| #1 Kepow'Ob[94958] |
| HSE-Montreal-ppp138742.sympatico.ca |
first :).
Hope you guys like it, I proof read it more than once this time, and I hope I caught a few more mistakes this time around. I also tried to keep the pictures smaller than last time, since there are more than in my last report, sorry if it takes awhile to load for you 56k and below people. |
| #2 LockEmDown[94959] |
| ool-18bfa73f.dyn.optonline.net |
| 2nd!! MWAHAHAHAH!! |
| #3 Fat-Geisha[94960] |
| ppp241.ivic.qc.ca |
| New layout owns. |
#4  [94961] |
| cb790950-b.elmhst1.il.home.com |
I'm duly impressed with your photo editor skills, though I think you should pick a standard format for all your pictures and stick with it instead of switching around.
Good job picking your game too.
I would say ummm... 8, yeah.
cheerio,
Dref
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| #5 Kepow'Ob[94973] |
| HSE-Montreal-ppp138742.sympatico.ca |
I realized I should stick with a standard layout after I finnished all the pictures. I was looking at other reports, then mine, and noticed that I should have stuck to a stardard image layout too.
My goal for this report was to get at least one 8, and I did, so I am kinda happy right now :).
Also, thanks for the nice comments on my editing skills. It's not as hard as you'd think, just have to have a lot of time and adobe photoshop 6. |
| #6 Anti-Progress[94974] |
| bay1-34.daktel.com |
| Cool pics |
| #7 ground-LOBP-[94976] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
"gettin_$um now started to fly some observers around, and quickly found (Tiamat)'s expansion on the top right island." No top right island on temple, buddy.
I need to start hiring myself out as a br proofreader, because a good 75%-80% of the people who do brs have spelling and grammar errors everywhere. In this one, as well as tons of other mistakes, there was the everpresent to/too/two and a substitution of "of" for "off". And it's not "comstat", it's "comsat".
Great Photoshop work, I loved it, good game to br. Discounting the poor command of English....
...8 |
| #8 mockdu[94979] |
| 209.77.65.18 |
| nice nice nice... danm.. all the good work is coming in.. well gotta go read now |
| #9 Hype[94983] |
| 212-149-237-24.sol-dial.gci.net |
| good effort, gw |
| #10 iggy[94986] |
| adsl-64-162-179-95.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
| @@ |
| #11 Kepow'Ob[94989] |
| HSE-Montreal-ppp138742.sympatico.ca |
Well, sorry about the mistakes, maybe next time I'll write the text in word first, then transfer it to my HTML program. I had a few people proof read it and they said nothing, and I am really surprised I didn't notice the top right island mistake, that was just stupid on my part.
Once again I will work on my grammar for my next report, and thanks for all the feedback, it helps a lot. |
| #12 [SM]Strega~F[94991] |
| proxy3.senet.com.au |
Well well well. Much better than first report. Drefsab gave you an 8, which means that you are lucky. (He hates me for no apparent reason.) Well deserving of the score. Pics owned. Writing was the only downfall. I suggest taking an English course at school/uni or wherever you are at in life. If the writing errors weren't there then I'd say a 9. Good work.
Strega |
| #13 ol little me[94993] |
| 193.150.237.241 |
| gw! |
| #14 Ling-erie[94998] |
| host213-122-214-23.btinternet.com |
| 1st rate eporting there, one thing i'd suggest is if u have a thin picture and no text to the side of it, centralise it. Otherwise, a soklid 8.5-9 imo. Thanx for a great read. |
| #15 Ling-erie[94999] |
| host213-122-214-23.btinternet.com |
also
ASDFDSFASDF i only have odobe photoshop 5 =[[[[[
still, it'll have to do |
| #16 BADKITTY![95000] |
| ss02.ny.us.ibm.com |
This is the first report in quite a while that held my attention long enough to be finished... except for skimooses reports of course.
Good work, I liked the pictures, but I especially liked the game, and the description of the monkeys in btw the pictures.
(non-report-comment:new layout sucks, i can't read brown text on black background) |
| #17 Lancer[95001] |
| dialup-166.90.228.172.Dial1.Detroit1.Level3.net |
| I thought even though gettin_$um still won, some of his tactics stank.... like when he sent dragoons to kill off the SCVs, what was he thinking?? Zealots do a much better job. If the only thing you have is dragoons, then you should attack the SCVs from a distance, and when the SCVs come to attack you run away. They will either 1) go back to base or 2) come chasing after you. If #1 is the case, do hit and run missions. If #2 is the case, either bring them to one of your defensive areas for slaughtering, or attack them when they end up in a straight line, if they get clumped up again, just start running again. Its the best SCV slaughtering technique against any resource muncher. |
| #18 NoSkillz-Terran[95004] |
| cc571807-a.owml1.md.home.com |
Good job! I give it a 8.
gettin_$um has the greatest lack of manners i've ever seen, and he drives me nut... but thats besides the point =)
Good Job, keep up the good work. |
| #19 Eradicate~Me[95007] |
| pa-millscreek2a-240.buf.adelphia.net |
| I never heard of these players |
| #20 Raider[95010] |
| netgate.exeter.edu |
Gettin_$um=Astic He's been smurfing under different names for a while, basically trying to be as obnoxious as possible^^
Good BR btw. 8
Watch repetitions. Phrases such as "took out with ease" appeared almost every time a battle took place. There were others too, so just proof read more and watch these things.
Raider |
| #21 -topgun-[95011] |
| 212.52.140.94 |
Sidenote: So far, I'm loving the new layout. It even makes my keyboard feel different...hmm.
I'm left with rehasing the other comments made by others since all the good/bad has been said. Well done.
One thing though is that you should try NOT to take the negative comments badly. Especially those comments made on your writing style, spelling, and grammer. Take it to heart, and you might soon get the ultimate honor here--Hall of Fame. Yahhh.
Happy gaming and CHEERS! |
| #22 Kepow'Ob[95014] |
| HSE-Montreal-ppp139530.sympatico.ca |
-topgun- (and everyone else): Trust me, I am listening to what everyone is saying, and have a few ideas on how to improve it for my next BR, which I will start working on next time I watch a game worth reporting on.
Thanks for the feedback from everyone, if anyone finds something else they like/don't like about my reports, please tell me so I can fix it in my next one. |
| #23 ground-LOBP-[95015] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
| spelling 'grammar' wrong makes you look like an idiot :/ |
| #24 RecklessRodent[95021] |
| cache-1.sbo.ma.webcache.rcn.net |
Drefsab: Cheerio? What the hell happened to Cheers! Or is this new with the layout. Grr, some things shouldn't be changed.
Anyway, great report man. Yummy pictures |
| #25 ~SuperBeastMan~[95078] |
| spider-mtc-tc042.proxy.aol.com |
Hey, nice report, who cares bout grammar and all that, all I say is, if this came out after batch, why no replay? I wanna watch this cool map! Oh, and those pictures got me excited.
BTW: This is my first comment on BR.com and I've only been reading for while but, how the hell do you get into Nohunters? I want in it but I never can find it! Help me plz! |
| #26 ~SuperBeastMan~[95079] |
| spider-mtc-tc042.proxy.aol.com |
| Now I look like a dork, batch batch batch!! Woohoo! My bad yall, patch. |
| #27 Spuzz[95082] |
| 63.175.166.49 |
Very good report; I enjoyed it thoroughly. You seemed to have a good grasp on the action throughout the entire game. I'm looking forward to reading more of your Reports!
Spuzz
P.S. ~SuperBeastMan~: It's channel clan ~nohunters |
| #28 Kepow'Ob[95083] |
| HSE-Montreal-ppp138714.sympatico.ca |
Thank a lot for all the positve feedback again :). Why no replay? Well, I don't know, after spending several hours writing a BR, I don't want to just go and throw up a replay of the same thing.
P.S. Please don't start the "why bother making BRs anymore" argument. |
| #29 derek[95089] |
| tcache-mtc-tc01.proxy.aol.com |
| great shit dude ,keep up the good work |
| #30 MasturNate[95095] |
| gallium.remote.qx.net |
for Raider and anyone else who believes so, I can assure you that gettin_$um is not Astic
-- Nate |
| #31 CrackHeadJeb[95132] |
| pppwb14.htc.net |
5 zealot rush instead of early dragoons to bust the wallin? I know who that is. ;)
Drefsab and Raider pretty much hit on everything that I was going to say. (standard format, watch repetitions)
Great players, good game, nice report.
-CHJ |
| #32 triped[95174] |
| cf2.utc.com |
/join clan ~nohunters
good report, but you spelled defense wrong (my pet peeve) |
| #33 STi[M]Med[95212] |
| modem24.tc-1pool.directinter.net |
| Not too shabby.. |
| #34 MasturNate[95294] |
| dysprosium.remote.qx.net |
triped, he didn't spell "defense" wrong...."defence" is the accept British spelling for the American word "defense"
...unless you're trying to be funny and say that there's only one spelling....
-- Nate |
| #35 Kepow'Ob[95357] |
| HSE-Montreal-ppp140204.sympatico.ca |
I didn't think I spelt it wrong, and looked over the BR just to make sure, and never saw it, and since I am canadian, we spell it the same way as the brits, its you crazy americans who spell everything all funky :P.
Anyway, thanks for the positive feedback, my next BR should be up some time next week |
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