| #1 livingexception[76791] |
| spider-tp051.proxy.aol.com |
| Primero |
| #2 DivvyO[76792] |
| 162.119.232.100 |
| segundo |
| #3 MATTKID[76793] |
| 00-60-97-d5-1d-d0.bconnected.net |
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| #4 [AsF]AzNSuNBoY[76795] |
| ACA8876E.ipt.aol.com |
| non-gayo |
| #5 DivvyO[76799] |
| 162.119.232.100 |
| PvZ on islands is all about storm and the finger. |
| #6 CKane[76805] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
| Imagine how good a Pylon report would be with pics. |
| #7 MourningWood[76848] |
| fw8.intuit.com |
This report lacked in several areas. The first area is the poor grasp of english. This made the report hard to follow. Secondly, you failed to describe, in any detail, the map that the game was played on. As this is not a map commonly known, such as Lost Temple, a detailed description is a must. Finally, many important details of this game were left out, such as the taking of expansions. Pictures (especially minimap updates) would have gone a long way to clarify the action of the game.
Overall, this report is below average. Pretty much every area of battlereporting was lacking. I feel that this report should receive a:
3
Take a few more english courses, and learn how to edit and display screen captures. These will both help to improve the quality of your battlereports.
Cheers,
MourningWood |
| #8 Monty Pylon[76854] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
i feel that my grasp of english is far from lacking. I also included the expos but they are of little importance because the action is concentrated on the drops and later, the air war. I feel telling every trivial detail about expos that are not effected in any battle is useless and boring. I tell you where the expos are but for their importance to say...the battles, I think they must take a backseat. Snowbound is a fairly recognizable map for players who do not use only LT, BGH or Dire. I like my style of text only and will continue to use it as long as I BR.
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#9  [76855] |
| as530083.infocom.com |
This was a pretty good example of a no-nonsense text only report. I liked how you focused mainly on the action and just gave everyone a brief synopsis on what each player went for. However, I agree with MW *cough, gasp* that a description of the map would have helped (i.e. where the expansions were, etc.)
My biggest complaint about this report were the amount of typographical errors. The first paragraph was especially choppy. "<i>It was a cold day for a BR and I search high and low throughout the digital plains of B.net. As usual it was a slow, slow day on highways and byways of B.net. I came across a set to duel couple of SUICIDAL_MANIAC and Queen_Liz. The had started an open inviation 2v2 but, I alone came to the party.</i>"
Using "of b.net" in consecutive sentences, this akward phrase "across a set to duel couple", and two typos in "<b>the</b> had started an open <b>inviation</b> 2v2" are all examples of rough spots that could be cleaned up. I think you have a good writing style, but its important to remember that when you're doing a text-only report, the words are all the reader has. So those words need to flow smoothly with as few mistakes as possible so the reader can get into the "groove" of the report.
Anyway, I'm going to go with a 5 here. Keep writing.
Cheers,
Dref |
| #10 [76856] |
| as530083.infocom.com |
| P.S. If you let your text sit overnight and then read through it the following day, you'll find a lot of mistakes that you would have missed if you had posted it immediately... :) |
| #11 Eradicate~Me[76875] |
| spider-mtc-tf013.proxy.aol.com |
| He isn't Edgar Allen Poe dref. Anyways this was pretty nice, although it would score higher with pics*****. Your writing style can give you 5's but thats about it, I think you should take it a step higher. I mean you've mastered the grammar part in at least 15 br's, nevertheless the br would have scored gold with a good pic collection. |
| #12 the()vermind[76887] |
| user-2ive7fr.dialup.mindspring.com |
this is {ahc}overmind speaking, if you have to ask me, this was a fair br, without pics. However, I suggest that you stick mostly to fan fics, i give a range of 4-6, I give 5, this got a 5 already?
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| #13 [ScV][76924] |
| p308-tnt2.syd.ihug.com.au |
Pics aren't everything. (and thats coming from someone who love pics) A really good text report should have the chance to score a 10 regardless of pics. The true test of a report is to take all the pics out and see if it still can convey the same message...
Anyways, that was a general comment, nothing really specific to this report
good to go
ScV |
| #14 wynr[77493] |
| neptune.cohr.com |
I like text only reports, makes it easier to read at work. (Co-workers don't see starcraft pic's as they walk by, haha.)
I spite of everything said above, I enjoyed the report. Keep it up.
Wynr |
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