| #1 SJE-Jonny[74896] |
| msp-65-25-194-44.mn.rr.com |
| hope u like this 1 my last one sucked I know |
| #2 mattkid[74897] |
| 00-60-97-d5-1d-d0.bconnected.net |
| 1st non-author |
| #3 (eviltwinbrother)mattkid[74898] |
| 00-60-97-d5-1d-d0.bconnected.net |
| 1st non-author, fat-ass |
| #4 SJE-Jonny[74900] |
| msp-65-25-194-44.mn.rr.com |
U have a problem and so does ur (eviltwinbrother)
U make 1
U try it u make a br and stop critzing every1 |
| #5 mattkid[74906] |
| 00-60-97-d5-1d-d0.bconnected.net |
| k |
| #6 mattkid[74911] |
| 00-60-97-d5-1d-d0.bconnected.net |
| SJ3 i'm not calling you you a fat-ass by the way |
| #7 SJE-Jonny[74925] |
| msp-65-25-194-44.mn.rr.com |
| I SUCK AT BW HELP ANY TIPS |
| #8 {ahc}overmind[74926] |
| user-2ive7ol.dialup.mindspring.com |
I personally believe that this br was better than fenix_risin's first br. I expect that it will get between a 2 and a 6. Personally i would give it a 3, but that's my opinion. Your on the right foot, just gotta find a bit of balance in it. First you should learn html to the extent that you can use pictures, second you should include more detail and find better games. I look forward to seeing more of your br's
P.S. My next br will have something NO ONE ELSE has ever included in theirs, look forward to it, it will come out within the next 9 days |
| #9 testosterone[74928] |
| mkc-65-26-143-252.kc.rr.com |
this was an OK report, more effore next time, write a lot more, be more descriptive etc
also a factory, starport, and sci fac cant all be built within 3 secons ;) |
| #10 SJE-Jonny[74931] |
| msp-65-25-194-44.mn.rr.com |
What I meant was they all started to build within 3 seconds
like he build them at the same time |
| #11 SJE-Jonny[74938] |
| msp-65-25-194-44.mn.rr.com |
| MAN SOON I WILL BE DONE WITH HTML YAY!!! AND soon I will learn pictures but till then o well :-( |
| #12 Cearas[74942] |
| proxy-02.pe.iqnet.net.au |
mattkid sucks balls, posts the same worthless shit on all comments, fukcing idiot.
Needed a few more details, pics are always great too.... |
| #13 livingexception[74956] |
| spider-wb013.proxy.aol.com |
Ehhhhh, well, you had energy in the writing, but, it's all raw. Look at a few of the other BR's and see what you can do, then come back again. I won't give this a rating because it wouldn't be fair to rate it since you don't know all about HTML/graphic arts. Find two resonable good players, watch it, take SS, make pretty pictures, fix it up with HTML, and presto, instant gold. It's not as hard as it sounds, if you have good pic, html editors.
LE |
#14 [74973] |
| proxy1-external.bremtn1.wa.home.com |
Um, paragraphs to start with.
It was just like one big sentence.
convert ops?
nuckuler center?
drones? I thought it was TvP?
Go read some of the reporting guides. Hopefully, with a little focus these will get better.
-Dr.Z |
| #15 Cearas[74978] |
| proxy-02.pe.iqnet.net.au |
| LE, you don't need HTML editors, use notepad like a man!! |
| #16 livingexception[75030] |
| spider-wk021.proxy.aol.com |
After fixing up pictures all nice and pretty, doing HTML all by hand is like throwing yourself off a cliff after you've slit your wrists. AOLpress rULES!!!
LE |
| #17 CaughtNaked[75041] |
| spider-tn052.proxy.aol.com |
Lots of effort, w/ a lil HTML knowledge ull do fine.
CNs Judgement- Suks Ass---Holy Shit
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| #18 CaughtNaked[75042] |
| spider-tn052.proxy.aol.com |
| (thats a 2.5 allingings gay on it) |
| #19 Kaz[75052] |
| HSE-London-ppp207417.sympatico.ca |
| Actually HTML is easy as hell. |
| #20 ~(MaNiAc)~[75057] |
| px1ar.ed.wave.shaw.ca |
i thought this was an ok first BR but i would of liked some pic's but ur new and u dont know hmtl
4-5
Peace Maniac |