| #1 DivvyO[96553] |
| 162.119.232.100 |
| And so the battle has been one. |
| #2 Franklin James[96554] |
| mkc-65-28-49-6.kc.rr.com |
| Second, I 0wn n0thing |
| #3 Khas[96556] |
| ool-18ba98a3.dyn.optonline.net |
Well, at least you re-submitted to fix the layout. Still, your spelling and grammar errors were unacceptable, and you didn't really give much of a plotline that I could see.
2. |
| #4 Capsule(DDC)[96561] |
| CS-C101H.mslab.usna.edu |
And so the battle has been two.
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| #5 Capsule(DDC)[96562] |
| CS-C101H.mslab.usna.edu |
Troop 2 - “Use that DETONATOR TROOP3”
Troop 2 - “Holly shit... TROOP3 GET YOUR ASS YOUR OUT OF THERE!”
hmmm, i guess they don't have real names.
this was horrible now that ive read it. swords, phyamic claws, and super shotguns. dude, this sucked. |
| #6 [ls]:Squad[96563] |
| h000094c7d4a8.ne.mediaone.net |
gay...Tusken Raiders are hermits from star wars you fag. wtf was this about? No plot, no character set up, no real description, and you sound too lazy to even create names for your characters. Plz, also file his under "other" cuz this really has nothin to do with whatever. god you suck.
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| #7 ~STIM~007[96571] |
| 1Cust99.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
| Um. yaaaaaaaa. Work on the story line a bit. just only A BIT. |
| #8 WarLeaderJustin[96572] |
| adsl-64-166-109-253.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
| GET THE EVIL OUT OF MY EYE SOCKETS! |
| #9 Khas[96576] |
| ool-18ba98a3.dyn.optonline.net |
| Who the hell gave this a 4??? Deserves a 2 at most. |
| #10 Scarab[96577] |
| tcache-mtc-th01.proxy.aol.com |
| Jesus christ you are not meant to be |
| #11 Taragnor[96579] |
| h002078cb09e1.ne.mediaone.net |
| Yeah I gotta say this was pretty bad. At the very least you could have thought up names for these miscellaneous "troops" or make some effort to explain why they refer to each other by number. |
| #12 )(V)(aster[96584] |
| spider-te051.proxy.aol.com |
| Can you give me the 5 minutes of my life you wasted back PLZ...! |
| #13 Samlethe[96588] |
| d3o833.telia.com |
| Stop whining, this is serious SHIT!!! |
| #14 [GoW]-Striker[96596] |
| h24-68-219-102.cg.shawcable.net |
I hope you all got a good laughing out of this ;). I wrote this story 2 years ago out of sheer boredom. So I figured I might as well post it here and see what kind of reaction I would get out of all of you. It's pretty sad I know but I've written better stuff recently.
Any way enjoy :) |
| #15 [Flood][96597] |
| C119n.mslab.usna.edu |
enjoy? plz read the above comments. and i hope u are 8 years old, because this MIGHT pass for a 6 year olds writing.
Sincerely,
Flood |
| #16 [GoW]-Striker[96625] |
| h24-68-219-102.cg.shawcable.net |
Incase you didn't understand my above comment please understand this, "I wasn't expecting much, maybe a laugh or two at a crude story worth nothing that I made up of thin air". I also like cake =)
Regards,
Durin Brown |
| #17 isuckdontclap[96794] |
| dialcache2.infowest.net |
| My reports got a 5, I got nothing else to say. |
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