| #1 the-bastard[62001] |
| cx932708-f.elcjn1.sdca.home.com |
| best report ive ever read if i do say so myself |
| #2 starlore[62002] |
| 207-172-128-143.s143.tnt1.col.md.dialup.rcn.com |
please be nice, my first BR and i did the best with the image editor i had=] oh yeah, 1st on my own br, im so happpy.
-starlore |
| #3 starlore[62003] |
| 207-172-128-143.s143.tnt1.col.md.dialup.rcn.com |
| WTF YOU MOFO I HAD MY 1st COMMENT ON CUT+paste |
| #4 Scarab[62004] |
| AC8EB608.ipt.aol.com |
| AcK...My...Eyes... |
#5  [62005] |
| on-tor-blr-a58-03-981.look.ca |
| Hmm, the pics werent bad, but your writing was a little poor, and the colour was NASTY! Close to gold, but not quite, 6 |
| #6 Scarab[62006] |
| AC8EB608.ipt.aol.com |
Well the pics were.....ok. But my problem was the writing. LIke when you said Yatrix made a mistake,m and all I saw was ( i screwed up my base) whats the mistake?
A little better writing, some better pic formatting..like your pics didnt go along with what I was reading, like i read about the guy making lurks, and then I see a pic of the other guys expansion and some rines.
hoy! |
| #7 starlore[62007] |
| 207-172-128-143.s143.tnt1.col.md.dialup.rcn.com |
| That was his main base near the exstractor that i was saying and the lurks we're comming from his exspansion=[ |
| #8 starlore[62008] |
| 207-172-128-143.s143.tnt1.col.md.dialup.rcn.com |
| oh the mistake was he put his suply depot infront of his gas and his barracks above it so it slowed down his gas intake alot and made hi m put more then 3-4 scv's on it. |
| #9 the-bastard[62009] |
| cx932708-f.elcjn1.sdca.home.com |
| now that ive read it, it aint bad but aint real great. The alternating lines of red and white at the beginning look really bad. and yeah there were some details missing, i still never found out what that game ending base mistake was |
| #10 the-bastard[62010] |
| cx932708-f.elcjn1.sdca.home.com |
| nm, posted it while i wrote mine, |
| #11 Hyperchild[62011] |
| 209-130-179-180.nas3.ATM.gblx.net |
| I liked it and I understand everything completely. Only thing I didn't like was the dumb red line/white line thing that I didn't like too much. |
| #12 BW-sux[62012] |
| spider-wl082.proxy.aol.com |
Man, don't write on games on proving grounds or write red-on-white and alternate colors. Proofreading would be nice too.
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BW-sux |
| #13 SiDeWiNDeR|PoW|[62016] |
| spider-we061.proxy.aol.com |
| it was an alright br, not worth a six though...and who the hell r u to steal someone elses idea...Deon?im suprised noone else caught on to that(drunken bastards)..if u gonna name ur peons, make the name creative(when i talk to my peons, my scouter is jean-luke and my first builder is pepe) just some freindly suggestions from a nobody with his own clan.... |
| #14 starlore[62025] |
| 207-172-128-143.s143.tnt1.col.md.dialup.rcn.com |
| well i guess battlereporting isnt my thing.... im good w/ html 'n all. guess i just need to try some more... Gotta get a better iamge editor and stop trying to cram so much into so small, thx for the comments... |
| #15 Yatrix[62039] |
| 1Cust52.tnt1.valparaiso.in.da.uu.net |
figures...i star in a BR as the bitch...love it...oh well, i hope to rematch that lousy muddafugga. he hacks and cheats. i know it! (psst...this is smack talk...that way it peaks interest. chix dig a tough guy, eh?) yah. so bring it The-Bastard. you homosexual...assmonkey!!!
decent report. i was far too sexy tho for that red/white thing. figures i'd get owned, tho. hehe. hey, you forgot one HUGE detail, tho. i killed an overlord...that was huge...anyway, gj, man. thanks for letting me be in it.
Yatrix |
| #16 starlore[62051] |
| 207-172-130-157.s157.tnt3.col.md.dialup.rcn.com |
Well i need to practice, im learning flash and more crap and getting better with my image editor so if you wanna be in it again i think i can get my freind to play you again.. another map but not LT. It wont be gay red/white crap ill make it a descent report=]
starlore |
| #17 BlackNightWolf[62055] |
| cras73p38.navix.net |
| Starlore = cool guy badass writer...... thats what you get for skipping english class i guess. Bastard plays decent but it made him sound better than he is. Its overall a decent presentation but its a horrible read. Concentrated too much on the-bastard if you look at it 2/3 of the info is about him. didn't really detail much about the micro, can't get a sense of how good a game it was..... thats about all i can think of |
| #18 jeezumcrow[62085] |
| svweba03.statestreet.com |
i think t-mac had it summarized, nice images but the reporting was not as good, the writing started well at the start with the intoduction, but it started to get somewhat confusing especially when you were talking about a mistake yatrix was making, i couldnt really tell what it was.
anyways good effort, red background was okay, but it isnt too attractive |
| #19 Warfare[62090] |
| 209-63-113-57.sea.jps.net |
I had no problem with a red background per se, but there should be a way for you to change the picture background color to match so the pics blend intp the BR instead of breaking the flow with white.
Good first effort, keep it up.
War |
| #20 Breeze[62098] |
| proxy.net-bg.net |
| You got potential... It sounds like you are learning from your mistakes (from what you said in your comments) and I'm looking forward to your next one. |
| #21 starlore[62100] |
| 207-172-132-231.s231.tnt5.col.md.dialup.rcn.com |
| Thx for all the comments guys, i should have another one out later today and hopefully i'll have photoshop and this time im doing all the writeing before i even start thinking about the pics.. |
| #22 Templar569[62117] |
| 168.168.234.162 |
| What happened Yates? How come you never play like that against me? :) |
| #23 the-bastard[62135] |
| cx932708-f.elcjn1.sdca.home.com |
| im assuming he actually plays somewhat decent vs you, guess my gosu abilities scared him into playing like a total newbie(return of his earlier trash talking) |
| #24 Snork~Dimmy[62171] |
| async225-per2-isp-1.nas.one.net.au |
errrrmmmm i didn't really like it that much, the effort just wasn't there, i have to get my act together too and release the BR i didn't quite finish, hmmm when i get enough time....
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| #25 Yatrix[62275] |
| 1Cust115.tnt1.valparaiso.in.da.uu.net |
| oh man...the-bastard...NOW IT'S ON, BUTTHOLE!!! (hehe. i called him a butthole?) you will die a bloody death and it will hurt 10x worse than a kakaru bite. DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE!(return of the return smack...think anyone cares yet?) |
| #26 starlore[81021] |
| hwrd1UBR5-3-hfc-0252-d11348a4.rdc1.md.comcastatwork.com |
SiDeWiNDeR|PoW|
suck it yo, I'm not the first person to do that, it's "charicterised" now. get a life yo, noone really care's. |
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