... 8-8.5 range) but AGH! Those poor, poor innocent tanks.
*cries for a minute, then wipes his eye*
By the way Wraithfighter, you know you are doing something right when you can really affect the emotions of a reader(s). Good job!
-Sonn
(By the way, I was kidding about the crying part for those of you that don't understand sarcasm. I did feel sad though). =] |
| #9 ovinder[51771] |
| erbium-asy-5.rutgers.edu |
good BR. Wondered about upgrades, did they affect the outcome at all? Number of gates?
By the by, grammar & spelling *do* matter.
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| #10 Wraithfighter[51780] |
| mail.mx.brainstorm.net |
So i was a little snotty. But an example of grammer and spelling mistakes from Hostile SCV:
"either make seperate pics of put some borders in there"
It should read
either make seperate pics OR put some borders in there. I will spell check it and do some grammer editing but it is summer vacation and i want to relax. |
| #11 S_Warrior[51795] |
| d5090.dtk.chello.nl |
this br was nice
some extra details like upgrades would be nice but hey it's not the end of the world
but I don't think wraiths would have turned the tide
they don't really hurt toss end game
unless he has no obs and no ht's at all
which he would have produced once he saw wraiths were harrasing him |
| #12 TerranTurtle[51827] |
| 207.198.174.24 |
| That "siege, unsiege, move, siege" tactic that Heartcutter claims stops d-web is crap, btw. You aren't going to have time to do that since the average terran vs. toss battle lasts about 4-6 seconds. |
| #13 Shepherd[51847] |
| cm-24-161-49-222.nycap.rr.com |
| When fighting toss with corsairs, ALWAYS spread out tanks. Not too far apart, but not too close together. If you put them too close to each other, storms, reavers, and Dweb owns them. That's one of the most difficult part for terrans v toss battles. Terrans have to learn how to "even" it up with spreading up army. |
| #14 [51920] |
| spider-wk041.proxy.aol.com |
speling iz impurtent becuz it helps du reeder undarstand betar HYUK HYUK
really though good job, and speed upgraded zealots<tanks goons just kinda crawl around timidly when against tanks
i say dis repurt gets 7.5 |
| #15 Neal64[51921] |
| spider-wk041.proxy.aol.com |
| if there were corsairs wraiths would hav been owned. Stupid tanks take freaking forever to unseige. I was never good with micro ones i qued up my SCV's to attack my BC's instead of repair them. CHOBO |
| #16 Neal64[51922] |
| spider-wk041.proxy.aol.com |
#15 was mine
3 in a row! |
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