| #1 CaughtNaked[89557] |
| spider-th074.proxy.aol.com |
<i>*holding a rock your head* Say it sucked, i dare ya. Just kidding. I hope you liked it, it took about a week, just something to pass the time. Tell me what you thought about me centering everything, did it make it easier to read? I think it does but im a dumb ass like that. Opps, just remembered I was supposed to send this to |]agomar and he would tell me wether to post it or not, o wells. I have a feeling there are plenty of typos because I didnt proof read...Well, i know im long winded and it takes all my will power to from blabering on and on so im just gonna say...
<b>FIRST!!</b> I took down on all of you who have to look at my poor comment. muhahahha
yea, your rite, im not funny, but im jewish so =P</i>
<b>5.5 ;)</b>
t2yl,
~CN |
| #2 Black[89559] |
| nchobo01.telenet-ops.be |
| First non-gay non-author comment |
| #3 **holding rock over YOUR head* =)[89560] |
| spider-th074.proxy.aol.com |
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| #4 Black Label[89561] |
| nchobo01.telenet-ops.be |
| Black Label got that first comment, not black :( |
| #5 CaughtNaked[89562] |
| spider-th074.proxy.aol.com |
| <i>wow that was quick</i> |
| #6 CKane[89572] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
This sucked.
Hey, you wrote this in the present tense! whore :p |
| #7 derek[89585] |
| AC923FE5.ipt.aol.com |
| 10 |
| #8 CKane[89597] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
| WTF, I didn't type "this sucked' in #8 |
| #9 Ling-erie[89675] |
| igw-se.astra.com |
This blew...
Well, looked good tho, but should've been formatted to allign on both sides, dead fish > centre allign |
| #10 Squad-o-death[89782] |
| h000094c7d4a8.ne.mediaone.net |
Megnsk...? Dead...? WTF?!?!?!?
YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I HATE THAT DICTATOR FAGGOT!! too bad the "battle" was sooo agonizingly short, and the WHOLE STORY was way too short, and the beginning was something to be desired. AND ALWAYS REMEMBER THAT THE PREVIEW BUTTON IS YOUR FRIEND.
(spelling and grammar check plz... wee vould nut wvant u too speel stuf wrung an usee bade gwammer...)
Besides that, it was an ordinary fan fic that rules all of mine, SURPRISE!
a definite 4.5 (sry)
KILL THE UMPIRE!,
SQUAD
PS
GW, keep trying. (stick with reports?) |
| #11 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[89791] |
| static-30.itcanada.com |
| You should've e-mailed this to me . . . I give it a 4-5 =*( |
| #12 Death's Servant-TPF-(ASP)-[89997] |
| cr926028-a.rct1.bc.wave.home.com |
make it longer
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