| #1 the()vermind[88612] |
| spider-wa022.proxy.aol.com |
| welcome to the, uhhhh, I don't know what number this is. But please comment, be specific concerning comments, and lot's of other stuff. I <i>know</i> there are some pic problems, and those will be corrected by the end of the day |
| #2 Cearas[88613] |
| cache02-e3c.syd.optusnet.com.au |
| 2nd!! |
| #3 Cearas[88614] |
| cache02-e3c.syd.optusnet.com.au |
Nice, that whole poll thing screams abuse. Check results so far hehe =]]
easy 7-8. |
| #4 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[88616] |
| static-56.itcanada.com |
Sexy as Louis Lane . . . good job brotha!
7-8, yup, and kewl poll =)
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| #5 the()vermind[88617] |
| user-2iveblb.dialup.mindspring.com |
| thanks, I just wish someone heard me say "be specific" |
| #6 <font color="green">}DraginslayeR{</font>[88618] |
| ip-111-2-229.nyc.navipath.net |
Is it just me? or is it too wide for screen?
Oh well, now to read |
| #7 above[88619] |
| ip-111-2-229.nyc.navipath.net |
woops nm. I'm just so damn impatient...
now to read more |
| #8 Shepherd[88622] |
| res104a-013.rh.rit.edu |
Impressive BR. Battles of capital ships.
Also, about that battle of devos/scourges vs BCs, I'm really wondering if there is any mutalisks? I mean, it's a big mistake to confort BCs without mutas to support devos/scourges. (I remember one time when I owned 18 BCs with just 24 mutas and 8 devos and lots of micro.) |
| #9 <font color="green">}DraginslayeR{</font>[88624] |
| ip-111-2-229.nyc.navipath.net |
Now that I've read it (and now that I'm a gold reporter hehe) I will critique your battlereport:
Overall it was very good, but there were a few things:
1)You <i>can</i> have too much of a good thing.(ie. animations)
2)You should review your text more; there were a bunch of small mistakes.
3)<i>accuracy et precision</i> hehe
4)Since you knew it was confusing, you could have had more minimaps to help the reader when figuring out where each person was.
5)What happened to the "would have, could have, should have" section that you were going to start ading? Oh well, you didn't really need it.
6)Remember what you said about Breeze's text; take your own advice.
GJ really. I bet you'll go down a rank in the stats sorter so that Dref is in front of you ;)
-}DraginslayeR{
"I wish I were Irish" |
| #10 Khas'andro[88625] |
| ool-18ba98a3.dyn.optonline.net |
Yea, I have to say that the only problem I had with the BR was the speed and abundance of animations. Try not to have too many short animations, like the zergling vs. Battlecruiser one, and try to make them something that can't easily be described by words. Of course, destructive nuclear bombings also make good animations :-D
I voted for 9, all in all, this is really good. |
| #11 A_Monkey[88626] |
| spider-wo062.proxy.aol.com |
| Thanx for giving me some dignification, and really great report, but as everyone said too many animations that was the only problem. U also forgot to add the most important part i mind controlled 3 battlecruiser's of the dead SYN but that was okay great br bye |
| #12 Reqium[88627] |
| spider-mtc-tj022.proxy.aol.com |
Nice BR. I liked the images and the animated gifs, but you had too many. Also, you weren't specific enough. Some parts I didn't understand (not because I didn't know who was who), but you say "everyone has an expo except for A_Monkey." Where are there expos? And, "A_monkey, finally realizing that Rowdy_Zergling is in no position to fight, orders his large air/ground armada south to engage" So what units were sent? Tons of zealots and corsairs? You don't have to count and say "5 zealots and 3 temps" but you should be a little more specific to make it non-confusing. Also, minimaps would've helped a lot to tell what was happening where. Those are just suggestions, but my main one is be more specific. I really didn't know that much of what was happening. But great report!
8-9
~Reqium |
| #13 Rowdy~Zergling[88629] |
| adsl-64-123-174-218.dsl.rcsntx.swbell.net |
To The ()vermind:
Good report. Insert same tips everyone else gave here. It was pretty good. I say a 7-8.
To everyone else who was pointing and laughing at me:
Everyone who thinks I'm the most awful player in the world... you're right. Hehe. In my defense, I was screwing around most of the time. (Pretty bad defense, huh?) In the beginning I wanted Corsairs, but when I realized I sucked I decided to be that annoying guy who won't shut up. You all know that guy don't you? Also, I was AFK after I became an observer, and I came back in time to see my only remaining Assimilator being destroyed. =[ Mean people. Also, my impressive Photon Cannon owned thank you very much. JK.
Good report, The ()vermind.
<font color="orange">Rowdy Zergling</font> |
| #14 Rowdy~Zergling[88630] |
| adsl-64-123-174-218.dsl.rcsntx.swbell.net |
Forgot the ~ in my name. Gotta have the ~.
<font color="orange">Rowdy~Zergling</font> |
| #15 Monty Pylon[88639] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
| Great stuff here ()vermind. It was a good portrayl of the capital ships and even with a large FFA it was hardly confusing. It should get the gold if not high gold. BTW, are you going to release that special addition or have you forgotten? I was thinking of posting it on Drefs site if he'll accept it. |
| #16 IHATEBUFFY[88642] |
| d141-175-225.home.cgocable.net |
| hmmm... i heard worms come out of the earth when it's wet to keep from drowning... |
| #17 the()vermind[88644] |
| user-2ive64o.dialup.mindspring.com |
| omg monty, totally forgot... sorry |
| #18 CynicalMagician[88650] |
| px3cv.gv.shawcable.net |
| haha, welcome to the clun |
| #19 ^Geist^[88748] |
| 209.115.253.72 |
| Nice reports, now to give to give you the errors :) 1:eight hydralisks and twelve zerglings dont fit into three overlords. 2:eh...1 is all i picked up :) |
#20  [88813] |
| c1413963-a.bremtn1.wa.home.com |
Solid report. I woulda rated this last night when I did FLS, sorry you had to wait so long, but I was dead tired.
-Dr.Z |
| #21 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[88817] |
| static-61.itcanada.com |
Kudos on the rating, Ovie's always a little difficult to mark =)
Again, great br! A well-deserved 8. |
| #22 Aiurs~Pride[88843] |
| HSE-London-ppp196283.sympatico.ca |
| I never realized I had that game so easy. It is weird to find a report of you and not know all of the other things going on with the other players anyways I rated it a 10 cause I was in it and I won thx for bring I thought you were full of ut ^_^ |
| #23 the()vermind[88863] |
| user-2iveblh.dialup.mindspring.com |
| solid report=8... oh well. Please list more problems on this report, as far as i can tell i had the following problems; too many animations, had to be specific, and needed minimaps. |
| #24 [88924] |
| c1413963-a.bremtn1.wa.home.com |
Ovie,
<ul>
<li>Animations were very choppy and short. I don't think it was that there
were 'too many' of them, just that their overall presentation was more
detracting than helpful to the report.
<li>Mini-maps are a FFA's best friend =)
</ul>
Hope this helps some? =)
-Dr.Z
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| #25 [88925] |
| c1413963-a.bremtn1.wa.home.com |
um, if you couldn't tell I DID like this report =P
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| #26 the()vermind[88994] |
| user-2ivec1q.dialup.mindspring.com |
| thanks dr z, I just have to respect the 56k people. This report originally a week ago had unoptimized, huge animations. In total, the amount of storage was 7 megabytes, we couldn't let people do that |
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