| #1 WarLeaderJustin[82026] |
| 63.113.115.5 |
| First with style! |
| #2 _dev_null[82027] |
| dial163.tyler.net |
| 2nd with... well good job |
| #3 WarLeaderJustin[82029] |
| 63.113.115.5 |
Joyjoyjoy! A real br!
Well, very good game, nice alt text joke, nice pics. 8. |
| #4 HKRules[82030] |
| c319186.extern.lawrenceville.org |
Hi see above,
not a fanfic, (not that I have anything against them) |
| #5 Iwall[82031] |
| ip68.65.blca.blazenet.net |
Nice job. A few more pics would have helped, but overrall, great job.
<font color=blue>7.5</font>
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| #6 Shepherd[82033] |
| res104a-013.rh.rit.edu |
| nice nice. . . |
| #7 Finally![82034] |
| 24-240-44-88.hsacorp.net |
Someone FINALLY reports a battle, instead of a writing a fan-fic~maybe people know what the site is called now.
7-8 |
| #8 Falcon[82035] |
| px2he.ss.wave.shaw.ca |
| sup Frost? |
| #9 Frost[82036] |
| spider-wk011.proxy.aol.com |
omfg you shouldnt of Bred most imberessingh game of my life
:( |
| #10 badtz_maru[82037] |
| barry-asy-48.rutgers.edu |
s1utty you are our savior
this br is some oxygen to fight that
fan fict carbon dioxide poisionong
btw good work |
| #11 beefintestine[82038] |
| cm-24-25-157-215.nycap.rr.com |
| hi frost |
| #12 frost[82039] |
| spider-wk011.proxy.aol.com |
| hi beef hi falcon :p |
#13  [82040] |
| dun1-49-3-Richmond.in.skyenet.net |
muahaha... 10 cuz I won<i>!</i>
j/k, not rating. Wish you had made the pictures a bit bigger though... :P
btw, what did you guys think of my "put a couple of cannons in the zerg natural to prevent an early expansion" idea? :P
Cheers,
Dref |
| #14 s1utty[82041] |
| host-216-76-216-155.dab.bellsouth.net |
the reason this br has so few pics is because on my first br people kept telling me i didnt describe the action good enuf and relied too muchon pics so this time i tried describing it more than pics. maybe next time ill get it right and have good descriptions and many detailed pics eh?
- s1utty |
| #15 anymouse[82042] |
| proxy2-external.rdc1.bc.home.com |
| a 6 |
| #16 willwinforfood[82044] |
| ool-18bcec8e.dyn.optonline.net |
yaya! go s1utty! big pics with borders seperating the different scenes in the begining would have helped. overall a nice br. reminds me of my short brs but it got you gold so it had to be good. =o
-wwff |
| #17 .High+Templar.[82045] |
| 207-172-196-160.s160.tnt1.hck.nj.dialup.rcn.com |
| hehe |
| #18 s1utty[82046] |
| host-216-76-216-155.dab.bellsouth.net |
omfg wwff where the fuck u been?!!? i havent seen u in sooo long :/
- s1utty |
| #19 DrAwesome[82047] |
| PPP-155-38.va.sprint-hsd.net |
nice writing, nice pics (wayyy too small tho ;l) great game, A REAL BR(thank god)
8.5 :)
DrAwesome |
| #20 Monty Pylon[82049] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
A good report and much more indepth text. The pics were a little small but I really didn't mind. Nice to see a BR, not against fic because I like it, but I read all the existing fic and this was a nice break.
Damn the man, save the Empire!
Monty Pylon |
#21  [82050] |
| zmapxypro05-b.zma.compaq.com |
Hey IT'S NOT A FAN FIC ;)
Well good report if you are going to use pics more, make them easier to view. There were some pics that just looked bad :-/
7
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| #22 s1utty[82055] |
| host-216-76-216-155.dab.bellsouth.net |
sorry, everytime i try n use photoshop for my than 10 seconds my brain starts shorting out, this pics look like shit
- s1utty |
| #23 DivvyO[82057] |
| 162.119.232.100 |
| Why is "post-engame" before "endgame"? Doesn't post mean after? |
| #24 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[82058] |
| static-32.itcanada.com |
Hey, nice work bud!
Next time, add more sexy pics, morer humour and more excitement/suspense, + better game. However, cause Dref's in it, because this isn't fanfic and because you show awesome promise, this fetches a fun 7-8. GJ! |
| #25 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[82059] |
| static-32.itcanada.com |
Oh yeah it's "Pre"
So it would've been Pre-midgame, though Early Game sounds better =)
Post-Pregame would have been interesting ;) |
| #26 BUU[82061] |
| AC84F398.ipt.aol.com |
| this kinda reminds me of the one quote, thats something like "<i fergot who> join me, we'll submit report after report about 4pools on blood bath, and after 4 weeks, a pic of kerrigan will get a 10" hrm.. |
| #27 MrPimp[82062] |
| chpxy01-chrtr01.ne.mediaone.net |
White backround ru out ur mind? i'm seeing dots!
Overall pretty cool though |
| #28 Muerte[82067] |
| POM-STU2-93-53.pomona.edu |
| That joke was stupid (are you homophobic?) |
| #29 MrFacist[82083] |
| adsl-63-211-143.shv.bellsouth.net |
| i think your heteraphobic. you think all the heterasexual people are out to get you, and you know what, your right. Did any one else get the fight club refrence? |
| #30 s1utty[82090] |
| host-216-76-216-13.dab.bellsouth.net |
hell yeah fight club is ownij.. thats where i got this title from :)
- s1utty |
| #31 <font color="blue">CaughtNaked</font>[82110] |
| nas-3-99.dc-t.navipath.net |
Nice BR,
pic -
story +
details +
uses of HTML -
6.5 + 1(for not being a fan fic) = 7.5 gw
t2yl
~CN |
| #32 WOHOOO[82250] |
| 150.199.112.225 |
| THANKS, finally a good battlereport!!!! about time!! thanks |
| #33 iggy[82266] |
| 107.los-angeles-01-02rs.ca.dial-access.att.net |
| that is one slutty br. |
| #34 Prester John[82268] |
| 137.187.49.135 |
Good battle report, on an exciting game. It was touch and go all the way until the end, and you captured that well.
Drefsab: I guess it was those cannons that made him expand to the 9 natural instead? It seems to have worked for you in this game. It wouldn't really be possible if the zerg were at 9 or 6 though, would it... |
| #35 GaynusUpTheAnus[82275] |
| fsj56-58.ocol.com |
hey newb post means after.
Post-endgame doesnt make sense, unless ur talking about the after-game chat, which u weren't
Not too bad tho |
| #36 Jherek[82369] |
| maxground.Berkeley.EDU |
Good report.
Solid describtions were marred by poor grammar and so-so writing.
I find the rating of 7 to be very fair, but I think that an additional 20 minutes of proofreading and editting would have made this more pleasant to read, and worthy of an 8 or higher.
Overall I enjoyed it. Way better than some crap I've seen get 7's because of the pretty pictures. |
| #37 Baxter-O'Bixby[82457] |
| adsl-63-195-119-107.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
You definitely gotta proofreed, s1utty. For example, you use "where" instead of "were" so many times I lost count, "century" instead of "sentry," and at least one redundancy like "fellow brethren". Read over what you write a couple of times; it looked like you spent some time on the pics, but the BR would've been much stronger if you spent equal time on the writing.
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| #38 Rim[82458] |
| 246.fort-worth-08-09rs16rt.tx.dial-access.att.net |
| Man, did you take a breath while writing this?? Slow down boss. |
| #39 s1utty[82585] |
| host-216-76-217-177.dab.bellsouth.net |
durr proofreadin is my problem... i did proof read :/
my english writing is pretty bad .. i kinda flunked outta school in 9th grade and got my ged, so didnt get many english classes :/ i use abc check n shit but that doesnt help me with grammer and making sure right word is used in right place |
| #40 Jherek[82664] |
| maxground.Berkeley.EDU |
s1utty,
It doesn't take a lot of schooling to learn the fundamentals of solid writing. It takes two things:
1 - You have to care.
2 - You have to read a lot.
If you don't really like reading, it's probably because you have never seen the right books. Ask a friend who knows your tastes and reads a lot to recommend something for you. |
| #41 willwinforfood[82692] |
| ool-18bcec8e.dyn.optonline.net |
| hey s1utty! my pc sorta died thanks to d2. it crapped out my mother board. i dunno how and i dont wanna. so uuh hi. =] |
| #42 s1utty[82768] |
| host-216-76-218-5.dab.bellsouth.net |
jherek... durr my friends arent exactly the reading type... what kinda books you recommend?
wwff .... fix0r it :) i miss u ownin meh :/
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| #43 [{o}][82778] |
| 66-65-7-188.nyc.rr.com |
| Who the fuck is defsab?? |
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