| #1 <font color=yellow>Protophobic</font>[57069] |
| cm-24-161-44-132.nycap.rr.com |
<font color=yellow>Firsts: 22
First nons: 19 |
| #2 ChronicZero[57070] |
| p2001056.kdd.net |
| This is exactly what i was hoping for! a spider mine BR! keep up the work buddy |
| #3 JawaAvenger[57071] |
| d6-22.hntnny.optonline.net |
| Pretty good. |
| #4 ChronicZero[57072] |
| p2001056.kdd.net |
| well, not really much of a BR but enjoyable nontheless! |
| #5 IamCanadian[57074] |
| cr467192-a.slnt1.on.wave.home.com |
more fan fics plz
thx gw ^^ |
| #6 Spuzz[57084] |
| jfsn-01-189.dialup.netins.net |
Hehe, this was the best one yet! I was biting my fingernails when the Zerg attacked :)
One slight critique: I sometimes have problems keeping track of who all the charaters are. But with each installment I am getting better at remembering them.
Good work!
Spuzz |
| #7 ooooo[57087] |
| spider-tm064.proxy.aol.com |
| really enjoyable |
| #8 Deranged~SCV[57101] |
| ci991207-b.edgewd1.ky.home.com |
| Ditto what ooooo said! |
| #9 Phoenix-S-[57107] |
| r-174.32.alltel.net |
Once again an excelent fanfic
9 |
| #10 japanadian[57114] |
| cr467192-a.slnt1.on.wave.home.com |
| ditto is a pokemon ( dont ask how i know |
| #11 Phoenix-S-[57115] |
| r-174.32.alltel.net |
| How did you know that!? |
| #12 The..Scarab[57147] |
| AC9B17F7.ipt.aol.com |
PICKUP LINES THAT MAY GET YOU KILLED
1. If you and I were squirrels, could I bust a nut in your hole?
2. I'd like to wrap your legs around my head and wear you like a feedbag.
3. If it's true that we are what we eat, I could be you by morning!
4. How do you like your eggs: poached, scrambled, or fertilized?
5. I was about to go masturbate and I needed a name to go with your face.
6. My love for you is like diarrhea--I just can't hold it in.
7. Roses are red. Violets are blue. I like spaghetti. Let's go fuck.
8. Is that a keg in your pants? 'Cause I would love to tap that ass!
9. If your right leg was Thanksgiving, and your left leg was Christmas, could I meet you between the holidays?
10. You remind me of a championship bass--I don't know whether to mount you or eat you!
11. Your parents must be retarded because you are special.
12. Could I touch your belly button . . . from the inside?
13. I'm not too good at algebra, but doesn't U+I = 69?
14. How about we play lion and lion tamer? You hold your mouth open and I'll put my head in.
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| #13 RhinoAssUgly[57162] |
| bc-pgr-a53-01-02.look.ca |
Whazzah? Am I SUPPOSED to put my fan-fics under 'Other'? I was wondering, but no one smacked my ass when I submitted them to 'StarCraft', so I kept it up.
If I'm evil, let me know.
Anyshit, great work here Moogle! It's pretty hard to keep people straight, but that's just one of the signs of a good epic (usually). I'm a little worried that a certain element may get pissed at us (and our ilk) for dumping gobs n' gobs of fiction on a website called battleREPORTS.com, but what the hell.
Ah well.
Keep 'em coming! =) |
| #14 [B]rando[N][57173] |
| user-38ld1e3.dialup.mindspring.com |
umm....
(1)It was too long
(2)No damn Pics...how can u read something that long and gay without pics?
(3)Im not reading any of your BRs again |
| #15 Phoenix-S-[57179] |
| r-174.27.alltel.net |
| This wasnt a BR, this was a fanfic, and a damn good one at that. |
| #16 Moogle[57184] |
| 180.baltimore-05-10rs.md.dial-access.att.net |
1. Those are probably the funniest pickup lines I have ever seen. ^^
2. Thanks for the input, Rhino. :) I am sure some people will get pissed off about posting fics on a site for battlereports, but it's not like they don't have advance warning. *shrugs*
3. I don't write fics for people who can't read "something that long and gay without pics". I write them for people who enjoy reading further stories about one of their favorite universes. I like to think of fanfiction as a custom campaign - except instead of having the game telling you what you see, you picture it in your mind.
Well, a couple more parts to put up, then I'd probably better get started on the next part... *runs off to the drawing board*
-Moogle |
| #17 ****************[57269] |
| p111.netwood.net |
F**K YOU, YOU PLAJIARIZER!!!
YOU M*TH*R F**KING PI*CE OF SH*T!!!! |
| #18 **********[57273] |
| p111.netwood.net |
i ment that to belt.
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| #19 Bane[57327] |
| fcs01asm.asm.bellsouth.net |
I generally don't like fanfics, but I liked this; that says a lot. You have good descriptive writing, etc.
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