"At home four zealots came wandering past my choke point, took one look at the wallin, asked T_Mac for danger pay, didn't get it, and contented themselves with scouting my natural and then going on strike for better wages. I think they might be still there, waving signs and chanting 'For Hire!'
Alright, so that pun sucked. Work with me here people. It's past midnight."
-Fractal_Wave
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| #1 the()vermind[79178] | | spider-wb022.proxy.aol.com | | 1st, you really should use paragraphs and also indent | | #2 Slicer[79179] | | nchobo03.telenet-ops.be | | 2 parts, 1 day. mmm... I got 3 more parts and the story is finished but I won't submit them at one day. Sorry bout those paragraphs, I fixed it. | | #3 Cearas[79187] | | proxy-02.pe.iqnet.net.au | | Yay, correct formatting. | | #4 Cearas[79189] | | proxy-02.pe.iqnet.net.au | This shit is still hurting my eyes (Read comments on next section).
Submit fan-fics in one big report, sections suck. Should have thrown all 3 things you did together, just broken that report up into sections. Submitting things in parts is also a cheap way to beef-up rookmark points too. | #5  [79304] | | 208.196.35.239 | no rating... see part 1.
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