| #1 Jester-C-Bomb[84268] |
| spider-wa012.proxy.aol.com |
| first for once, yes its stupid but who cares :) |
| #2 phoenix[LoD][84270] |
| roc-24-95-209-16.rochester.rr.com |
Not too shabby.
I like your writing. Nothing perfect, but it was interesting enough to hold me through a lousy game.
Since you seem to be aware of your own limitations already, I won't give you many suggestions. Screenshots and a better game would raise your reports to a whole new level. That's about it.
-phoenix[LoD] |
| #3 the()vermind[84271] |
| user-2ive69b.dialup.mindspring.com |
| ok, you show <i>alot</i> of promise, you just need screenshots. It is clear you already know html, or at least a bit of it, and your writing is very good. However, uh, use screenshots, and I want to know the names of the people you played, and who you played with! Range is 5-8, I give 6-7 |
| #4 Jester-C-Bomb[84272] |
| spider-wa012.proxy.aol.com |
| just back from reading,, and not bad at all. im not a very good sc player so reading this reminded me of many of my own games, (i never seem to plan ahead with observers) more pics, in fact, any pics, are all u need |
| #5 Jester-C-Bomb[84273] |
| spider-wa012.proxy.aol.com |
| first for once, yes its stupid but who cares :) |
| #6 Burnmelt[84274] |
| dial-up-83.ccms.net |
I liked it. Its nice to actually read a descent report about your average player every once in a while. Pics would help, along with a few jokes. I liked your control of diction with words such as "newbiesm". There was a nice balance of details and vagueness. Many people will either go too over board with details or be way to vague, but you seem to know when to do each. Over all I thought it was entertaining. Good job.
-Burnmelt |
| #7 SqueakyMonkey[84276] |
| syr-24-92-253-127.twcny.rr.com |
| Well, it looks like you've got more than 1 reader. If it's well-written, pictures shouldn't make too much of a difference. I'd go with a 6 or a 7, and my only suggestion would be to do a better game next time. Good job. |
| #8 [P]aradox[84278] |
| dsl0043.nas.net |
Hey linternet, good job :)
Pictures don't make a battlereport, they should complement it. Good writeup. |
| #9 god[84279] |
| dial248.tyler.net |
| hello my child. heres a tip you can use. dont br crappy ass games god damnit. and jesus get your bitchass back outisde and chop me some firewood |
| #10 god[84280] |
| dial248.tyler.net |
| hello my child. heres a tip you can use. dont br crappy ass games god damnit. and jesus get your bitchass back outisde and chop me some firewood |
| #11 Anotherone[84281] |
| 130.184.139.24 |
| I kind of understand the problem with taking the island expansions. I was playing earlier and this guy razed my main, all I had was my island exp and I started dropping him with zerglings and hydras, while he kept trying to drop on me. I killed most of the dropships before they dropped. He eventually gave up and left. |
| #12 }DraginslayeR{[84284] |
| ip-111-6-32.nyc.navipath.net |
OK, i have only one tip:
DO NOT, NOT NOT NOT EVER Say in the first paragraph what the flaws of your report are. Most people who list 5 or more problems in their report get a bad rating.
Otherwise the report was okay.
8)
--}DraginslayeR{
"I wish I were Irish" |
| #13 ^Geist^[84285] |
| po6.serviceplus.ab.ca |
| THe reports was pretty good, but a few ss's and names of players would help up your rating alot. |
| #14 Mattkid[84286] |
| 209.53.21.116 |
| GG.. might read the mig-game i just read the end hoping for an embarrasing loss but 2 no avail = ( |
| #15 awe 6[84287] |
| c286394-a.pinol1.sfba.home.com |
| good...well organized for an all-text report. pics wouldve supplemented the text quite well but the text was able to speak for itself. 7-7.5 |
| #16 iggy[84289] |
| 114.los-angeles-16-17rs.ca.dial-access.att.net |
| suck my grape, asdf |
| #17 outsider[84297] |
| spider-tp011.proxy.aol.com |
| not bad...be a little more detailed and get some pics ^^ gw tho, id say 7 |
| #18 znzf[84298] |
| 24.112.14.162.on.wave.home.com |
LINT er.. net
not bad writing
gj lint |
| #19 SoY~b0Mb[84301] |
| A010-0503.KRLD.splitrock.net |
Yay...cool. It's a relief to see a report like this, as my connection is really sub-good, so it takes years to get a pic-full report in. I get cable soon, though ^^;
YES! AND IT'S NOT FANFIC!!! |
| #20 ThieverIV[84327] |
| spider-tj054.proxy.aol.com |
| It's good (for a first). Do find longer/better games, they will make for longer/better reports. (BTW: Black BG, White text and red titles make up a lot of lost rating points from lack of pictures). |
| #21 BOBBY357[84400] |
| spider-mtc-ta054.proxy.aol.com |
| not bad....u have nice writing style despite the fact the game sucked. u also need pics, but overall, nice job. |
| #22 BUU[84403] |
| ACA1E8BB.ipt.aol.com |
| I wont point out what everone else has already pointed out (pix details blah) ill just mention that your writing my stand some humor, or some suspense, or something to give it that extra *oomf* |
| #23 Icebreaker316[84863] |
| spider-wd051.proxy.aol.com |
| Can someone tell me how to take pics? |
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