| #1 A_Monkey[94036] |
| spider-wm042.proxy.aol.com |
| This is the first team melee ffa report i have done so if this isn't what u were expecting sorry. Plz only positive comments thanx!!!! |
| #2 Ahzarelly[94037] |
| 1-226.ctame701-4.telepar.net.br |
| First non author? |
| #3 A_Monkey[94038] |
| spider-mtc-tb071.proxy.aol.com |
| what? |
| #4 <font size=10>}DraginslayeR{</font>[94039] |
| A070-0171.NYCM.splitrock.net |
I would say a positive thing but...there are none...
not 1...
6 at best, since you put in a black background.
youre pictures sucked, you dont know how to make paragraphs,
your grammar is horrible
i couldnt follow the game (see paragraph comment) this was a report that had not one redeeming value.
a 6 at best
--}Draginslayer{
"I wish I were Irish" |
| #5 oops[94040] |
| A070-0171.NYCM.splitrock.net |
| sorry about the html thing up there i keep forgetting |
| #6 Scosmokes[94041] |
| wwwgate1.motorola.com |
| I had trouble following the game as well, but that could just be me. |
| #7 DeonPeon[94043] |
| burlingcache.lisco.net |
| I'd say a 7. And more mini maps. I thought dust was at 6 for the whole game until I got to a minimap nearly all the way through. And html is your friend. Color names! |
| #8 badtz[maru][94044] |
| barry-asy-43.rutgers.edu |
| k dont br such lopsided games k |
| #9 Eradicate~Me[94045] |
| pa-millscreek2a-240.buf.adelphia.net |
| obviously u have psp 7.0 right? So why tne do all the pics but 1 look like ms paint |
| #10 CrackHeadJeb[94046] |
| mu-178245.dhcp.missouri.edu |
Heh, I can answer your question Eradicate~Me. Do a search on me and look at my first report. Now look at my last report. Believe it or not, I used the same tools. It's just a matter of how much experience you have with the program.
I haven't read the report yet, so I will give you another comment when I do. =]
-CHJ |
| #11 ground-LOBP-[94049] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
| Not really enjoyable reading, 6 tops. I agree with everything in #4 as well as the (somewhat nitpicky) facts that you didn't color names and you called derek.. his real name through the br, which annoyed me because I kept seeing the dots after his name and thinking it was an ellipsis (...). Call him derek next time. Very difficult to follow. |
| #12 ground-LOBP-[94051] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
| err... dragin... shouldn't you have noticed that html is NOT WORKING in comments anymore? thx gw. doing anything on that 1v1 series between jawa/deon monkey? |
| #13 ThieverIV[94052] |
| spider-tr081.proxy.aol.com |
| Not that great, the report was very confusing, especially the part about teams in the beginnning. Color names, I couldn't remember who was who (especially in team melee when everyone has 2 races). |
| #14 klapdout[94053] |
| svcr-8isdn106.epix.net |
hard to follow..
id give it a 5 |
| #15 Khas'andro[94054] |
| ool-18ba98a3.dyn.optonline.net |
| Erad, what's with you and MS Paint? Do you have like, a Paint fetish or something? You got Paint goggles that make everything look that way? Give the program some rest and let it live crappily ever after, for god's sake! |
| #16 }DraginslayeR{[94055] |
| A080-1131.NYCM.splitrock.net |
I know that the HTML isnt working, i just forgot
sorry... |
#17  [94056] |
| ACA2D20C.ipt.aol.com |
| Smaller font plz |
| #18 xld.aldogrez[94057] |
| spider-mtc-tj042.proxy.aol.com |
jesus, been out for like 2 hours and already 18 comments.
maybe i should hurry up and submit mine to see if i can get 100 comments =o |
| #19 }DraginslayeR{[94058] |
| A080-1131.NYCM.splitrock.net |
| :) |
| #20 el_sux0r[94059] |
| dhcp078053.res-hall.nwu.edu |
careful what you wish for, xld.
I had no idea 6 was a 'bad' score... strange. |
| #21 iggy[94060] |
| adsl-64-160-27-44.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
| yer mom = thx |
| #22 ~Cheeze-whiz~[94062] |
| spider-mtc-td074.proxy.aol.com |
Hmmm...6,tops.
Game was hard to follow.
Like #4 said,your grammar sucks.
You use no "?" or "!" at all.
You have run-on sentences.
No paragraphs.
Pics Grainy.
Animations almost blew up my computer.
No colored names?!
Show some emotion (i.e he sends a carrier and guess what it gets hit by turrets and then he attacks and then he...)
Stop saying "And then he" or "and he"
Blech.5.
Sry =( |
| #23 I)ark[94063] |
| sc-66-27-186-137.socal.rr.com |
wait a min. on a team melee if you pick double race, say terran, do you get 400 supply? or still only 200?
nice br, but the animations were a little too big. try making only one next time. |
| #24 Ling-erie[94076] |
| igw-se.astra.com |
OMFG that was a long comment!!!!
BTW, credit where it's due, team-melee is REALLY hard to report, especially when they ALL start with one race. |
| #25 the()vermind[94088] |
| user-2ivebp0.dialup.mindspring.com |
| alright, this report, at best, was "ok." There was nothing stellar about this report, pictures were not the best, animations were a waste of d/l time, text was plain misleading. To tell the truth, I could never tell excactly what was going on. You should of cropped the animations, if the crop button doesen't work, do it manually. When making animations, you must consider what the battle you're animating is worth. If you can easily describe something with regular pictures, don't make an animation. 6, 7 at best, thank you for your time |
| #26 ground-LOBP-[94096] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
bwahahah I'm going to nitpick Ling to death! As follows:
grammer=grammar sentances=sentences garanteed=guaranteed blatently=blatantly anekdote=anecdote (although I'm not sure if that was an unintentional misspelling) sighn=sign *SIGH* sentances=sentences AGAIN sacrifised=sacrificed ammended=amended.
I'll forgive "colour" and "scrutinised", you obvious Canadian. And stop using so many damn hyphens!
w00t the Mad Proofreader strikes again! |
| #27 livingexception[94105] |
| spider-mtc-tg013.proxy.aol.com |
| English professer! |
| #28 ground-LOBP-[94106] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
| professor* |
| #29 ground-LOBP-[94107] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
| heh heh I just noticed that in #1 Monkey said "Plz only positive comments thanx!!!!"........ ooooooooops......... |
| #30 Ling-erie[94159] |
| igw-se.astra.com |
As an obvious canadian, i am actually ENGLISH, so "forgiving" colour when it is actually the corret spelling, wee then shove it where the sun doesn't shine plz.
All the rest, i don't care, and my 4-pooling own u on your gay 1v1 map, and it owns mep and ferret and the guy i did it to the other day (was it visual?)
Also, hyphens own you!
you may at some point want to comment on the report (if you've even read it), and no i don't proof-read my comments as i'm not out to impress anyone, just help the with constructive critisism.
A_Monkey owns you too |
| #31 ground-LOBP-[94172] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
| beware... the Mad Proofreader shall strike again!.... |
| #32 ground-LOBP-[94173] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
| oh and as for "you may at some point want to comment on the report (if you've even read it)", check #11 |
| #33 }DraginslayeR{[94180] |
| A080-1012.NYCM.splitrock.net |
oooo ouch, "A_Monkey owns you"
that hurts |
| #34 ground-LOBP-[94187] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
| not really, everybody owns me when it comes to sc :/ |
| #35 the()vermind[94218] |
| AC8BBC90.ipt.aol.com |
| shame really that a report by nobody was rated within hours of its release, a chess br got a 10 within the day that it was released, and this br remains... unrated. I sincerely hope that raters realize how unfair it is to reporters when reports that were released long after their own, are rated... This is not a legitimate example, it's just a shame that it hasn't been rated 3 days after its release. My record is 6 days, but I'm willing to see how long it takes... Well, I guess after the initial surge of excitement at becoming a rater, it becomes a job, and only the worthy ones require attention. If Al Gore wrote a br, you'd be as sure as hell that it would be rated within a day |
| #36 ground-LOBP-[94253] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
| Al Gore's br = a zero ("I demand a recount of those units! My score was definitely higher than my opponent's!") |
| #37 }DraginslayeR{[94258] |
| A100-0763.NYCM.splitrock.net |
| he'd get a 1, because he would just have the guts to go out in public |
| #38 Supercod[94300] |
| 63-224-56-250.customers.uswest.net |
Bush's BR: "My fight against the bears"
"I shot the bears, then I gassed the entire forest, then I ate rabbit stew for dinner.
"Will the highways on the internet become more few?"
"10" - Dref
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| #39 ground-LOBP-[94348] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
| i WISH bush would eat a gassed rabbit and die :/ |
| #40 }DraginslayeR{[94440] |
| A080-1053.NYCM.splitrock.net |
| who rated this?? |
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