| #1 +Mep+[98212] |
| 24.245.3.1 |
| Bloody hell. It wouldn't be a report by me if there wasn't something wrong with it. = I have no clue what the deal with that broken image is, it showed up ok in preview...asdf. |
| #2 Hype[98213] |
| 170-148-237-24.sol-dial.gci.net |
| well i may as well grap 1st nonauthor |
| #3 CaugtNaked[98214] |
| spider-mtc-tc062.proxy.aol.com |
go mep! nice br...10 more mins reading over it, fixing up a few typos and making it flow a lil better. the only other thing is that the html needed a lil love'n but other than that it ruled!
7
t2yl8r,
~CN |
| #4 Syndrome_Zed[98215] |
| P124-Dell.Stanford.EDU |
Nice! For the most part, it was easy to keep up with what was going on in the game. The pics were a nice aid, and didn't interfere with the text narration. And a pretty good game as well.
Yeah, there were a couple minor typos or misspellings, but nothing that really throws you - except maybe "greated"/"greeted" :).
Regarding comment #1 - at least now you have something to distinguish your reports from all the others ;).
|
| #5 ground-LOBP-[98216] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
flow was decent, writing was so-so
english errors were eveywhere
you spelled dra's name wrong
while i have been known to bitch about picless brs (although not always, see dagomar's recent battlereport), pics do not a br make.
4 |
| #6 LizardKudzu[98217] |
| 204.29.64.53 |
Hmm...errors here and there. Only two things I really didn't like were the inconsistency of the names DocA/Dra and droped/illgetdrped. Also, for some reason I just hate the first picture, the PeeWee face needed to be larger as did the Teletubee. Everything else seemed ok. I'd give it a 7.
LK~ |
| #7 'Final`Flare'[98218] |
| spider-tq041.proxy.aol.com |
Not bad.
Could have been a little longer, and there were some errors. I noticed how you switched between 'DocA' to 'DrA' quite often. It seemed like you just wanted to get the BR over, as you simply put many battles "he got raped, and he brings some guys and rapes him" "some seiges here, some tanks here are cliffing here" I think you could have done better in that area.
Otherwise, a very enjoyable read. Keep it up.
:)
|
| #8 Psyonic_Reaver[98219] |
| 1Cust207.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
What happened to the early game? You just said Dr.A massed Goths then stormed the middle, or maybe that was the early game............. Anyway what I was going to say has already been said so I give you my score.
6.0-6.5 |
| #9 |]agomar[98220] |
| Ottawa-ppp3517250.sympatico.ca |
| Nice br, if low on substance . . . you could've improved the english . . . I'd say a good 7. |
| #10 +Mep+[98221] |
| 24.245.3.1 |
| Omfg, loosen up your anus a bit there ground. If i wanted your opinion i woulda shoved a cow up your ass and beat it outta you. Jesus.....anyway. Thanks everyone else who doesn't deserve to go to hell....asdf. I know i switched between the names, it wasn't an accident, I didn't figure it'd be such a big deal. And one more time for good luck...fuck you ground. |
| #11 'Final`Flare'[98222] |
| spider-to043.proxy.aol.com |
Um... calm down a little there mep. Ground said what everybody else said, unless I read his post wrong. If you post a BR, expect some honest critisism.
|
| #12 +Mep+[98223] |
| 24.245.3.1 |
| Well he only put it a little harshly sir. And a 4? Eh. |
| #13 ground-LOBP-[98224] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
| I did not enjoy reading this battlereport. |
| #14 Illgetdroped[98225] |
| dialup-209.246.98.126.Dial1.NewYork1.Level3.net |
| amm hi there,, br was good.. but, u did skip alot and missed quite alot of the game... but otherwise good, gw |
| #15 skimoose[98227] |
| hoproxy.proxy.lucent.com |
I would have to agree with ground on this one. The beginning was all messed up because of HTML errors. Then, going from build orders to a player massing goliaths caused some confusion. I mainly skimmed the rest, noting some errors in spelling and grammar. Good effort though.
5 |
| #16 |]agomar[98228] |
| StCatherines-ppp109100.sympatico.ca |
| If you get mad, make it cold anger. Hot fury makes you look like an idiot and makes those who rate/read your br give you lower marks and like you less. No offense. |
| #17 +Mep+[98231] |
| nic-245-c3-1.mn.mediaone.net |
| Eh, you're right |]ag. I overreacted. =[. Ah well...just think it was a bit harsh, and it goes back beyond that comment....asdf. |
| #18 Psyonic_Reaver[98233] |
| 1Cust108.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
| Dont worry. We still love you. |
| #19 livingexception[98235] |
| spider-wo081.proxy.aol.com |
| The problem with this is that it was slightly...vauge. The battles weren't very descriptive. The more you write though, the more text you can wrap aorund those images. Speakin of, were you workin off Paint, cause most shots were simple rectangles? Just work on the writing (learn to BS a report to make it longer; also a useful skill in Englsih class!) and clean up those pics and it'll be good stuff. |
| #20 [SM]Strega~F[98236] |
| proxy6.senet.com.au |
It might just be my gay computer, but about halfway through the report you have 2 pictures right next to each other. That is fine, but some of the text was covered by the first picture, as (I'm assuming here) the text was wrapped around the second one. If you wanted them next to each other, with the words underneath, just use <center> and </center> before and after the affected area. The type <br> or <p>, followed by whatever you wanted to appear underneath the pictures.
Ok, the report was, well, not so good on the details. I would have to agree with ground (except maybe 5 or 6 for rating. Not a 4) on this. A little more love and attention would help these greatly. Good luck with your next one!
Strega |
| #21 Ling-erie[98238] |
| igw-se.astra.com |
What strega said....
u have to use BR tags to shift the text down line by line till it clearts the pics.
Basically though, if u report a game, DON'T SUM UP THE FINAL ALL-DECISIVE BATTLE INTO ONLY 2 ANTI-CLIMACTIC SENTANCES!!!!!
soooo many ppl go "and he sent his army to meet mine in the centre, i crushed it and ran over his base and he left"
that's not a good BR ending, although the rest of the report was good. Also, I can't post till monday/tuesday u'll be happy to hear.
anyway, i'd give it probably a 6, i'm not sure what more. |
#22  [98240] |
| papaya.fgm.com |
It was good enough, but more than a little haphazard. It feels like the novelty of writing a BR wore off as time went on, and eventually you just wanted to get it over with. When that happens, just take a couple days off and start fresh (replays give you no excuse not to, these days...)
Cheers. |
| #23 |]agomar[98246] |
| Ottawa-ppp3517243.sympatico.ca |
| Ya . . . a 4 was too harsh. Everything what Bruiser said =) |
| #24 -{KoA}-Insomnia[98256] |
| spider-ntc-tc071.proxy.aol.com |
the title name sucked for this replay
i look for color(only read brown ones), rating, title, then author
or sometimes i mix it around but i always look at these 4 things when i go into a battlereport |
| #25 -{KoA}-Insomnia[98257] |
| spider-ntc-tc071.proxy.aol.com |
| now i'm reading the report and ill say that whenever people make the main text white and there's a white guy in the battlereport, right away it always makes me think white's going to win |
| #26 -{KoA}-Insomnia[98260] |
| spider-ntc-tc071.proxy.aol.com |
| oh, i get it, it's like zerglings and mutalisks versus hydralisks isn't it? |
| #27 -{KoA}-Insomnia[98261] |
| spider-ntc-tc071.proxy.aol.com |
i like how he changed the names for the players, it was cool
the report woulda been a little more boring with the same players having the same exact name the whole time
i was gonna type a whole bunch of stuff about the guys name and what other people said and stuff, but i'll just say who the heck is the guy in this sentence, "you spelled dra's name wrong"? did he mean to say bra? was he talking about the battlereporter? WHO??? |
| #28 -{KoA}-Insomnia[98262] |
| spider-ntc-tc071.proxy.aol.com |
| yeah, i know he was talking about the blue guy in this battlereport but at first i couldn't figure it out |
| #29 ground-LOBP-[98280] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
| dra = DrA = DrAwesome |
| #30 ground-LOBP-[98281] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
| ok, i'll give. i re-read and i think this is worth a 5 but the constant english mistakes, bad formatting and mediocre flow dragged it way down. |
| #31 rendralisk[101542] |
| access-216-9-205-128.firstinter.net |
| be back for thanksgiving all later |
Home
Forum
Starcraft Tournaments
