| #1 HyKe[68283] |
| cflow1-if-1.mts.net |
| hmmmm one of the jpegs got some weird teal shit down at the bottom that isnt supposed to be the =/ oh well, i got first =D, tho it is past midnight and im right here right now =P |
| #2 [bad]derek[68284] |
| cache-rm07.proxy.aol.com |
1st non-author
OWN! |
| #3 [bad]derek[68285] |
| cache-rm07.proxy.aol.com |
1st non-author
OWN! |
| #4 [bad]derek[68286] |
| spider-tr034.proxy.aol.com |
1st non-author
OWN! |
| #5 [bad]derek[68287] |
| spider-tr034.proxy.aol.com |
| oops |
| #6 garett[68288] |
| spider-tq053.proxy.aol.com |
1st non-author, non spamming imbecile
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| #7 .ClanKiller.[68289] |
| sdn-ar-002flfmyeP335.dialsprint.net |
Well 'technically' I'm 3rd but thats only b/c [bad]derek took it upon himself to post 3 times. I like the report! Short but sweet and to the point. No nonsensical (issat a word?) texts or modem-stopping grafiks (definately a word! dont yell at me. why is the word phonetic not spelled phonetically?) and i personally cannot think of a better way to summarize a 4 person free for all without making it last forever, and in the process making itself old. again, good job.
.ClanKiller. |
| #8 .ClanKiller.[68290] |
| sdn-ar-002flfmyeP335.dialsprint.net |
| D'oh Ok so i'm 4th...garett snuck in...and [bad]derek posted 4, not 3 times. |
| #9 phoenix[LoD][68292] |
| d185d17b5.rochester.rr.com |
Not too shabby for your first BR, hyke.
The collages were nice. Something I thought was especially creative: the freeform selected letters forming the word "gay."
Apart from a few little mistakes (getting the race and starting locations correct), my major suggestion would be to get a lot more detailed. This appeared to be a good, fairly long game. You seem to have rushed through everything. There's a lot of interesting details that could really spice up your writing. I may even go too far into describing and explaining the game in my own reports, but I think it's better to err on that side than the other.
Your pictures and collages were nice; I liked those. You covered the main sequence of the game well and kept the flow going. However, I think that your next report would read much better with some detail thrown in. Anything would help: interesting building placement, skillfull micro, comparing production-building numbers, even comments from the players during the game.
Stick with it, and your reports will be very nice.
-phoenix[LoD] |
| #10 :+:SlipKnoT:+:[68293] |
| bc-kam-a53-01-71.look.ca |
haha basic lost own
gw on the report |
| #11 Zeraan_Bartrack[68296] |
| spider-ti032.proxy.aol.com |
That massive zerg attack was ultralisks, hydralisks, and zergling all combined, I was able to kill them with several dragoons, 2 dark templars, several cannons, and 3 or 4 high templars, if anyone's interested in that attack. But he killed my nexus at the natural, and killed all building not on my main...
anyways, nice br, hyke |
#12  [68303] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
This is a pretty cool BR. I'd say that trying to do an FFA as your first BR is quite a chore, but you seemed to follow the action pretty well with your text. I think the game being on Lost Temple helped with this.
I'm not usually one to worry about screenshot quality, God knows, look at my BRs. However, I really don't think the screenshots added much to this report. The most important thing in my opinion is not to shrink your shots. A person should be able to look at a screenshot and instantly know where and what is going on and that wasn't happening here.
Still, good job, and using suggestions that you receive here, you can only improve... ;-)
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Cheers,
Dref |
| #13 HyKe[68326] |
| cflow1-if-1.mts.net |
| thanx dref,phoen and others, i know, my images arent great, but within the next few months i shud be getting my hands on freehand 8 =P which i learned how to use quit well in graphics so i will be able to do more stuff like elipse/circle screenshot cuts, magnifying lens's to help see small things like a single dt in a mineral line, and it would have been much longer and more detailed had i not accidentaly, deleted it, not once, but twice going to the preview report section. By the time i got going on what u see now it was about 1 in the morning here and i was frustrated as hell, so i tended to air on the side of getting it done and over with as fast as possible so i could sleep =D anyway, now that i know that the 512x482 size fits the screen perfectly, ill be able to add about as large screens and hopefully not hafta shrink them. Also typos were a problem and i realised lying in bed last night that i never actually told u wat map it was on, or gave you any kind of starting minimap base summary, also i need to make a big GG graphic to signifiy the end of the br cuz it seemed kind of ambiguous in this one. anyway, ive cleared my screenshot folder, and im on the prowl for a gg to br for tonite, cuz i want a gold =P cya online..... |
| #14 Wangsonn[68345] |
| fcs00gsp.gsp.bellsouth.net |
| i liked it |
| #15 WarGod[68351] |
| cm985140-b.denton1.tx.home.com |
| how the hell do you yake screenshots?????¿¿¿¿¿¿????? |
| #16 [bad]derek[68359] |
| spider-wq042.proxy.aol.com |
| you cant "yake" screenshots on an imac WarGod, and even if you could, i think everyone who plays SC has a PC nowadays=) |
| #17 LuckyNewbie:P[68418] |
| user-33qtoia.dialup.mindspring.com |
| OMFG!!! YOU MORON!!! IT WASN"T ILL GET DROPPED!! IT WAS ME YOU CRETIN!!! OMFG!!!!!!! I won the damn thing and you dont even get my name right? LOL |
| #18 LuckyNewbie:P[68420] |
| user-33qtoia.dialup.mindspring.com |
here, ill even tell you the stuff you didn't report:
**I floated a cc early before my first factory to the upper left isle
**The Gay DT was killed when i put up 3 turrets, not 1
**Basic!'s attack was utterly smashed by high ground tanks, but it wasn't a too heavily defended main because i was making scvs outta all three cc's and not enough factories
**I didn't float a rax above my natural, it was 3 goliaths
**The surprise attack on my main by kami silenced my early counter to it with tanks and marines
**When I was attacked by Kami, i ran out of gas and dangerously low on minerals, ass all my expansions were mined out
**I made a late turbo newbie on Basic!'s former main with two tanks and shut down his income
Check your screen shots carefully, or just plain check them. On the "Gay DT" picture, u can see someone saying "Newbie"
i think ill go kill myself now |
| #19 Cyan[68436] |
| spider-wf052.proxy.aol.com |
Basic!:Spawned brown toss at 3 oclock.
IllGetDroped:Spawned brown toss at 3 oclock.
Kami_Bum:Spawned brown toss at 3 oclock.
Zeraan_Bartrack:Spawned brown toss at 3 oclock.
right....
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| #20 HyKe[68444] |
| cflow1-if-1.mts.net |
OMFG copy and paste owns me
serves me right for deleting it three times in a row.........
i dont recall the turbo but i could be wrong, and i couldve sworn it was dropped........... |
| #21 Basic[68603] |
| proxy2-external.rdc1.sdca.home.com |
| good br but fuckign gay game stupid ass dbl teamers ;[ they attack me while im attacking lucky which i woudla owned but i had to send 1/2 my army back to save my main then i get bum rushed by like 99999 fucking hdyra gay shit ;[ |
| #22 Basic[68604] |
| proxy2-external.rdc1.sdca.home.com |
| o ya lucky i just read your post and.. "**Basic!'s attack was utterly smashed by high ground tanks, but it wasn't a too heavily defended main because i was making scvs outta all three cc's and not enough factories" is complete bullshit cause you woulda been dead having i not been attacked you had like 2 tanks left w/ 1/2 hp on the cliff which woulda died to the rest of my army which i left at my min only, so lie more plz |
| #23 Findail[68701] |
| uA2-p61.dreamscape.com |
i liked the report especially the everyone getting brown toss at 3 part gueiniss just tell everyone thats there for comic relief the comments are good too basic fighting with lucky hehe... keep righting and next time get me to obs with you for humouris comments sorry i cant spell so okay c yall latterz
-Findail
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