| #1 Falcon[77413] |
| px1he.ss.wave.shaw.ca |
| first and not at school like im supposed too... |
| #2 g3.liebeskugel[77414] |
| L0632P02.dipool.highway.telekom.at |
second
<B>too lazy to read</B> |
| #3 third[77415] |
| a-db.aspn.net |
| <b>too lazy to read</b> |
| #4 MourningWood[77416] |
| fw2.sd.intuit.com |
| 3 |
| #5 ~ZC~K@O$[77418] |
| 166.93.233.21 |
Really not too good. Sorry to say, it was to jumpy. Maybe try Writin a bit of an outline before writin it up.
Peace
-kaoS |
| #6 SCV~007[77420] |
| t4o57p98.telia.com |
| ooo |
| #7 america~jin[77430] |
| 12.7.75.67 |
Oh brother,
What the heck was this? This BR overwhelms me with sissyness.
I did find this funny in a pathetic way: "I sneaked a Ghost up and nuked a few Mutas."
Nice. Over and out. |
| #8 the()vermind[77432] |
| spider-mtc-tf063.proxy.aol.com |
american~jin, if you spend your life critisizing battle reports, you should try making one yourself. While this br may be horrible, tell them while it was horrible. Anyway, this br was plain, horrible-ok. I would give it a range of 2-5, I give 4, too jumpy and you should include pictures.
Also, br games that you watch, don't play in, its easier that way |
| #9 YourSexOrgan[77450] |
| cr577363-a.poco1.bc.wave.home.com |
Fairly well written report. <add standard spiel on the need for graphics>
It's not that I'm an eye candy freak but graphics, especially maps add to the comprehensibility of the report. Good for you I have played on the map you're talking about (European Conflict) So I knew what you're talking about.
I like your heavy use of allusion to the real countries. It's like, so what, they took my base, I'll just go and conquer Greenland or North Africa. where is Rommel when you need him eh?. NATO vs Warsaw Pact allusion really made it sound like a gigantic struggle, I suppose it was.
10! 10! |
| #10 Y-Bolbuster[77465] |
| ncgent01.telenet-ops.be |
| Thanks all you guys for your comments (thx YourSexOrgan the most) and I'll try to keep in mind your comments. |
#11  [77497] |
| as530001.infocom.com |
Congratulations conquering Europe. Unfortunately, the details were lost on me. Seemed like you skimmed over quite a bit considering this was probably at least an hour-long game... :P
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