| #1 Shepherd[74170] |
| res104a-013.rh.rit.edu |
| First! |
| #2 MonkeySpanker[74174] |
| ideabox1.BestBuy.com |
| A good example from this BR of the english language used at its best "I almost didn't got any defences" That sums of this BR. =) |
| #3 Monty Pylon[74175] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
| A good solid format and a definate structure to the BR. Now with the constructive stuff out of the way onto the flaming. I kid, I kid but you need to get details in there. Details are important and tell us what is going on. You mention offense but very little in description. It seems like a text only before pics are added. Be more descripted or get pics so peolpe can have a definate idea of what is going on. |
| #4 ThanatoZ[74177] |
| spider-tp061.proxy.aol.com |
Yeah, I agree. Need to know more about what's happening, what you're doing, what tech tree you were planning on, etc. It makes it much more connected and easy to read, as it was I was left going "Huh?" a couple times. Pictures really help a BR a lot, unless you are a GODLY writer (ie .Praetor) and can describe everything VERY well, you'll do better with pics.
Still, nice improvement, keep up the good work. :) |
| #5 Kamikaze[74179] |
| LakeMillsSD-177.nat.wiscnet.net |
| fate = fait+homo |
| #6 Krebster[74181] |
| 216.20.43.13 |
| i red 3 words |
| #7 Krebster[74182] |
| 216.20.43.13 |
| mainly because i cant actually READ |
| #8 Sid6.9[74185] |
| 1Cust172.tnt6.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
I usually like to have fun when doing the Good, Bad, And the Ugly. But with you, I think I need to be serious.
The Good-
Writing was decent, some grammer and spelling mistakes, but that didn't bother me while reading the report.
Format of report is sound.
The Bad-
While the format was sound, there were tons of stuff that you still need to put in the reports. It really makes me wonder if these games really happened. But I'll take your word for it right now. Details make the report go, and right now you have the herky jerky feel of a person who is driving his very first stick shift car for the first time.
No pictures, once again, with the jumps in the action, I really think pics would have filled in the gaps.
Bad game, I just wasn't into the game, and I think it was the details missing like everyone else discussed above.
The Ugly-
Your ego is kinda big. Now it would have served a purpose if your opponent was trash talking. But he wasn't, and your apparent nature of treating him like a fool throughout the game. That is a big mistake. If you want people to get into the game, you have to make the other player not look foolish. You can describe his actions, and let the reader decide if the things he did were foolish or not. I'm not sure of this or not, but you sound a little like I_Am_Gen_Patton.
Report Card Reads-
Writing- C (A few grammer mistakes and spelling errors brought this down from the last report.)
Pic Quality- N/A
Pic Selection- N/A
Entertainment- D+ (Up a little from the last report, at least the action did make a little more sense then your last report.)
Overall- C-
Personal Comments- Work on what everyone else is talking about and you will get better. IMO you can't get any worse then this, unless you get a chip on your shoulder. And it's good to see you are not racist and appologized for the comment yesterday.
Like before, this report will probably receive between a 3-5 from the raters. |
| #9 american~jin[74187] |
| 12.7.75.67 |
Man, can I join the VI clan? It sounds like you guys are so good. No wonder you win all your games.
I liked the extreme variety in your BR--like how you were dissappointed that 1 ling died to 3 SCVs--and then mentioning your attack of a million gaurdians, scourge, vourers, etc. Hmmm, irradiate would've been hilarious there.
Just when I think I've read every crappy BR out there, you bring in more. Keep them comin...
"Mark4 and company is to Eye-Witness news reporting what you are to 'Hard-Copy' reporting" |
| #10 ^^^^[74188] |
| host-216-78-103-81.asm.bellsouth.net |
| brood war games? |
| #11 [74192] |
| 12.7.75.67 |
LOL, I read this thing again and it was still funny...
"My Zergling at the bottom right saw that he tried to expand there again and when I tried to attack his 3 SCV's there, it was my Zergling that was killed"
Well, damn those SCVs. How in this great purple-mountain-majesty would 3 peons ever have the gall to kill a zergling??
This is great stuff.
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| #12 Eradicate~Me[74194] |
| spider-tr043.proxy.aol.com |
| this sucks as much as your other one. why do u even br? |
| #13 ComradeChris[74214] |
| spider-wb052.proxy.aol.com |
| <cough> <ignores Eradicate~Me> I can sum it up in one word- potential. Good ideas, it skipped around a little, though. Practice makes perfect, along with spell check and a few pics :) |
| #14 CynicalMagician[74217] |
| px4cl.gv.wave.shaw.ca |
HAHAHA I 'M GOING TO JUDGE YOU BEFORE I READ THIS!@&*(@!&!!
YOU ARE A L33T HAX0R WAREZ LEZBIAN !*&^@!!!!!! |
| #15 CynicalMagician[74218] |
| px4cl.gv.wave.shaw.ca |
| Wow, how on earth did you get the resources for 24 guards + 12 mutas and 12 devs? Cripes. Oh well. All the other things I would've said were said by other people. |
| #16 Falcon[74222] |
| px1he.ss.wave.shaw.ca |
| Go away Sid6.9 Your good, bad and ugly crap take forever to scroll through. It takes a whole 2 seconds. I want 2 seconds of my life back you inconsiderate basturd! |
| #17 smeat[74230] |
| PPPa25-ResalePortlandBMe1-5R7313.saturn.bbn.com |
holy shit.
u totaly owned that brood war korean wannabe cunt.
owned i say.
[VI]Hellraiser@ownage.com
good show.
jolly good.
ownership. |
#18  [74238] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
Not bad, but you really need more detail if you're going to make it text only... :)
4
Dref |
| #19 lil bow wow aka TeCh[74246] |
| h24-66-249-203.ss.shawcable.net |
<font face="karate">
well I just heard the news today it seems my life is gonna change I close my eyes begin to pray and tears of joy stream down my face... well I dont know If im ready to be the man I have to be I take a breath I stand in awe Ive re-joined SC!!!!!!!</font>
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| #20 Yatrix[74275] |
| 1Cust53.tnt3.valparaiso.in.da.uu.net |
i didnt' read this but i feel i should just comment on something. is it me, or do the commentors on this BR being impressive just make you think its the author praising himself? =)
something tells me, he comments his own BR's. sick lil' racist homo, isn't he?
Yatrix |
| #21 JJB[74359] |
| proxy1-external.indnpls1.in.home.com |
LOLlipop!
What positions were you and your opponent in? Not stated, G! |
| #22 Nyoken[74394] |
| spider-wa064.proxy.aol.com |
| ...You call him stupid for making a comsat, but you build spores and sunkens b4 he has even made his first attack...think about it einstein |
| #23 Nyoken[74395] |
| spider-wa064.proxy.aol.com |
| blank out that sunken part, i just meant spores, and btw, how did u get so much gas? |
| #24 ()Planeswalker()[75373] |
| bgm-24-95-144-133.stny.rr.com |
| Sounds like a newbie bashing to me. didn't anyone ever tell u to pick on someone ur own size?why did u build structural defense?especially with zerg?ZERG CAN"T DEFEND!that report lacked way too many vital details.you don't even mention exspansion or a trace of build order.give up on br and stop inflating your ego. don't waste our time by telling us how u crushed a newbie |
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