| #1 Annihilator[96366] |
| ras3-p11.jlm.netvision.net.il |
| Hehe... |
| #2 ThanatoZ[96367] |
| edslppp155.spkn.uswest.net |
| 1st non-author! sweet... now to read =D |
| #3 Annihilator[96368] |
| ras3-p11.jlm.netvision.net.il |
| Reading is what it's all about... wait, did I say that out loud? |
| #4 Hype[96369] |
| 86-149-237-24.sol-dial.gci.net |
| early comment |
| #5 DroneD[96371] |
| pD9575EB6.dip.t-dialin.net |
"Joe could see a Zealot riding on a Mutalisk"
Hm, that actually made me laugh... But otherwise... it was kinda boring. I want a real BR!!!! lol |
| #6 Khas[96376] |
| ool-18ba98a3.dyn.optonline.net |
| Note to author: I wouldn't suggest calling something "Part 2" if Part 1 was over 1000 reports ago =/ |
| #7 |Sniper(|)Wolf|[96379] |
| wpg-141-33-res1.mts.net |
Ok writing style, but far, far too short. Could have been a lot better if I knew what the hell was suppost to be going on, the point of the story, or it had little things like a plot, length, or interesting characters, but yeah overall pretty good.
:P
4 |
| #8 CaughtNaked[96383] |
| spider-wf084.proxy.aol.com |
hmmm, i think a 4 or 5 would fit this well. Not that it was horrible, just, it didn't have anything to put it over the top.
t2yl,
~CN |
| #9 Maltara[96387] |
| ch7smc.bellglobal.com |
Who is this mofo clogging up our battle reports? Just kidding, it's nice to see something other than 23587234 replays posted! The story worked for a short story - but I think adding at least one counter character into the scheme of things would make it flow better, and make it not seem like things just focus on Joe.
Don't stop writing - you'll learn to write better with more experience.
Maltara ^_^ |
| #10 Psyonic_Reaver[96399] |
| 1Cust164.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
This is
A waste of my time sorry. |
| #11 Annihilator[96423] |
| ras1-p411.jlm.netvision.net.il |
| Bleah... lol |
| #12 Vivianne[96510] |
| backproxy.inter.net.il |
dude.. it sucked...
lets play 1v1 so you'll be able to report it..okay ? =] |
| #13 Annihilator[96513] |
| ras2-p136.jlm.netvision.net.il |
| ok, Vivianne. But there's a problem. You see, someone named Lisa came here last night (she comes here every night... kind of intimate). Anyway, she was so wild that she threw me on the comp, and now the CD doesn't quite work right. So we won't be able to play it until I fix it. |
| #14 Vivanne_harder[96530] |
| backproxy.inter.net.il |
Don't lie!
so what if your br skills sucks! (almost as my english skills.)
it's not my fault no be quite else i'll call raul and tell him to wipe you! =] |
| #15 pureghetto[96547] |
| 24.100.102.120.on.wave.home.com |
| report real games, not this tripe. I hate this, no matter how good the writing. |
| #16 Vivianne _The_Animals_fucker[96552] |
| backproxy.inter.net.il |
Jonsi u stupid bitch!
y did't u came today?~
we was 4 ppl.. lol =[
i went at 8:00 didn't waited the elsson to start ...
bitch
lol the "report" got 4 ;) |
| #17 Annihilator[96555] |
| ras2-p89.jlm.netvision.net.il |
lol, there was no school today for anyone who doesn't do anything in the evening. Aww, too bad you didn't know! hehehe!
pureghetto - No one forces you to read these stories... |
| #18 Vivianne~i~want~you[96630] |
| backproxy.inter.net.il |
Bitch don't talk to me ever sagain..]
u even didn't all to tell me?! |
| #19 Annihilator[166452] |
| CBL217-132-232-251.bb.netvision.net.il |
| I have to say that this one is actually pretty good. |
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