| #1 Jerry[67643] |
| nas-249-85.la-t.navipath.net |
| Hey guys. This is my first Battle Report. Hope you like it. And please tell me how I can make it better.(even though I kno it needs to be way better) |
| #2 :+:SlipKnoT:+:[67644] |
| bc-kam-a53-01-34.look.ca |
| First non own!!!!! |
| #3 Jerry[67645] |
| nas-249-85.la-t.navipath.net |
And my name is NOT actually Jerry by the way
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| #4 interesting...[67646] |
| a-db.aspn.net |
| what is it? |
| #5 WarLeaderJustin[67647] |
| spider-tq034.proxy.aol.com |
I swear to God once again this isn't me. I'm releasing a different "battle report," under a different name some time soon enough.
<i>"Jerry , feeling very airsick, went to the bathroom to vomit. Inside, he thought he heard someone fart. A loud and smelly one too."</i>
I found that line very funny, if not immature. The rest was... decent enough, but not thrilling to read. I give it a 50% for fan fic.
-WLJ |
| #6 Snork~Dimmy[67648] |
| async208-per2-isp-4.nas.one.net.au |
| im no fan of fan-fic, i didn't really enjoy this, next time write a BR on a battle, as in a game of SC/BW |
| #7 Snork~Dimmy[67652] |
| async209-per2-isp-5.nas.one.net.au |
| Heh, just read it properly and it wasnt too bad, prolly about a 5 |
| #8 Jeej[67655] |
| 213.131.139.130 |
Who gives a flying f*ck what WLJ thinks anywa? Who died and made him matter? "I think... I feel... I'd rate this a... I swear I didn't write this, but I'm working on somethin or other..."
Who cares? STFU, WLJ -- you're a waste of space.
I mean, c'mon, have you actually *read* any of the stuff he's used up storage with here? Sheesh... great cure for a hangover though - makes you heave 'til you see the angels. |
| #9 [LoR]-Punisher[67661] |
| ktce1.156ce.singa.pore.net |
Interesting style to present text only report.But it isn't fantastic.
I'll give 5. |
| #10 Gonzo[67664] |
| 213.131.139.130 |
| LOL "heave 'til you see the angels", hehe, I like that. Actually this Justin guy has been annoying the hell out of me too, I just didn't say anything. Uh-oh, I think I just did. Oh, well, anyhow. Glad someone did :) |
| #11 mlylecarlin[67667] |
| cache2.gw.utexas.edu |
| F'in poopieface! |
| #12 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[67674] |
| gateway.ncdsb.com |
The only reason I got better at my br's and am now ( I think ) within striking distance of a ten on my next br is through constructive criticism from Fox, Drefsab, the Cabbit, WC3 and others.
Thanks guys.
Criticism is how you get better. |
#13  [67687] |
| adsl-78-149-155.cae.bellsouth.net |
This report rocks. 10!!!
Kidding, it's Machine. Im just bored and ready to leave work, hehe.
Carpe Diem
Machine
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| #14 (V)_Kill_FORCE[67689] |
| pm10-21.discoverynet.com |
| yo it was ok and if any 1 is interested in joinag a sc/bw clan go to b.net chennle clan mpd and tell them u heard about the clan from me and check the web page www.clanmpd.org |
| #15 Starookie[67691] |
| edtn009848.hs.telusplanet.net |
| 6. |
| #16 TheCabbit[67695] |
| bgm-24-94-56-16.stny.rr.com |
| Oooh, I help Dago out? Interesting... |
| #17 Cracky_The_Peon[67705] |
| thor.gua.net |
| And MY fancfics only get a 6? WTF? I hate all of you! (Not really, but you get the idea) I should have started writing later or something. bah. |
| #18 Shadow~Skull[67758] |
| ihproxy1.proxy.lucent.com |
| I quit reading after i read,"in the drop shitp the marines were pimping the medics." sheeesh what a crock of pooo |
| #19 NeverBeenHere[67833] |
| h24-66-197-125.cg.shawcable.net |
| God. Can't you guys lay off people that can't write BR's as nice as Breeze, YRM or any of those guys? God! People do this so that you can read them, if you choose not to read them, then don't flame them! I'm sure some effort was placed into the making of this, maybe not a lot, but still... |
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