| #1 RaZaGhAx[71108] |
| cx55467-a.irvn1.occa.home.com |
1st....^^
RaZ |
| #2 (...Blaze...)[71109] |
| mp-217-242-66.daxnet.no |
2nd... t_T
now im gonna read it |
| #3 :+:SlipKnoT:+:[71111] |
| bc-kam-a53-02-59.look.ca |
| One thing the map was made by Blizzard not by some guy. BTW Mayhem owns ok? Get the map right next time. |
| #4 AkumaSpawn[71112] |
| cate1-216.reshall.ou.edu |
Ooh, single-digit comment!
Wasn't bad at all. *STAMP* |
| #5 DivvyO[71115] |
| 162.119.232.100 |
Don't make a one page long stroke paragraph saying "look! big images" only to have a total of 141k of total size. I loaded that thing in half a second. It'd take modems about a minute. There's collages on this webpage that are larger in size than every single image in your report combined.
Whenever you tell a story, people get hooked on that first paragraph. Shift gears, and it leaves people empty, hollow, like a follower without a path. You give me a line about how this will cripple my net access for god-knows-how-long, and then give me a whole lot of reaaaally small images (many of which were just cropped chat), and I just don't want to read it. Things like that just give me a bad taste in the mouth. Next time either don't use the "these images will own j00" paragraph, or put some more pictorial meat in these damned things. Maybe I'll actually read this later. From the other comments you're getting, it seems solid. Except, of course, for :+:Slip "Where the hot girls at" Knot:+: and his other criticism. |
| #6 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[71116] |
| static-45.itcanada.com |
Own more plz thx gw.
9, no obvious flaws here except the map comment ;) |
| #7 DivvyO[71119] |
| 162.119.232.100 |
| The game was short, not enough pics (the zerg trying to take that expansion for 10 minutes sure would have been nice, you know, instead of morphing building pics) to satisfy that old previous post, but that was some solid writing. Good luck on the next one, and don't use quite so many line breaks. |
| #8 Snork~Dimmy[71120] |
| async70-per2-isp-3.nas.one.net.au |
| not too bad |
| #9 <font color="green">Flood-G</font>[71127] |
| spider-wd011.proxy.aol.com |
hmmmm...i guess it was better then before....but 3 things.
1) the map wasn't made by just some guy, it was made by a god who works at blizzard (all people who work at blizzard are gods)
2)im running at 56k here, i walked my dog, ate my dinner AND waited for christmas but now it was all in vain, those million pics that would blow my comp loaded in bout 50secs
3)more commentary on the battles or pics on battle, battle pics are the kinda pics that attract people, not text or building placement, what happened to the 100 hydralisks getting fried?! juice it up, less talk about expo location, more on the anniliation of alien races as there blood is smeered across the map |
| #10 ])esT[71133] |
| adsl-64-217-151-111.dsl.eulstx.swbell.net |
| So i'm a newb...is it my fault? ;) thanx for the help all |
| #11 ])esT[71134] |
| adsl-64-217-151-111.dsl.eulstx.swbell.net |
| So i'm a newb...is it my fault? ;) thanx for the help all |
| #12 {~Ascension~}[71135] |
| 212.rochelle-park-01-02rs16rt.nj.dial-access.att.net |
Good job. Ditto to what was said above. And I wanted a picture of the hydras getting fried... ;)
8 |
| #13 D-o-r-f-l[71141] |
| cable-o-90.sigecom.net |
| er... u said the whole game was a struggle for someone trying to take down an expansion, i didnt see that... i saw a failed attack followed by a sucessful one but i dont deem that as "forever"... |
| #14 ])esT[71143] |
| adsl-64-217-151-111.dsl.eulstx.swbell.net |
| he streamed units into it for about 10 minutes before it finally fell, and that was the turning point of the game...sorry if i didnt make that very clear |
| #15 Mr. Fascist[71147] |
| ihproxy2.proxy.lucent.com |
| Looks like the one you did before..... AH shit! It is the same one, well i could see the pics and my 56k didnt do a dive at all so its a good BR from here. |
| #16 Stimmed.Medic[71151] |
| modem4.tc-1pool.directinter.net |
Not too bad, but you should have had more pictures to follow up the talk about how long it was going to load. You said the whole game was a series of little battles but all I saw were a couple of them.
Not too bad, but I gotta say something to Enth. You need to get lower scores when you play. You got a low score here and won, but got the highest score in a game yesterday, and lost :( GW tho.
Stimmed.Medic
--Your proctologist called, he found your head-- |
| #17 FatesStarScryer[71152] |
| res112a-032.rh.rit.edu |
| One of the pics was missing, and there wasn't enough action shots. More blood, more action, maybe a collage. You got good cut and paste and crop skills, take some time to add more pics and whatnot. Nice witty comments though...i alughed at the cans sections...funny. hehe. ok yeah not bad for a 1st attempt...i hope your puppy is doing well. |
| #18 WarLeaderJustin[71153] |
| spider-tq062.proxy.aol.com |
Ok. Good. Decent BR. I'd give it a 7.5
-WLJ |
| #19 EnThuseD[71159] |
| pool-63.52.17.243.atln.grid.net |
for all u ppl who think this game was short...i will leave
u at this i made 600 some odd units i think the game lasted
about 34 minutes
damn toss owns that map...unless u let zerg expand
everywhere :P
|
| #20 gchucky[71161] |
| ool-18bd42ec.dyn.optonline.net |
| nice br. imo, most of the images are too small. other than that, pretty good. 7. |
| #21 MaD-PoRk777[71162] |
| ACA10822.ipt.aol.com |
| Ummm...I loaded the Report on my 56k in about 30 secs... and the map is mayhem bdw |
| #22 willwinforfood[71181] |
| ool-18bd7836.dyn.optonline.net |
this was pic heavy?? wark? anyways gj on the report.
7.5 to 8 |
#23  [71187] |
| as530055.infocom.com |
Decent report. I find it interesting that you spent so much time telling about how long this would take to load, but this has already been mentioned. I also found the pointless drivel to be tiresome at times, but once you got going on the BR itself, it wasn't too bad.
If anything, you could have probably added a few action shots as most of your pics didn't really show much. The mini maps were good though.
Overall, easy 7 in my opinion.
Cheers,
Dref |
| #24 )SNOW-[71216] |
| 151.sherman-oaks-08-09rs16rt.ca.dial-access.att.net |
| bleh thanks for the report.. but u shouldnt have BR'd it cuz "So, in the end, )Snow- was owned by EnThuseD, with a little bit of a fight..." :) but gj on a not that good game.. yea i know if i added 5 more gates i woulda won but hey! yea it was a 34 min game, ])est made it seem like it was 5 mins ;) (np though). some more action happened but it was too one sided to make it a 10. i give a 7/8 to it b/c of my suckiness. btw i said "all ass to me" because u guys were giving me silent treatment + battle.org yelled at me. GL on ur next br though! |
| #25 rommelkiller[71222] |
| spider-tk082.proxy.aol.com |
| 7. i wish i could talk as fluently as drefsab, but i cant |
| #26 ThieverIV[71225] |
| spider-wd081.proxy.aol.com |
Hey, I got an idea. How about EVERYONE says the exact same comment: "You said this would take 30 min to load, more like 30 sec." Maybe if every single person says that like you people have been doing, it'll make more of a difference than if someone says it once!
(BTW if anyone took me seriously about that comment they deserve to die) |
| #27 Sexy^Orangutang[71230] |
| spider-tj064.proxy.aol.com |
psssssttt,snow, you let HIM obs, but nooooooooooooooo not poor old sexy me huh? i hate you ;)
(p.s. if you take that seriously...then...ya)
Sexy^Orangutang |
| #28 Sexy^Orangutang[71233] |
| spider-tj053.proxy.aol.com |
psssssttt,snow, you let HIM obs, but nooooooooooooooo not poor old sexy me huh? i hate you ;)
(p.s. if you take that seriously...then...ya)
Sexy^Orangutang |
| #29 Sexy^Orangutang[71234] |
| spider-tj053.proxy.aol.com |
psssssttt,snow, you let HIM obs, but nooooooooooooooo not poor old sexy me huh? i hate you ;)
(p.s. if you take that seriously...then...ya)
Sexy^Orangutang |
| #30 ya[71235] |
| spider-tj053.proxy.aol.com |
| thats gay, go me |
| #31 ya[71239] |
| spider-mtc-tc062.proxy.aol.com |
LA COMMENT LA HIS LA BATTLEREPORT LA LA LA SOMETHING
YAH!!!! |
| #32 NotMe[71276] |
| inh1ts04-qfe0.ims.bt.net |
In general, it was a nice report. Unfortunately, it left me a little confused about whether the game was short or I just missed a lot of action.
I look forward to reading your next report :) |
| #33 Napoleic[71296] |
| van3d10.dial.uniserve.ca |
Its all been said. I hope your mark goes to 7.5 though cause I think this deserves better than 7, but not all the way 8.
Like WLJ said.
I did find your humour fairly funny so gw on that. |
| #34 suavo[71408] |
| 064-031-078-055.inaddr.vitts.com |
| this site is gay |
| #35 archon6[71652] |
| AC82C3B6.ipt.aol.com |
| funny |
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