| #1 WarLeaderJustin[65765] |
| spider-wc082.proxy.aol.com |
1st with style.
-WLJ |
| #2 for the love of god[65771] |
| AC8D0BEF.ipt.aol.com |
| WLJ do you ever get out? |
| #3 Sexy^Orangutang[65776] |
| spider-tl034.proxy.aol.com |
| damn wlj..this just came out like 2 seconds ago...i gotta read this shit now..part 1 kicked ass |
| #4 Sexy^Orangutang[65777] |
| spider-tl034.proxy.aol.com |
| btw wlj make more sc6 plz |
| #5 WarLeaderJustin[65778] |
| spider-wc083.proxy.aol.com |
Dude, wtf do you write or copy this from? What kind of "notepad" inserts symbols like that? I'm not going to read it right now, because, I hate to say it, that detracts a lot from the writing. However, I enjoyed the action and plot in the first one, and eagerly await the correct version of this one.
-WLJ |
| #6 Sexy^Orangutang[65779] |
| spider-tk081.proxy.aol.com |
| k, read it, kicks ass, nuff said. people read it. give it 10, be happy. thx gw |
| #7 Psi0verDoSe[65792] |
| spider-wa062.proxy.aol.com |
| nice story my compliments to the writer |
| #8 ][~Praetor~][[65811] |
| bele175.wuh.wustl.edu |
| nice work, post more |
| #9 Yoyo[65834] |
| dhcp-129-64-164-38.dorm.brandeis.edu |
| Just need clarification... the protoss and terran were communicating telepathically right? Because no way races light years apart would use english as their langauage. other than that kick ass |
| #10 Jizmo[65857] |
| 1Cust215.tnt29.chi5.da.uu.net |
Isn't battlereports.com for Battle reports? Or is it for stories not related to On-line games? =)
OMG, I am sooo bored....... |
| #11 ThieverIV[66110] |
| spider-wo042.proxy.aol.com |
| gj webcourier. Try to see if u can fix the wierd symbols for quotes, apostrephies etc. Other than that I give it about an 8 or 9 |
| #12 Super-Loki[66213] |
| comp-169.compuall.net |
| Hey guys, this is the author. When I first found out that this story was on battlereports.com I was very surprised, and angry because I thought someone was taking credit for my work, but that's not the case I believe now. I'm happy that courier liked my story enough to post it on another site. I wonder why all those wierd symbols showed up, because they're not in the original, I swear. I wrote this story a couple of years ago when broodwars first came out, but now that I've posted it on Fanfiction.net, people seem to like it, so when insomnia hits me at 3am, I think I'll continue it until its run its course. If anyone's interested, I have all the way up to chapter 5 on Fanfiction.net Look up the author Super-Loki if you're interested, or just look under games-starcraft. Please post comments there if you like it, thanks. P.S for people who were complaining in the first post about the length, chapter 5 is longer, heheheh. Thanks a lot for the interest everyone. |
#13 [66278] |
| on-tor-unv-ap3-01-38.look.ca |
| this had 2323452435 wierd symbols in it, 4 |