| #1 Monty Pylon[74332] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
| Little do people know but I write all my fan fic without planning. I sit at my computer for a few hours and write what comes to mind. I think it would be fun for some outside intervension so I want you the reades to decide who the stranger is. Place your vote for a character from Brood Wars. it could be Raynor or kerrigan or Zeratul. Anyone who is still alive as far as we know. You won't know who won until i write it but I think it will be fun. |
| #2 {ahc}overmind[74337] |
| user-2ive628.dialup.mindspring.com |
| I personally would like to see the xel'naga, but if it comes to that either praetor Artanis or Zeratul |
| #3 Sid6.9[74369] |
| 1Cust143.tnt6.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
No good, bad, and ugly. After all, tis fiction.
Fun and great stuff Monty, and your explanation of why Duran was there was brilliant.
Heh heh the conversation between the Dominion General and Emperor Mengsk reminded me of Star Wars, when Darth Vader was telling a general on the uncompleted Death Star that the Emperor was coming, heh heh. Excellent writing as always, very dramatic and tense.
As for a perdiction, I don't think it will be Raynor or Artanis. But maybe a small fleet from Zeratul, but he isn't leading it, that saves Petrov from annihilation in the nick of time and leads them to where Zeratul is, will be my prediction.
We want installment four by tomorrow, go go go go! (Just kidding, take your time.) |
| #4 SarcasticSage[74370] |
| 1Cust7.tnt2.daleville.al.da.uu.net |
| 3rd, and great story MP uhm lesse i'd like to see xel'naga also |
| #5 SarcasticSage[74371] |
| 1Cust7.tnt2.daleville.al.da.uu.net |
| er... 4th and 5th O.o |
#6  [74374] |
| proxy2-external.bremtn1.wa.home.com |
For some strange reason I am liking this little series a lot.
And as far as who shows up, I won't try and guess for that may skew who you were thinking of =P
I am sure it will be a pleasant surprise.
-Dr.Z |
| #7 Sid6.9[74379] |
| 1Cust143.tnt6.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
| Yes, yes as Dr. Z said, so strike my prediction from your mind. I want it to be good, and don't want my lame ideas to foul your mind. :P |
| #8 Monty Pylon[74388] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
NO NO NO NO
You guys vote on who it will be. Kinda of like a viewers choice. |
| #9 Monty Pylon[74389] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
| Pick who you want it to be. Anyone that is living or at least we know is not dead. |
| #10 {ahc}overmind[74398] |
| user-2ive628.dialup.mindspring.com |
ahhh, Xel'naga or Zeratul, of course lots of writers stick themselvers into their writing
EX.
Commandore Serov: Who the hell are you?
Monty_Pylon: I am admiral Monty_pylon of the xel'naga fleet, do you wish for assistance?
Commandore Serov: I'm being ripped apart by a zergling!! Don't you think I need help? AHHH, the pain.
Monty_pylon; sit doggy
the zergling stops ripping the commandore's intestines out and starts licking Monty Pylon's hadn
Of course this is just a joke, or is it....
Sincerely yours,
{ahc}overmind (I'M HAVING A HEART ATTACK!!) |
| #11 someone[74484] |
| proxy1.ym1.on.home.com |
very good....very exciting...
i cant wait 2 c the next one. I would like the mystery player to be either zeratul and the protoss or the Xel Naga |
| #12 ThieverIV[75119] |
| spider-mtc-tf074.proxy.aol.com |
Very good, I am enjoying this series very much.
I am afraid that I am going to have to be the one who gives the first critisism. There were quite a few places where there were punctuation mistakes, mainly ommitted commas. I realize that I'm really nitpicking here, but sentances like "I will have the platform ready it two days general" would be much better sounding with a comma.
Nevertheless, excellent job.
-ThiverIV
(oh and XEL'NAGA XEL'NAGA XEL'NAGA!!!!!) |
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