| #1 badtz_maru[81643] |
| barry-asy-51.rutgers.edu |
first !
ok this was real good but i hate readin from
white backround, black text spice up the non text
stuff liked it |
| #2 hmm[81645] |
| mkc-65-26-12-201.kc.rr.com |
2nd!
I'm starting to like this series :), and I see a new one comes out quite often...gj |
#3  [81660] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
Not bad, a few inconsistencies but nothing serious, giant covered most of it. Definitely a good read. 7.
Dref |
| #4 HKRules[81676] |
| 12.107.65.58 |
Sorry to spoil it, but is the Templar at Duran's base Zeratul??? They seem to know each other personally, and the only significant Templars that Kerrigan knows are Tassadar, Artanis, and Zeratul. Tassadar is proven to be dead, while Artanis has already appeared. So, Zeratul should be the guy at the end
Also, when Kerrigan was hit by the tranquillizer dart, she began to fade "Hey that beach is vanishing"
Giantanvil: I'm assuming that Duran is either an emissary or a member of the mysterious Xel'Naga Race, so his mental powers would be greater than that of an augmented, Zergified Ghost, ie Kerrigan.
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| #5 UDontKnOwME[81690] |
| spider-te022.proxy.aol.com |
Wow. That was really cool. But I can kinda guess what is going to happen next:
Kerrigan is going to be put through torture and chemical testing, which Duran would use to make his "broods" more efficient. But what you have is really good. Tell me if I'm right. Love the story, add the next part soon.
I also want to know why Raynor became a drunk. That is really bogging me down.
Have a nice day :),
UDontKnOwME |
| #6 ~ZC~K@O$[81691] |
| 001-026.den1.adsl.amisp.net |
Hell yah lookin good monty. I been excited to see this one, now i can't wait for next one. And it all looked good except one spelling error i see u do alot. U use "won't" wrong, a lot. Otherwise good shit man, keep em commin plz
Peace
-KAoS |
| #7 HKRules[81702] |
| 12.107.65.58 |
Duran is gonna use Kerrigan's own methods of torture on her:
"...some of which no doubt involve tickling." -Greyhoundbus |
| #8 <font size="7" color="#FF0000">FuckSAB</font>[81731] |
| 128.39.197.219 |
<p><font size="30" color="#FFFF00"><span style="background-color: #000000">DREFSAB IS A LOSER!</span></font></p>
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| #9 ThieverIV[81855] |
| spider-wo032.proxy.aol.com |
| Although general concensus is that Duran is Xel'Naga, Monty might have something entirely different in mind for this story. Oh and BTW, can Raynor still have the same ship he had at end of the last series? ;-) |
| #10 Monty Pylon[82032] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
| Sorry ThieverIV, Raybor sold it to buy beer. But seriously, the ThieverIV might make a return but don't count on it. |
| #11 -=FOrsaken=-[82121] |
| c114217.upc-c.chello.nl |
| NOOOO DURAN CAUGHT ZERATUL... NOOOOOOOOO |
| #12 P:SWORDFISH[82680] |
| ts002d11.dsm-ia.concentric.net |
| well, i haven't read any of your other stories in your "series" type deal but from what i have read and looking at others comments this seems to be very interesting and i enjoyed it. well, that's all i really have to say. keep up the good work |
| #13 anonymes[133567] |
| 205.80-202-70.nextgentel.com |
its cool...
but the thin about raynor depresses me...... =( |
| #14 keep going i like it already,[145084] |
| adsl-113-162.swiftdsl.com.au |
I like it but are you going to ad more or leave it, Id like to see
what Jim Raynors going to do when he sees his old old friend Kerrigan or the queen of blades?
What will he say?
What would he do?
Would he seduced by her?
I dont know but its your choice to go on. |
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