| #1 A_Monkey[87979] |
| spider-wo012.proxy.aol.com |
| I would like to thank JawaAvenger, SCV~007 and Abusing for waiting so long for this I hope this is what you wanted |
| #2 DivvyO[87980] |
| adsl-64-160-27-18.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
| Crazy ass collages. I noticed a few errors, but only a few. The oddly formatted text was a bit off-putting tho. GJ |
| #3 Equalisatium[87983] |
| ip288.arcnxx2.adsl.tele.dk |
| Only the enter useage was a bit off (wrong size lines). Else nice report I liked it. |
| #4 ...[87984] |
| 24-216-218-10.hsacorp.net |
| Overall, pretty good. Grammer was off, and the sentences ended up getting chopped around some. As you said, the html with the names was screwed at the end. Otherwise good job. Probably a gold because of all the pretty pics =)... |
| #5 ...[87985] |
| 24-216-218-10.hsacorp.net |
| BTW 4th & 5th... |
| #6 JawaAvenger[87993] |
| ool-18baa694.dyn.optonline.net |
Yah! It's out!
You go on my gosu list now!
=) |
| #7 Reqium[88000] |
| spider-wf024.proxy.aol.com |
nice pics =]. kinda boring at beggining but u made it cool halfway through. some parts confusing like one part you said "and out of nowhere some hydras started attacking" or something like that. i just 'skimmed' so maybe i missed what happened and some sentences were a little choppy like ... said, but overall a good report
7-8
btw - how do you make the text different? =[ i use frontpage and in the preview box it shows all the colors and stuff, but not on BR.com =[ show me your gosu HTML skills? well good report anyways |
#8  [88091] |
| c1413963-a.bremtn1.wa.home.com |
This is solid improvement, again. You are definitely getting better. Hehe, a little crazy with the <br><center><b>centered</b></center><br> text, but hey, you never know unless you try it out. I am not quite sure what is up with your pics. You using a different map, or having some trouble with your graphics program? Or doing that on purpose? =)
All in all though, I like the direction you are heading with your battlereports. Don't stop.
-Dr.Z |
| #9 Darth Sidious[88117] |
| 145.85.143.73 |
| Stopped reading cuz of bad grammer and messy text layout. |
| #10 SCV~007[88133] |
| t1o957p50.telia.com |
I should have won damnit, I owned half the map TT
Good report ^^ |
| #11 A_Monkey[88140] |
| 166.109.185.7 |
| Reqium what do u mean make the text different? And HAHA SCV |
| #12 SCV~007[88166] |
| t1o57p74.telia.com |
=[
I suck. I'll stick to Counter-Strike.
Advice for your reports
-try not to use bold text, or centered
-read through the text a few times, grammar mistakes are annoying to the readers (look who's talking =[ )
-get the color coding right
Hope it helps, write some more! :) |
| #13 -=StukaBomber=-[88211] |
| spider-tf061.proxy.aol.com |
wow...good BR. lotsa purdy pics =). Just a few complaints, though...
1)you need to learn about periods(The ones that go after sentences, you sick bastards)
2) I can tell in the first "Majestic overlord pooping" pic that you copy and pasted some creep, since some overlords are cut in half.
That's about it. I like it, though. Good pics, ok text. On a scale of 5-8, i'd give it a 7. GL man, keep up the good work ^^ |
| #14 InsomniacAndrew[88283] |
| 1Cust76.tnt1.everett2.wa.da.uu.net |
i liked the center text and the bold it was good don't listen to scv he must be having issues right now with his loss html is hard, i don't know pretty much anything about it but
spelling and grammar may be something to look for i mean, it's ok, normally, but if it is hard for the reader to understand, then you got problems, that is the only deal.
if grammar and spelling mistakes are easy to understand, then they shouldn't be annoying unless you're a snob
i guess that last part was kinda a flame, but i can't stand snobs, a couple of my brothers are big time snobs |
| #15 InsomniacAndrew[88284] |
| 1Cust76.tnt1.everett2.wa.da.uu.net |
| some people think some grammar and spelling mistakes are cool like mine, see? no punctuation worth crap heh heh |
| #16 :+:SlipKnoT:+:[88300] |
| bc-kam-a53-01-40.look.ca |
| good |
| #17 the()vermind[88304] |
| user-2ivea1r.dialup.mindspring.com |
| the problem with this br is there's virtually nothing you can seriously point out as a huge error (except for the centered text). It was a combination of things that contributed to this, the bad grammar, the spelling, the syntax, the pictures, and stuff like that |
| #18 Abusing[88306] |
| Timmins4-243.nt.net |
Whoa, Not 1 person Insulted my skillz in that game! G/J by the way monkey.. next time try not to take like 2 1/2 months to make a BR full of mistakes, it was still great tho
and in the words of Bomber ^^(look up#14) on a scale of 5-8 Id give it a 7 |
| #19 <font color="green">}DraginslayeR{</font>[88313] |
| ip-111-4-12.nyc.navipath.net |
I actually <b>agree</b> with the()vermind on this one. That was a majormess up with the centered text. The gramar was iffy, and the pictures were so-so & confusing. Oh well, at least you got the same rating on your, like, 15th report as I did on my first.
Oh yeah, I say "15th" because A_monkey=Fenix_risin, search for him.
}DraginslayeR{
"I wish I were Irish" |
| #20 Reqium[88349] |
| ACACB58C.ipt.aol.com |
A_Monkey - I mean for HTML and when you submit it. When I preview it on my browser (not on BR.com) I see it as colored. My HTML is:
-body bground="000000" bgcolor="#000000" text="#C0C0C0"-
(Make the -'s < and > so they act like tags). On my preview it is black and grey but BR.com changes it. Oh well maybe it'll be just black and white for me ;P.
Anyways good report do more. Maybe you should proof-read before though ;). GJ
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| #21 Reqium[88350] |
| ACACB58C.ipt.aol.com |
A_Monkey - I mean for HTML and when you submit it. When I preview it on my browser (not on BR.com) I see it as colored. My HTML is:
-body bground="000000" bgcolor="#000000" text="#C0C0C0"-
(Make the -'s < and > so they act like tags). On my preview it is black and grey but BR.com changes it. Oh well maybe it'll be just black and white for me ;P.
Anyways good report do more. Maybe you should proof-read before though ;). GJ
~Reqium
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| #22 Phreaking[88378] |
| 209.226.88.50 |
| Great BR just one thing...the centered text, and ur cursor on every pic. Try not to put ur cursor right in the middle of the pic. but overall good BR |
| #23 SCV~007[88389] |
| t1o57p12.telia.com |
InsomniacAndrew:
<i>
if grammar and spelling mistakes are easy to understand, then they shouldn't be annoying unless you're a snob
</i>
I'm from Sweden, english isn't even my language, so when the grammar is bad enough to bother me, its bad. I'm no snob. Bad grammar and spelling mistakes don't matter much, but it lowers the overall impression of the report.
Please go fuck a meatgrinder. |
| #24 BinEinStinktier[88623] |
| 211.110.7.230 |
hey monkey:) remember me from SC? Me and my real ally would like to play a BEST OF 3 2on2 ... if you want to e-mail me: headcheck@hotmail.com
or contact me via ICQ: 57348695
thanks :) |
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