| #1 The_Great_Cornholio[83492] |
| cache-mtc-ak02.proxy.aol.com |
| Well, I hope you all enjoyed it. Yes, I realize it sux0rs when compared to the greats, like shockwave,but hey, I was bored. Anyway, score does not matter to me. Any comments, questions, hate mail, and/or death threats will be accepted. Thanks for reading!<s>The_great_Cornholio</s> |
| #2 Normandy-1944[83493] |
| spider-mtc-td072.proxy.aol.com |
| 1st non-author! LOL cornholio, watched beavis and butthead too much? BTW, the story was okay. A bit...different...but okay. I'd give it a 4-5 |
| #3 AlienEater[83494] |
| dialups-333.palmer.mtaonline.net |
./me bangs his head agenst the wall. enough with the fan-fic ppl! or if u gonna do it, do it like shockwave ^^
A.E. |
#4  [83497] |
| 63.220.230.228 |
| This wasn't like Shock... =[ |
| #5 Cearas[83503] |
| cache02-e3c.syd.optusnet.com.au |
| Mark hit the nail on the head. =[. |
| #6 HKRules[83506] |
| c319097.extern.lawrenceville.org |
I enjoyed this more than Monty Pylon's one, because that one was merely another Duran story, and seems to have borrowed from a copyright source :p.
Keep em coming.
P.S Everyone's different |
| #7 HKRules[83507] |
| c319097.extern.lawrenceville.org |
| PPS: What's a cornholio? |
| #8 the()vermind[83508] |
| user-2ivebr7.dialup.mindspring.com |
each chapter was less than a paragraph
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| #9 CaughtNaked[83511] |
| nas-3-243.dc-t.navipath.net |
Ive seen better, mayb if i wasnt so stoned id think it suxd, but i give it a 7 =0)
t2yl
~CN |
| #10 Black Label[83515] |
| ncasse01.telenet-ops.be |
Two things:
-"feel the WRAITH of Aiur"???
-Should have taken another name instead of Daggoth (only confuses me)
But all considered it was pretty good.
7-8 |
| #11 Monty Pylon[83516] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
Paragraphs make things easier to read. It was a large mass of words and the messed up line breaks made it worse. Preview before please so we can read without headaches.
Damn the man, save the Empire!
Monty Pylon |
| #12 Fan Fics suck[83517] |
| pool0031.cvx30-bradley.dialup.earthlink.net |
| All of em'. Even shockwaves |
| #13 Rommel_1942[83520] |
| spider-tf083.proxy.aol.com |
| ::cries:: |
| #14 The_Great_Cornholio[83525] |
| spider-wc042.proxy.aol.com |
| Yes, I had some typos in their(feel the WRAITH of aiur ,instead of Wrath), but all in all, it was good. Hey, I got someone who says I did it better than Monty Pylon! HAHA! I'm sick of ghost stories... |
| #15 Monty Pylon[83540] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
Ummm...the ghost stories are UDontKnowMe not mine.
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| #16 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[83547] |
| webcache.BrockU.CA |
| If you don't really know how to write, don't attempt a fanfic =( |
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