| #1 Monty Pylon[75844] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
It's over, it's all, all over.
Should I make another and what should it be about. Kinda hard to top this one. |
| #2 Eradicate~Me[75847] |
| spider-mtc-tf074.proxy.aol.com |
| stop the ownage! |
| #3 Monty Pylon[75848] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
Oh yeah thanks to all the BR.com persona that appeared:
{ahc}overmind
Falcon
CKane
][~Tao~][
Sid6.9
Dr.Z
Guy Montag
-=FOrSaken=-
ThieverIV
[ScV]
Did i forget anyone???
oh yeah me monty pylon
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| #4 CKane[75852] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
| Nonono! Dont make another one! I have one on the way in a week or so =P |
| #5 CKane[75854] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
Ahahahhaha!
Pylon, kudos, I love the way I died :DD
9
mark gimme rating power gogogo |
| #6 mattkid[75857] |
| 00-60-97-d5-1d-d0.bconnected.net |
| another one already, go read |
| #7 OuTSiDeR[75864] |
| spider-tp043.proxy.aol.com |
| haha pretty sweet...I dont know what else a fan fic could be about other then the three races killin eachother tho... |
| #8 Falcon[75865] |
| px1he.ss.wave.shaw.ca |
| Thanks for the thanks Monty Pylon Ill have to read your whole thing all over, hehe I might have missed some spots. You should add HTML to your stories, add some background colors and things to spice it up. |
| #9 Derek[75867] |
| spider-mtc-tc041.proxy.aol.com |
hello? you write some sci-fi or fiction and get it published
unprecentented ownage |
| #10 {ahc}overmind[75868] |
| user-2iveah8.dialup.mindspring.com |
great, I die not at the hands of an enemy, but to a traitor, I DEMAND A RECOUNT, j/k, great piece of work you got here monty, I suggest that in your next fan fic your an admiral, and ahc is alive for some warped reason
EX.
the specs of dust that was once ahc rise from the ground that he was laid to rest on 3 decades ago, surpisingly every single one of our heroes is alive, and I, Admiral Monty_Pylon control the only force that can beat him |
| #11 Falcon[75870] |
| px2he.ss.wave.shaw.ca |
| and the one man that could beat him is ++Falcon++, me. (<<<<------- notice period that means thats ended. heheheheh) |
| #12 Monty Pylon[75873] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
| Actually overmind, CKane does sort of crash his wraith into the brige of the ship. You kill Serov. |
| #13 CKane[75936] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
Do NOT, i repeat, DO NOT continue the series.
I've had my own series delayed for like two weeks because urs was in the way
So, do not continue the series, get away from the ledge, ur life is worth living, do not pass go, do not collect 200 minerals ;p |
| #14 Sid6.9[75938] |
| 1Cust179.tnt5.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
Wow, what an ending! I loved it, I give it 2 thumbs and 2 big toes way up.
The ending with Kane crashing into the bridge of Overmind reminded me of Return of the Jedi when a ship got through a bunch of laser batteries taking out the bridge of the Super Star Destroyer.
Great Fan Fic Monty, I wonder if Johnny could put something up on the site with all 10 parts back to back. A Fan Fic section if you will, that stores anyones Fan Fics in order. |
| #15 -=Forsaken=-[76258] |
| c114217.upc-c.chello.nl |
DAMned Monty this shit is #@%%^#@^GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD
SHit man this story ownz ur bonez. 2 bad its over but with ur tallent plzz write another story. Dunno what about but something will come to someones mind so make it good beause we're expecting some nice stuff from you after this. Damn what a conclusion, it's just fantastic! Armageddon was indeed just the right word. Armageddon indeed..... damn tnx 4 making me BAD, I kixed some bad zerg ass yo :) Kek I'm a secret weapon of the Xel'naga with unbelievable power... Monty u'r 2 good 4 me :)
Kek this story was goddamn nice once again just can't be said to often! Gotto get off drugs now man .. :( damn this sux :) Kek you're a damn talented writer Monty hope to read something new from you very soon, it would be a shame if you wouldn't write more of this shit. So gl with ur next stories and I just loved this story keepem coming plz. This styory was just awsome and all who read it and got a little bit taste for SF just had to have to love it.. I think every body who commented agreed on that! So Nic work once again and till the next story :)
Forsaken weapon <----------------- BBBBBBBBOOOOOOOMMMMMM -------------------> SPPPLLAASSSSSHHHHH DIE ZERG DIE :) |
| #16 Guy Montag[76264] |
| 192.195.229.210 |
omfg own!~!~
great stuff! |
| #17 SCV~007[76266] |
| t2o957p89.telia.com |
Hey monty, that "SCV" general is me not [ScV] ;)
Anyways, great writing! |
| #18 [ScV][76269] |
| cache4.ihug.com.au |
NONONONONONONO ITS ME.... =)
Monty, you get a 20 just for the way you managed to include everyone in that final story.
and an extra 5 for NOT killing me... (which paves the way for me to write my own series about the continued adventures of general Harper, Dominion Special Police)
Good Work, hope to se more.
GOGOGOGOGO |
| #19 -=FOrsaken=-[76275] |
| c114217.upc-c.chello.nl |
...... and remember.... Live for the Swarm!!!!!!!!!
Damn I love that quote!
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| #20 Monty Pylon[76276] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
| <font color="blue">I respond in color...Yes!</font> |
| #21 Monty Pylon[76277] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
| <font color="red">I was thinking of maybe re-releasing this series in it's entirity as one bigs ass story. I would also add color and such. Sort of like a special edition.</font> |
| #22 mattkid[76392] |
| 00-60-97-d5-1d-d0.bconnected.net |
| <font color=green>that woudl be cool</font> |
| #23 Sid6.9[76405] |
| 1Cust29.tnt3.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
<font color="bluelight">I agree, re-release it. And just for fun if you want to, you could throw in an extra chapter in there just for us all that have read the entire thing already.
Although, I'll still read it again, even without an extra chapter. But it would be cool if there was. :-) |
| #24 ThieverIV[76410] |
| spider-wi034.proxy.aol.com |
YAY I'M IN IT EVEN THOUGH I'M A SPACESHIP AND ONLY MENTIONED ONCE! YAYAYAY!
I finally got around to reading it. I feel special. Good wrap up, good ending.
10
plus one for me being in it
11 |
| #25 Sid6.9[76427] |
| 1Cust5.tnt13.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
<font color="white">Heh heh I like the colors from Monty's post to mine, it gets me into the christmas spirit.
I wonder how hard it would be for Johnny to put in a code that would alternate colors for each comment. You know, just for the silly Christmas season. |
| #26 Heero_Yamato[76479] |
| mid-qbu-nqv-vty44.as.wcom.net |
| IT's Over????? NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh well, it was cool while it lasted. Too bad I wasn't in it..... |
| #27 KoolManBloke[76574] |
| useref68.uk.uudial.com |
| Very good manke anuther plz. I need sumthing to do on tusdays. |
| #28 Khas'andro[76627] |
| ool-18bc02ed.dyn.optonline.net |
Next time someone does a fanfic, can I be in it?
My Name ---> Protoss name i made up |
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