| #1 DarkMage[77617] |
| abenton.dialup.cloud9.net |
Whew, I finally got this report out!
- DarkMage |
| #2 derek[77621] |
| spider-mtc-tc051.proxy.aol.com |
| 1st to say, this is a kick ass report, and easily deserves a few 9s and a few 10s |
| #3 HKRules[77622] |
| c319175.extern.lawrenceville.org |
| looks nice, 3rd |
| #4 but[77623] |
| spider-mtc-tc051.proxy.aol.com |
plz have a rater change the font, just a suggestion = / its hard to read imo
just a suggestion |
| #5 HKRules[77624] |
| c319175.extern.lawrenceville.org |
Well, I read it more carefully.
Change to a black background. It'll go better with your black-bordered pictures. and yeah, change the font. It's not that I'm trying to nitpick, but it *is* easier to find cons than to find pros. I mean, this report is good (for the first) I won't be surprised to see this on the gold list. Post another one soon. |
| #6 DivvyO[77626] |
| 162.119.232.100 |
WTG but ...
- Some collages had borders, some didn't
- Some borders seemed bigger than the actual picture
- The DT rush on a Zerg was effective enough to win game 3 ... odd ...
- Some of the collages had some extra special whitespace and whatnot that kinda detracted from the overall mood of the image. When you're looking at a black circle with little white dots around it, it looks odd.
- I disagree with the black border / black background comment made by HK tho, because if there was a black bordered pic on black BG, you wouldn't be able to see the border ;D A darker color would have probably been better for this report, tho. Just not black. |
| #7 mauRaptor[77627] |
| proxy.iad2.netsetter.com |
Nice report:) esp. since first try..
8.5 |
#8  [77629] |
| zmapxypro03-b.zma.compaq.com |
You started well with good details and nice pics. But then in game 2 and 3 it seemed to die down. Try to make all games equal. You did such a great job with pictures, but next time lets have text to compliment it well. Not bad at all!
8
Fox |
| #9 Scarab[77630] |
| AC8C5A32.ipt.aol.com |
| MANNER FONT |
| #10 WhiteLancer[77631] |
| ip-111-113-224.stockton.navipath.net |
| Scuse me... nice works with the graphics... but the text was sorely lacking on desciptive detail and funny commentary. |
| #11 Templar569[77633] |
| 1Cust131.tnt1.trenton.nj.da.uu.net |
| I rather liked the font, it made for a nice change from the standard. Overall, a pretty good report, but you seemed to lose some of the battle details as you went on. Still, nice job. |
| #12 awe 6[77634] |
| proxy3-external.pinol1.sfba.home.com |
| very, very good report for three games, but something subtle is missing. i cant quite put my finger on it, but it had something to do with the second map...like it was like they were just fighting and then boom, the game is winding down. it missing part of the match. maybe its just me, its still a great report though! |
| #13 CKane[77636] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
This report confused me. Owww, my head :(
7
mark gimme rating power gogogo |
| #14 Scarab[77639] |
| AC84B831.ipt.aol.com |
| kane, the next time you ask for rating power, im going to eat your face off |
| #15 Cearas[77640] |
| proxy-02.pe.iqnet.net.au |
My opinion/advice:
This report, for a first, was great. It wasn't on Lost Temple, which is always a bonus. Colouring the names of all players is a good basic thing which should be done, you did that, GW.
The pics were ok in some places, yet iffy in others. Try keeping that ugly mofo of a cursor out of them, little bitch spoils the pics. When using collages, put borders around every pic in it. Don't make big huge borders though, ie, see the 3rd picture of the BR. That isn't good.
Alt-Text was ok.
Consitancy is a key, some pics had borders, others didn't. That isn't good.
The animated gif was nicely done, if anything, a tad too quick though.
Animated mini maps are fun.
Writing left a little to be desired, keep at it though.
8's around the board for this BR. |
| #16 CKane[77641] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
mark gimme rating power gogogo
;p |
| #17 DarkMage[77666] |
| abenton.dialup.cloud9.net |
Thanks to everyone for their comments
DivvyO: Yeah, too much border on a small picture :(
Fox: Yay! an 8
Cearas: Hmm, I guess I am going to need some more (different) borders for my pictures. Ones that are not super-huge. |
| #18 Tyrant[77686] |
| 207.157.194.213 |
| I thought it was a nice report and I enjoyed it! Keep up with the good work and add these very constructive comments for your next one. |
| #19 badtz_maru[77696] |
| barry-asy-10.rutgers.edu |
yea i agree wit fox...
the first game was real gude..
but then 2nd and 3rd seem donkeyish
good report |
| #20 bleh...[77702] |
| m5hWs5n109.midsouth.rr.com |
| one time status28 backstabbed me because i turret rushed. |
| #21 ThinLine=TeRRoR[77703] |
| spider-wd071.proxy.aol.com |
| I like, would also like to mention the first game Iplayed horrible |
| #22 [DF]~AssAs][n~[77704] |
| ws8-137.creswell.k12.or.us |
| Well, considering anybody in this BR would own me, I still have to say it was a totally gosu report. Deserves a better score than what it got :] |
| #23 -GrappleM1-[77705] |
| spider-mtc-tf034.proxy.aol.com |
| That was good. You discribed the game well. BTW, font change. What font is that? also, why wasn't i seen in the BR? i was watching, fate and sexymedics has lines, but i dont...:sob:. Oh well, this BR deserves a 9. good job mage. |
| #24 DarkMage[77710] |
| abenton.dialup.cloud9.net |
Sorry Grapple :(
btw, the reason u wern't in there is because i tried to find the stupidest comments, and you didn't make any stupid comments! all of your lines made sense.
thx for comments!
- DarkMage |
| #25 Falcon[77715] |
| px2he.ss.wave.shaw.ca |
| gosu report, would own my reports easily =[ |
| #26 -SexyMedic-[77717] |
| 216-164-192-236.s236.tnt2.atn.pa.dialup.rcn.com |
gosu report even though i got hammered 3 things though:
1. Im -SexyMedic- not -SexyMedics-.
2. Why would I disconnect from an UMS game?
3. I hate when ppl rush my partner and not me.
but nonetheless great report. |
| #27 DarkMage[77719] |
| abenton.dialup.cloud9.net |
SexyMedic:
1) Yeah, i noticed that RIGHT after i pushed submit :(
2) Uh, i dont know. It COULD have been a coincidence, tho...
- DarkMage |
| #28 DarkMage[77720] |
| abenton.dialup.cloud9.net |
| oh yeah, and thanks :) |
| #29 -SexyMedic-[77721] |
| 216-164-192-236.s236.tnt2.atn.pa.dialup.rcn.com |
gosu report even though i got hammered 3 things though:
1. Im -SexyMedic- not -SexyMedics-.
2. Why would I disconnect from an UMS game?
3. I hate when ppl rush my partner and not me.
but nonetheless great report. |
| #30 -SexyMedic-[77722] |
| 216-164-192-236.s236.tnt2.atn.pa.dialup.rcn.com |
| whoops pressed it twice |
| #31 KingJamesXXX[77733] |
| st401a.mckenna.edu |
| Excellent report. Kudos to SexyMedic for disconnecting when hit by Dark Templar. If Protoss are going to be that cheap, don't play! A good job by all. |
| #32 -FaTe[77736] |
| host-209-214-188-44.clt.bellsouth.net |
| Good report glad i didnt look like total newbie in it. |
| #33 ~(MaNiAc)~[77739] |
| px1ar.ed.wave.shaw.ca |
one of best 3 game series if ever read man
G/J
Peace Maniac
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| #34 -SexyMedic-[77755] |
| 216-164-249-228.s482.tnt1.atn.pa.dialup.rcn.com |
| *Sigh* thanks mage im never gunna live down discing from an ums game |
| #35 Mr.Punchin'Bag2[77801] |
| proxy.iad2.netsetter.com |
| Very exquisite report(s), but what I should be saying is "very exquisite report". I think You need to break each game up into different reports and make mention of them in your other reports. That way, the pages load quicker, and you get more reprts submitted. :} |
| #36 GeNOciDaL[77830] |
| tnt01-229-66.kcnet.org |
great report i hope to be in a good battlereport liek this some day.....
oh wait i probobly wont i forgot i suck im the worst newbie in nohunters lol
great report i liked it but in game 2 and 3 the text kept gettin less and less and some borders were like as big as the piscutre other then that great |
#37  [77994] |
| as530084.infocom.com |
Good job<i>!</i> Impressive first attempt. Text was a bit hard to read though... :)
8
Dref |
| #38 NomadSoul[78028] |
| elproxy.chappaqua.k12.ny.us |
1. I agree with Fox, the first game was really, really good, but the others kind of sucked, of course maybe that's because the actual <b>GAME</b> was bad.
2. The font didn't bother me, strange. It looked fine to me, i wonder why other people thought differently, or maybe i'm just blind...
3. Why is it that the tiny pics had large borders but the big pics had none? Maybe DarkMage wanted to make the pics seem larger... |
| #39 DarkMage[78039] |
| abenton.dialup.cloud9.net |
Yay! Another 8
Nomad: Err, the reason with the pics is PSP. It f***** up some of the bordered pics :(
- DarkMage |
| #40 Masta P other people know me as HOMEWROK COPIER.....BAM!![78148] |
| A090-0060.NYCM.splitrock.net |
This report is kick ass I think it deserves a 10. I agree with nomad soul. WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH THE FONT!!! IF U THINK IT IS HARD TO READ GET SOME F****** I GLASSES Oh yeah and the first report had awesome pics and was very "descriptive" (WOAH high vocabulary ;). The only thing I disagree with nomad about is that the borders are fine and who cares if the pics are big or not.
Thats all(THIS KICKS @$$) |
| #41 s1utty[78258] |
| host-216-76-216-108.dab.bellsouth.net |
nice report bro, i liked it, the pics look really tight
kick ass report now do another one gogogo :P
- s1utty |
| #42 CaughtNaked[91790] |
| spider-ti023.proxy.aol.com |
<i>Rotate and -Fate are butt monkeys</i>
<b>8</b>
t2yl,
~CN |
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