| #1 [AsF]AzNSuNBoY[73615] |
| AC9D5ED9.ipt.aol.com |
| Hi! |
| #2 Monty Pylon[73616] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
| It's been a long time since a fan fic was written...good fan fic at least. I hope that maybe one of these could reach the status of the Pheonix Chronicoles. maybe, maybe not. I hope you enjoy it. The next part will be out soon. |
| #3 mattkid[73617] |
| 00-60-97-d5-1d-d0.bconnected.net |
| 3rd |
| #4 fdslasdhglsdfh[73627] |
| spider-wi044.proxy.aol.com |
| 4rth! |
| #5 Sid6.9[73634] |
| 1Cust6.tnt6.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
Wow, that was excellent Monty. It's the untold story of what happened to the UED on their way back, or trying to get back to earth.
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| #6 Eradicate~Me[73638] |
| spider-tj033.proxy.aol.com |
That's Madness. Every sentance described the actions thoroughly. Even a simple action, like where the scourage died. All elements needed were there.
Good Work
Sorry for bein such an ass last time, this was super gosu.
I'd say 7-8 rating range.
<i>Erad</i> |
| #7 Monty Pylon[73642] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
| apology accepted and im glad you enjoyed it. I still would like to play you sometime though. |
| #8 Eradicate~Me[73799] |
| spider-wd073.proxy.aol.com |
| Sure, you'd die though.. |
| #9 ThieverIV[73808] |
| spider-mtc-tf023.proxy.aol.com |
Sid 9.6: Yes it is, gj!
Good job. Like Erad said, 7-8. I noticed in the last couple of paragraphs you started almost all your sentances with "the". Try to vary that a little bit. Still, good job. |
| #10 -citizenkane-[73979] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
GW, Monty. A little cliché though.
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mark gimme rating power gogogo |
#11  [74058] |
| proxy2-external.bremtn1.wa.home.com |
Since I actually jsut recently redid the BW campaigns, this scenario was pretty fresh on my mind.
I thought it was a pretty good read. I normally stay far away from fan-fic but this was enjoyable.
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-Dr.Z |
| #12 drow12[141928] |
| athd52wly35u4.bc.hsia.telus.net |
Hey monty pylon what happend to the alexander did it
escape all the carnage or did it crahs into a planet?
I hope it wasent destroyed that ship was my favroite
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