| #1 ZeonPeon[97409] |
| cr862712-a.ym1.on.wave.home.com |
| 1ST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| #2 RubiksCube[97410] |
| platz17.pags.de |
| 2nd |
| #3 Ling-erie[97411] |
| igw-se.astra.com |
| medic sex > u |
| #4 RubiksCube[97412] |
| platz17.pags.de |
Nice style of writing. Due to the "Gangsta-Style" the sheer mass of spelling/grammar mistakes didnt to much damage.
Refreshing, but kinda reminds me of Heartcutters style.
Easy 6, could even be 7 |
| #5 RubiksCube[97413] |
| platz17.pags.de |
| "didnt do" |
#6  [97414] |
| papaya.fgm.com |
| When you write an all-text report, spelling, grammar, and flow become that much more important because there are no pictures to distract the television generation from what's going on in the story, so make sure you proofread everything and also you should try reading the story out loud after you write it because then you can determine which sentences are too long, which are possible run-ons, and find accidentally dropped words which is important because run-ons and paragraph-long sentences really destroy the reading experience and prevent the reader from appreciating it since it's like reading a book you know but translated by someone who doesn't quite get the feel of the English language, and that's not cool, so if a sentence is too long to be completed in one breath, you may want to shorten it, but otherwise this was a pretty good effort, especially for a first one, so Cheers! |
| #7 AoS[97416] |
| nav-34d.dsl.navpoint.com |
| Um....while this title might encourage newbies to join games, it doesn't encourage me to read battlereports. |
| #8 KissBlade[97417] |
| 209.187.171.43 |
| Hmm, thanx ppl. : ) Keep in mind, I'm a New Yorker so I can be stubborn with my writing sometimes. Well, I'll see if I ever find another game I wanna br. |
| #9 KissBlade[97418] |
| 209.187.171.43 |
| well you read it didn't you? *smiles* |
| #10 willwinforfood[97419] |
| ool-18b81465.dyn.optonline.net |
i'm a new yawker[sic] too and i write fine..i think.
-wwff |
| #11 Khas[97426] |
| ool-18ba98a3.dyn.optonline.net |
| ROFL ~CB~, I think I'm the only person so far who understood your joke ;) |
| #12 Kerpow'Ob[97427] |
| ch5blm.bellglobal.com |
I read most of it and I found the spelling a bit annoying by the end. I agree mostly with what CB wrote.
On a similar note, I just want to say how CB is doing a great job now that he is back. No matter how bad the report (not that yours is that bad), he always seems to find something good about it. I'm happy one of the raters is actual going into so much detail about their rating, and explaining how to do better next time on almost every report. |
| #13 Khas[97428] |
| ool-18ba98a3.dyn.optonline.net |
Erm...wtf does being a new yorker have to do with your writing style?
foolio. |
| #14 luae42[97432] |
| 64-60-21-42-cust.telepacific.net |
HAHAHAHAHA ROFL
QUOTE ~CB~!
That made my day. =P |
| #15 Kepow'Ob[97435] |
| ch5blm.bellglobal.com |
| Be one hell of a long quote. |
| #16 )(V)(aster[97444] |
| spider-wk073.proxy.aol.com |
| HaHa ~CB~ Your comment = 10 |
| #17 )(V)(aster[97445] |
| spider-wk073.proxy.aol.com |
| BTW Hell of a way to prove a point... |
| #18 [97450] |
| ip169.herndon38.va.pub-ip.psi.net |
| Thanks folks, but don't forget the efforts of people like Dr. A... he does a much better job than I at attending to every BR and providing helpful information. |
| #19 )(V)(aster[97458] |
| spider-wk022.proxy.aol.com |
| BTW An english teacher of mine once showed me a properly written sentence that lasted almost 3 pages long, And it was so hard to read... It isnt all about run-on but simply entertaining the reader, So try and pause for their sake whenever you can... |
| #20 Raiddx[97460] |
| px2nr.wp.shawcable.net |
Woo Hoo, I'm on battlereports.com
Oh wait, this happens to be one of the worst games I've played in months. Thanks Kissblade.
Oh, and this Saturday I want to play you 1v1 again after our tourney matches. Oh, that's right, you got taken out in your first match of the tournament. Tough luck, I suppose.
P.S. Sorry about the cheap shot, but I'm just embarrassed about how I played that game and how it's available for the whole world to point and laugh. |
| #21 KissBlade[97486] |
| 209.187.169.63 |
| Actually you havent' done that bad compared to the 7K mineral surplus. Your nuking did provide the turning point of the game as there was no way Niga could replace the troops at that point. Mind you, everyone makes mistakes in games. If nobody did, we'd all be able to beat Grrr ... besides, I think it's one of these games that ppl can look back on later and smile about how silly they did in some situations "back than". Sides, if you want to see bad mistakes and dumb moves, I can show you some replays where I lost horrifically. : ) |
| #22 sau[98049] |
| imsbbcf01c.netvigator.com |
| Hi there |
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