| #1 Jamellan[83963] |
| dialupC112.clsp.uswest.net |
| Gabba Dabba!!!! EELM vs WMBD to commence tomorrow!!!!!! Coverage of the bout will debut that night or wed morning!!! |
| #2 [i]Yatrix[83964] |
| 1Cust178.tnt1.gary.in.da.uu.net |
thx for reading my BR...heh. somehow, i doubt you did. who wrote EELM? i can't remember to look it up via search...
[i]Yatrix |
| #3 Jamellan[83965] |
| dialupC112.clsp.uswest.net |
| That would be me! How else would I know the the fight was gonna take place :) |
| #4 Jamellan[83966] |
| dialupC112.clsp.uswest.net |
| Those two the's together....the first the = where. Me rock on! |
| #5 Barage[83967] |
| 160.10.203.35 |
Not a bad game, though once you stopped worrying and started acting (even mass lings work better then just pondering what to do.. for that matter, I didn't hear firebats there, making a crackling assault a strong one :P).
The writing however had a few snags. The super-mondo-bite-it-and-say-"more-then-you-can-chew" paragraph could've been shortened (took up the whole screen). Also, about mid way through you stopped capitalizing your I's and chopping up words like Def and Ols; small things but it catches the eye in a way similar to a chainsaw in a nursery (the shortcutting also studders the reader.. read the sentence outloud: <i>" he continues to kill about 3 or so ols putting me in a psi hole as i get pissed off."</i>). Also a few spelling mistakes show up that a spell checker could've removed. Btw, what's a 'crax'?
However, these are essentualy nit picks to an overall good report. 5-6 on my scale (though do note that I'm probably VERY picky.... it's the little things that poke at me). |
| #6 Jamellan[83968] |
| dialupB215.clsp.uswest.net |
| Actually, instead of where, replace the first the with when.....also replace Jamellan with idiot :P |
| #7 the()vermind[83969] |
| user-2iveavk.dialup.mindspring.com |
| You show a ray of promise in the community, its just that that ray of promise is pretty thin, and you need alot of work. These mistakes include bad spelling and grammar (i know my reports have many mistakes too, its just that the sheer shortness of the report made it impractical not to read over it) please don't point out things that are obvious every few sentences. Other than that, fair report, range is 1-5, I give 3-4 |
| #8 CraX[83982] |
| dialups-315.palmer.mtaonline.net |
Barage... im a crax.. hehehe, i got the name from cracklings aka cracks or crax ^^ but thats just me.
[i]Yatrix good, me likes.. do more
AlienEater on the bw.com server ^^
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| #9 Mattkid[83988] |
| 209.53.21.116 |
| Have I Played You Alien? |
| #10 Roaddog{WP}[83992] |
| proxy2-external.pr1.on.home.com |
| Hey gj man, i actually read it thru while eating my burgers (probably why im so happy aboutt this br) , well great job! I really like it, and ya |
| #11 Templar569[83995] |
| 168.168.234.198 |
Hye, Yates!! You're alive!! Long time no see. Nice job against Robo, I know he's got some skills.
Just try and stay awake in English class from now on, mmkay? Have you been talking to Disco too much? :) |
| #12 Napoleic[84007] |
| 24.113.31.224 |
| Um you countered mass tank with ultras? Lings > tanks, tanks > ultras. But gj with the defilers, they own. Nice text only br. |
| #13 [i]Yatrix[84028] |
| 1Cust44.tnt1.gary.in.da.uu.net |
thx for teh feedback guys. like i said, it was 4:30 am and i was wanting to do something. (notice my 'i's' still not capped. hehe. i was gonna do it on word then transfer, but that too much effort. btw, ultras OWN tanks, not vice versa. cuz they take damage and keep coming, when they get to the tanks, it's over. the wraiths made that more possible because the ultras had a straight path to them. with rines, they fight them AND get blasted by tanks. that's why i used them. =) of course, plauging alot of the tanks helped too. hehe.
again, thx guys and sorry for the mistakes, next one be better.
btw, HI TEMPLAR!!! long time no see, dude. hehe. i hang out in clan -[i] now, man. stop in, brother.
[i]Yatrix |
| #14 ^Geist^[84031] |
| po7.serviceplus.ab.ca |
| Nice all text br, havent seen a good one lately, well, besides this one. |
| #15 Breeze[84034] |
| 62.176.93.129 |
Nice :)
btw some of my friends use wraith/tank in 2v2 and in tvz too... clan ChromeD won a big 2v2 tourney in Bulgaria playing terran and zerg, the terran using this combo (they beat [o]utcast's team too on the way to the final) |
| #16 iggy[84042] |
| 69.los-angeles-43-44rs.ca.dial-access.att.net |
| the only thing i managed to read was that "god bless you" thing at the end. that pissed me off, so now i give u a 1. just think about it: one useless line of text brought u down from a 10 to a one. asdf |
| #17 [i]Yatrix[84050] |
| 1Cust250.tnt1.gary.in.da.uu.net |
Iggy...God bless you.
[i]Yatrix |
| #18 phoenix[LoD][84095] |
| roc-24-95-209-16.rochester.rr.com |
Not too shabby.
Reading some of those sentences was like carving through the jungle, though. Still, the game was good and you went into plenty of strategy discussion.
I realize that the game was a week ago, but a little detail goes a long way. For example, give a rough outline of your early build and timing of the first few expansions. Once you start nosing around your opponents base, try to make guesses at his build, too. Citing things like the number of facs or ports he had helps people get a better idea of the game. Any micro involved in those spectacular clashes is also noteworthy. Did you focus fire? Did he mega-matrix his tanks, unsiege any and micro them? Things like that are what make the game real to the reader.
I gotta say, that's a weird tactic against zerg. I've only run up against tank-wraith once and I think I had to use ultras to clean it out, too. Sounds more suited to 2v2, where I imagine it's pretty intimidating.
A nice job with recouting an exciting game, even if it lacked some detail.
-phoenix[LoD] |
| #19 BOBBY357[84158] |
| spider-mtc-ti051.proxy.aol.com |
| not a bad report at all. u need 2 work on your spelling and grammar like ()vermind said, but besides from that, not 2 bad overall. i'd give u a 6-7 or so. |
| #20 rommelkiller[84175] |
| spider-wg014.proxy.aol.com |
| if he fast expands u attack with speed hydra and speed lings newb |
#21  [84196] |
| on-tor-blr-a58-02-1293.look.ca |
| not bad |
| #22 [i]Yatrix[84197] |
| 1Cust21.tnt1.gary.in.da.uu.net |
newb, eh? gotta love those bnet lil' people. gotta call names and give their gosu can't fail strat. thx, man. i never thought of that...
[i]Yatrix |
| #23 SCV~007[84248] |
| t1o57p61.telia.com |
| Pretty good, if you write with less errors it's damn good ;) |
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