| #1 starlore[63026] |
| 207-172-129-236.s236.tnt2.col.md.dialup.rcn.com |
Please give me hints/tips and criteaq, thanks.
-starlore
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| #2 WarLeaderJustin[63027] |
| spider-ta037.proxy.aol.com |
Good BR. A few suggestions...
1) Please, please, <i>please!</i> Use that spell check program! My eyes are blind now.
2) Uhm, spell check.
3) Spell check!
The spelling deterred A LOT from the BR for me. :(
Good 2nd try. Hehe, funny phrase!
I give it a 70%. It deserves a gold, but nothing higher b/c of the spelling. Sorry!!!!!
-WLJ |
#3  [63029] |
| inehou-pxy06.compaq.com |
OK, this is a perfect example of pretty BR with lacking writing. Here are a few tips
1) Challenger is a pile of 4 pool crap.
2) Challenger more 4 pool power then River Styx.
3) Your spelling is worse then mine.
6
I'm sorry I can't give it gold status
Fox^1 |
| #4 starlore[63031] |
| 207-172-129-236.s236.tnt2.col.md.dialup.rcn.com |
Your giveing me 6 becuse of the map?
I dunno bout you but I like selection of maps, and just becuse you can 4 pool doesent meen you have too. |
| #5 [63033] |
| inehou-pxy06.compaq.com |
Ok sure more details on why I gave you a 6:
<<I made 6 hydralisks>>
Then later on in the statement you said
<<Right about now my hydra den is Done.>>
GJ I wish I could make hydras with no den.
<<I have tons of gas from my freaky build order so I had also reserched speeded zergling.>>
Ummmm You never mentioned making 1 zergling, yet you researched speed. Sure.
<<he has gone around my one sunken (like that was going to do much good anyways? And is now heading around the side of my base whereas he can shoot down my layer without any interferance. >>
O.K. so 2 seconds after you started to say that he attacked you right? Then I read this.
<<Yes, My little freinds came to the rescue, I call them mini-rippers. moveing in and burrowing in stealth they ripped the guts out of the enemy line without warning or patience; and there was silence>>
Ok so you used lurkers that you forgot you had. What I want to know is why this guy never ever scanned on that attack? Did he waste it? Or does he suck? I mean he must have been really random since you never remembered his name, but you really seemed to take plenty of SS.
You have guards, lurks and all sorts of stuff, but this guy has like 2 rines? GJ The computer could do better.
6
Fox^1
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| #6 [63034] |
| inehou-pxy06.compaq.com |
Ok sure more details on why I gave you a 6:
I made 6 hydralisks
Then later on in the statement you said
Right about now my hydra den is Done.
GJ I wish I could make hydras with no den.
I have tons of gas from my freaky build order so I had also reserched speeded zergling.
Ummmm You never mentioned making 1 zergling, yet you researched speed. Sure.
he has gone around my one sunken (like that was going to do much good anyways? And is now heading around the side of my base whereas he can shoot down my layer without any interferance.
O.K. so 2 seconds after you started to say that he attacked you right? Then I read this.
Yes, My little freinds came to the rescue, I call them mini-rippers. moveing in and burrowing in stealth they ripped the guts out of the enemy line without warning or patience; and there was silence.
Ok so you used lurkers that you forgot you had. What I want to know is why this guy never ever scanned on that attack? Did he waste it? Or does he suck? I mean he must have been really random since you never remembered his name, but you really seemed to take plenty of SS.
You have guards, lurks and all sorts of stuff, but this guy has like 2 rines? GJ The computer could do better.
6
Fox^1
We need a comment preview button =P |
| #7 FireNova[63036] |
| modem115.tc-1pool.directinter.net |
No no no starlore. You've got it all wrong. There are a couple of good things that make a BR good, and one of them is the map, but he didn't give you a six because of Challenger.
1)Spell check is your friend. Trust me. It's soo hard to try and wade through something that has spelling errors in every sentence.
2)Grammar is good too. I noticed a few spots where you grammar sucked.
3)Pictures can help a lot, but it's not always a picture that makes a BR a ten. Check out .Praetor's work for an example.
4)Get a good decent map where you aren't subject to 4-pool games and they are always so short. Dire, Polaris, Showdown, Green Valleys.. are all examples of fairly good maps to play on.
5)Get a game that's actually worth BR'ing. If you get 4-pooled most people aren't going to want to read about it. If you run over a zerg w/ 3/3 Infantry and he still has 0/0 lings nobody wants to read about it. If you have opponents who can keep the pressure, show you some amazing things, and have awesome battles, that's the kind of game to report.
I'd give this a 5 or a 6. Not gold material. Neither is my stuff, but that's because all of the good players are afraid of my 11-17 record :)
FireNova |
| #8 starlore[63038] |
| 207-172-129-236.s236.tnt2.col.md.dialup.rcn.com |
| He had more then 2=[ I didnt take pics when he had alot becuse I was to busy microing, so when the battle was just about over I took pics... He didnt say anything during the game and i ran outa ss space at the time I take the screen shot of the scores (where I usually get names) but since It doesent say that I ran out (only in the game does the lil msg pop up) I didnt know=[ |
| #9 starlore[63039] |
| 207-172-129-236.s236.tnt2.col.md.dialup.rcn.com |
| Well im gonna use spellcheck next time... And ill try not to proof reed while im talking to 5 people so I can realise when I mess up=] Thx. |
| #10 WarLeaderJustin[63041] |
| spider-wa062.proxy.aol.com |
Cmon, guys, it wasn't <b>that</b> bad. Another rater, plz, average the score to gold. It's decent, and deserves higher than a 6. Although, who am I to judge ratings of Fox? Bah, who cares.. my CD-ROM is still on da bLiTz! <i>(Notice the coolness of that word by alternating caps!)</i>
-WLJ |
| #11 R0addog[63044] |
| proxy1-external.pr1.on.home.com |
lol starlore
Proof "REED" your comments :P
LoL
Overall the report was ok... I would go with wlj... a 7 gold report.
U shouldve added alot more detail/speeling blah blah, u know what everyone else said.
<i>Notice the coolness of WLJ for using alternating caps</i> |
| #12 OKAY REPORTS...[63046] |
| spc-isp-van-uas-28-95.sprint.ca |
OKAY REPORTS....
SPELL CHECK!!
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| #13 OKAY REPORTS...[63047] |
| spc-isp-van-uas-28-95.sprint.ca |
OKAY REPORTS....
SPELL CHECK!!
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| #14 wArLeAdErJuStIn[63049] |
| spider-wa062.proxy.aol.com |
WoW, i'M hOt, NoW!
-WlJ |
| #15 starlore[63052] |
| 207-172-129-236.s236.tnt2.col.md.dialup.rcn.com |
| Fox: the scan thing, I dunno if he wasted it or what, I don't even know if he had a scanner at that time in the game. |
| #16 CrazyTheFirebat[63053] |
| ci991207-b.edgewd1.ky.home.com |
| Not haveing a scanner when fighting zerg on challanger...HMMMMMMMMMMM........I smell a newbie basher.... |
| #17 Ok...[63054] |
| dialup-209.244.73.169.LosAngeles1.Level3.net |
Normally I don't comment, but you said you wanted some feedback. I admire all the effort you put into the pics and everything, but if you spell stuff like "minutes" or "decide" or even "do" wrong, I think it really detracts from the report.
BTW: Both players cannot start at the 12 o'clock position :) |
| #18 starlore[63055] |
| 207-172-129-236.s236.tnt2.col.md.dialup.rcn.com |
| It was a pubbie game=[ I dunno if its a newb or not; I dont sit there and as them questions on their skill before we play, I say "go". |
| #19 -=Dark)^(olf=-[63059] |
| port-1-57-56k.beckley.zoomnet.net |
"Huked Un FoNix wurkt fur ne"
<i>-Starlore</i> |
| #20 Yatrix[63080] |
| 1Cust235.tnt2.valparaiso.in.da.uu.net |
okay, starlore...the reason you got a 6 is simply this: i wasn't in it (although the one i was in got a ...6).
good effort. the spelling does kill it. i enjoyed your use of the lil' buttons. reminds me of VB. i'd like to be in another one of yours. we should work together on one. hehe. i can write very well (got a 6 on a report w/o pics on first try) and you have html and stuff, so we could do well. but, that sounds like a pain, so FU. =0
anyway, gj and good effort. keep trying. spell check and attn to small details. and you are all good.
Yatrix |
#21  [63081] |
| on-tor-blr-a58-01-465.look.ca |
| Yeah what fox said, 6 |
| #22 starlore[63143] |
| 207-172-135-53.s276.tnt2.col.md.dialup.rcn.com |
FOX:
I said I made 6 hydras, then later in the paragraph I said I made my den and had lurkers 1/2 way done, NOT JUST MADE MY DEN.
Next Time I'll tell you ever thing I make so you know i made zerglings. I thought the picture would clear that up but I guess not.
I dont know what happend w/ His scanner, I dont know if he built one or what. And he had more then 2 marines I just didnt take screen shots when He had tons of troops becuse I was to busy playing the game, microing, y'know stuff you normoly do during games?
- starlore
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