| #1 MatriX(SR)[86064] |
| chpxy02-chrtr02.ne.mediaone.net |
| First, oh, look who owned you. Now to read. |
| #2 Radom Smurfer[86066] |
| cr467192-a.slnt1.on.wave.home.com |
Comments, improvements I could make, etc. All welcome
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| #3 kjjdfghdffgd[86067] |
| c255141-a.frmt1.sfba.home.com |
tankers..... wat are they? tanks?
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| #4 Random Smurfer[86068] |
| cr467192-a.slnt1.on.wave.home.com |
Driver of Tank :)
Tom clancy > u |
| #5 HKRules[86073] |
| c65220.extern.lawrenceville.org |
I guess the anti-fanfic wave is over
Just guessing: will he become something *other* than a tank driver? Please don't beacause nothing has been written from the perspective of a tank |
| #6 Random Smurfer[86075] |
| cr467192-a.slnt1.on.wave.home.com |
| I wanted to do from tank perspective |
| #7 ThieverIV[86078] |
| spider-wd021.proxy.aol.com |
Good. Note: it is somewhat unrealistic that someone can just "become" a tanker, you would have to serve as a marine for a while and develop skill with machines etc. Also a tank has Master Sergant rank, so you would have to be promoted first.
Besides that it's all good. Good descriptions details etc etc, keep it up. |
| #8 JawaAvenger[86080] |
| ool-18baa694.dyn.optonline.net |
ThieverIV:They said they would take all they can get, besides... Tanks aren't the most difficut thing to drive... I imagine even Vultures are harder.
Random Smurfer:Go ahead and continue, why the hell not? |
| #9 SoY~b0Mb[86082] |
| c1457880-a.sttln1.wa.home.com |
| Mwahahahah. I just came to say that my anti-fanfic tirade is NOT over. I would flame you here, but that wouldn't be nice. I think it's great people are flexing their creative writing muscles. If you can make a decent story about something as silly as Starcraft, think of what you could do with better material! Good luck, guys. AND MAKE THE ^@#% fanfic section! *End bitching session.* |
| #10 ^Geist^[86083] |
| 209.115.253.70 |
| Theres three people in each tank, a driver, a navigator and a gunner. Whats he gonna be...dead? |
| #11 CKane[86085] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
I'd think vultures would be harder, yeah...
BTW, The other section wants you. Badly. Go score. |
| #12 iggy[86092] |
| 140.los-angeles-01-02rs.ca.dial-access.att.net |
| tom clancy > god. |
| #13 CKane[86095] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
| Um, Iggy, Tom Clancy DOES NOT write Net Force. |
| #14 CKane[86096] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
| And we all know Jack Ryan is too mature for you. |
| #15 joe.smurf[86109] |
| finback.monterey.k12.ca.us |
umm more importantly ??? theres dead zerg and human outside of his house ? ... ok good work
10 ^^
Btw (american public schools > nothing)
-joe |
| #16 Arc@nE13[86110] |
| 213.166.21.132 |
Thats the stuf fan_fic should be made of,good writting style,the only thing unrealistic is,well u guessed it:the tank part
keep up the good work...GARGAMELL |
| #17 abnormal[86138] |
| pluto.schunter.etc.tu-bs.de |
i dont care about any unrealistic tank part ^^
just keep the exciting mood and continue, we want fights, blood and medics :) |
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